Megistos wrote:[desc] Your Minister of Science, @@RANDOMNAME(1)@@, has made plans for creating a space colony on the moon, with intentions of much more focus into space exploration.
Your Minister of Science has proposed plans for creating a moon base; to be used as a staging post for further space exploration and even a possible future colony.
That's how I would phrase the intro.
Megistos wrote:However, many people think that it would have no profitable gain if executed.
Not necessary this bit, we know other people will have dissenting views. Get rid of it.
Megistos wrote:Will there be aliens? Will there be a planet like ours?
Change "will there be" to "are there".
I think option 2 needs to be a bit clearer as to how a multi-national cooperation will benefit all of humanity.