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Kiddian States
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Requesting Feedback

Postby Kiddian States » Sat May 14, 2022 11:38 am

Hello
I normally wouldn’t do this, but after several of my issues haven’t received very much feedback, even after awhile since posting
So, could someone please give feedback on the following issues:
I Myth You Already
Causing A Nativity Scene
An Electrifying Debate
Oligarchy or Malarkey?
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Candensia
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Postby Candensia » Sat May 14, 2022 12:03 pm

Hi Kiddian States,

I know it can be frustrating when a draft isn't attracting as much feedback as you'd like. About this time of year many GI regulars that attend school or college may be occupied with exams.

While you wait for feedback, I recommend browsing the drafting threads of accepted issues. See if there's anything addressed in comments that you can use to improve your own issues. If you make notable changes, feel free to periodically bump your drafts.
The Free Joy State wrote:Time spent working on writing skills -- even if the draft doesn't work -- is never wasted.

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Kiddian States
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Postby Kiddian States » Sat May 14, 2022 12:37 pm

Candensia wrote:Hi Kiddian States,

I know it can be frustrating when a draft isn't attracting as much feedback as you'd like. About this time of year many GI regulars that attend school or college may be occupied with exams.

While you wait for feedback, I recommend browsing the drafting threads of accepted issues. See if there's anything addressed in comments that you can use to improve your own issues. If you make notable changes, feel free to periodically bump your drafts.

I’m sorry, I just didn’t want my drafts (ones I’m rather proud of) to get ignored
And wdym by that last thing?
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Postby Candensia » Sat May 14, 2022 12:53 pm

Kiddian States wrote:
Candensia wrote:Hi Kiddian States,

I know it can be frustrating when a draft isn't attracting as much feedback as you'd like. About this time of year many GI regulars that attend school or college may be occupied with exams.

While you wait for feedback, I recommend browsing the drafting threads of accepted issues. See if there's anything addressed in comments that you can use to improve your own issues. If you make notable changes, feel free to periodically bump your drafts.

I’m sorry, I just didn’t want my drafts (ones I’m rather proud of) to get ignored
And wdym by that last thing?



While waiting for feedback, you can scan through the drafting threads of other authors. Many writers expierence similar problems, so if editors or veteran authors make comments, examine those comments to see if you can learn anything or apply the guidance in your own drafts.
The Free Joy State wrote:Time spent working on writing skills -- even if the draft doesn't work -- is never wasted.

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Postby Outer Sparta » Sat May 14, 2022 3:04 pm

Kiddian States wrote:
Candensia wrote:Hi Kiddian States,

I know it can be frustrating when a draft isn't attracting as much feedback as you'd like. About this time of year many GI regulars that attend school or college may be occupied with exams.

While you wait for feedback, I recommend browsing the drafting threads of accepted issues. See if there's anything addressed in comments that you can use to improve your own issues. If you make notable changes, feel free to periodically bump your drafts.

I’m sorry, I just didn’t want my drafts (ones I’m rather proud of) to get ignored
And wdym by that last thing?

You can look at other people's drafts and learn from them. Since you are relatively new looking at drafts, especially those by editors, will help you get a grasp on the standards and level of writing.
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Postby Jutsa » Sat May 14, 2022 6:58 pm

You're also welcome to help out with others' drafts too, if you'd like. It's easier said than done, particularly if you're newer to writing, but a little bit goes a long way in helping others' drafts and GI as a whole. And who knows - someone might just return the favor. ;)
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