
by Zarulia » Fri Jul 16, 2021 10:54 pm

by Molopovia » Fri Jul 16, 2021 10:57 pm
by USS Monitor » Sun Jul 18, 2021 1:49 am

by Zarulia » Mon Jul 19, 2021 12:55 am
USS Monitor wrote:Come up with a more interesting story besides "an issue ended up on your desk and you called your advisors." Maybe something went comically wrong because your military's computers were out of date. Like maybe a missile hit something other than its intended target because the targeting system was old and shitty. Maybe some troops didn't get their orders because the commanding officer's computer crashed.
The options are the best part of this draft.
The effect lines could use more humor.

by Zarulia » Mon Jul 19, 2021 1:27 am
Molopovia wrote:I feel the description is lacking.
USS Monitor wrote:Come up with a more interesting story besides "an issue ended up on your desk and you called your advisors." Maybe something went comically wrong because your military's computers were out of date. Like maybe a missile hit something other than its intended target because the targeting system was old and shitty. Maybe some troops didn't get their orders because the commanding officer's computer crashed.
The options are the best part of this draft.
The effect lines could use more humor.

by Outer Sparta » Mon Jul 19, 2021 7:40 am
by USS Monitor » Mon Jul 19, 2021 10:58 am
Outer Sparta wrote:I would advise you to use a catchy title that fits your issue premise. Your current one doesn't stand out and is quite vague.

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