[DRAFT] Are Pego bricks dangerous?

[Net Cas]

The talking point: Several people have been hospitalized after stepping on Pego bricks. Victims and lobbyist have stormed your office demanding action.
1. "Common leader OUCH its their fault is they ste- OUCH p of Pego bricks" Says a Pego lobbyist as @@persons gender @@ steps on a Pego bricks your 7 year old niece left in your office." You should instead OUCH give us a tax bre-OUCH the sentence ends as the lobbyist falls on the floor from the pain and is sent to the hospital.
Result: Cocking hazard sings have been replaced with funeral vouchers.
2. " My little Timmy has been sent to the hospital because he stepped on a Pego brick".Says a distrust @@ mom or dad @@." You force these evil companies to pay us parents for any damages caused to kids.
Result: Parents of kids with paper cuts have been know to get millions @@ currency of country @@

[Tinhampton]

So your solution to people stepping on toys is either to roll out a tax cut or require the toy manufacturers to compensate affected families? (Also, there is no @@DAD@@ macro.)

[Prusmia]

The talking point: Several people have been hospitalized after stepping on Pego bricks. Victims and lobbyist have stormed your office demanding action.
1. "Common leader OUCH its their fault is they ste- OUCH Suggestion: p of Pego bricks" Says a Pego lobbyist as @@persons gender @@ steps on a Pego bricks your 7 year old niece left in your office." You should instead OUCH give us a tax bre-OUCH the sentence ends as the lobbyist falls on the floor from the pain and is sent to the hospital.
Result: Cocking hazard sings have been replaced with funeral vouchers.

Suggestion: (see below)

2. " My little Timmy has been sent to the hospital because he stepped on a Pego brick".Says a distrust @@ mom or dad @@." Suggestion:You force these evil companies to pay us parents for any damages caused to kids.
Result: Parents of kids with paper cuts have been know to get millions @@ currency of country @@

1. The lobbyist here should be plural,
2. You can use the macro, @@LEADER@@

Suggestion: This p seems out of place, the first time I saw it it looked like you just typed a random p in there. I would put something like: "its their fault if they ST- OUCH -ep..."

3. This should be on not of,
4. This is not a macro, you need to use a gendermacro such as @@randomnamemale@@ or @@randomnamefemale@@ to use one of the @@he@@/@@him@@/@@his@@ or @@she@@/@@her@@/@@hers@@

Suggestion: There should probably be an option here, every issue should have an inbetween. Maybe have a medical worker who is coming to pick up the lobbyist say something along the line of "Why don't you just have them make them safer?"

5. This shouldn't be distrust, it should be distressed.
6. @@mom or dad@@ is not a macro, use @@man@@ or @@woman@@

Suggestion: The line, "Evil companies" seems a bit out of place, it makes it sound (at least to me) as if the person speaking say that all companies are bad. Maybe just say Pego or "Those pathetic businessman"

7. this macro is just @@currency@@

Pardon my bad labeling of things with color

[Catalonia 2070 RP]

The talking point: Several people have been hospitalized after stepping on Pego bricks. Victims and lobbyist have stormed your office demanding action.
1. "Common leader OUCH its their fault is they ste- OUCH p of Pego bricks" Says a Pego lobbyist as @@persons gender @@ steps on a Pego bricks your 7 year old niece left in your office." You should instead OUCH give us a tax bre-OUCH the sentence ends as the lobbyist falls on the floor from the pain and is sent to the hospital.
Result: Cocking hazard sings have been replaced with funeral vouchers.

Suggestion: (see below)

2. " My little Timmy has been sent to the hospital because he stepped on a Pego brick".Says a distrust @@ mom or dad @@." Suggestion:You force these evil companies to pay us parents for any damages caused to kids.
Result: Parents of kids with paper cuts have been know to get millions @@ currency of country @@

1. The lobbyist here should be plural,
2. You can use the macro, @@LEADER@@
3. Not sure why there's a random p here.
4. This should be on not of,
5. This is not a macro, you need to use a gendermacro such as @@randomnamemale@@ or @@randomnamefemale@@ to use one of the @@he@@/@@him@@/@@his@@ or @@she@@/@@her@@/@@hers@@

Suggestion: There should probably be an option here, every issue should have an inbetween. Maybe have a medical worker who is coming to pick up the lobbyist say something along the line of "Why don't you just have them make them safer?"

6. This shouldn't be distrust, it should be distressed.
7. @@mom or dad@@ is not a macro, use @@man@@ or @@woman@@

Suggestion: The line, "Evil companies" seems a bit out of place, it makes it sound (at least to me) as if the person speaking say that all companies are bad. Maybe just say Pego or "Those pathetic businessman"

8. this macro is just @@currency@@

Pardon my bad labeling of things with color

I think the random P is a continuation of the interrupted "ste-"

[Outer Sparta]

Read this guide to help you get the format down and the basics of how to write an issue: viewtopic.php?f=13&t=424657

Edit: also why is this a national issue? The sharpness of Lego blocks shouldn't be anything of concern; after all it's the personal responsibility of the user not to step on one or know not to use it as a prank (there obviously are people who would do that). Perhaps the sharpness and safety of toys for young children could be a better angle to work with, and that would have some good potential.