Nooooooooooooooo wrote:/bump
I say that you submit it. You never know how good it will do until you try it.
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by United Hemand Insia » Mon Nov 16, 2020 11:47 am
Nooooooooooooooo wrote:/bump
by Nooooooooooooooo » Mon Nov 16, 2020 12:31 pm
by United Hemand Insia » Mon Nov 16, 2020 12:31 pm
by Nooooooooooooooo » Tue Nov 17, 2020 10:41 am
by Nooooooooooooooo » Tue Nov 17, 2020 10:52 am
Megistos wrote:Why would your defense minister be building a tank in your office? Maybe change it to blueprints? Just suggesting, of course. Nice work, tho.
by Nooooooooooooooo » Tue Nov 17, 2020 11:58 am
by Nooooooooooooooo » Wed Nov 18, 2020 1:14 pm
by Nooooooooooooooo » Thu Nov 19, 2020 1:43 pm
by Nooooooooooooooo » Fri Nov 20, 2020 11:11 pm
by Australian rePublic » Sat Nov 21, 2020 12:26 am
by Nooooooooooooooo » Sat Nov 21, 2020 1:37 am
Australian rePublic wrote:Good Luck
by Australian rePublic » Sat Nov 21, 2020 2:18 am
by Electrum » Sat Nov 21, 2020 3:03 am
SherpDaWerp wrote:More than omit the references, though, the dilemma needs to feel more like it's its own dilemma. Space terrorism could be an incredibly interesting issue (that can tangentially reference Among Us or Cluedo or whatever) and this doesn't quite encapsulate that feeling.
by Nooooooooooooooo » Mon Nov 23, 2020 2:04 pm
Electrum wrote:Apologies for being late but I think the premise needs work.
We have no idea why Nassland wants to bomb us, and it's just not a compelling premise given that we don't even know the information is even credible in the first place. Choosing the second option seems like the most obvious choice, of course we need more information. We don't even know who Nassland is! This is just another x wants to nuke us premise, except this time it's in space -- so the stakes are going to be lower than say the missile crisis chain that Pogaria recently released.
I suggest reworking it along Sherp's lines (emphasis added):SherpDaWerp wrote:More than omit the references, though, the dilemma needs to feel more like it's its own dilemma. Space terrorism could be an incredibly interesting issue (that can tangentially reference Among Us or Cluedo or whatever) and this doesn't quite encapsulate that feeling.
by Nooooooooooooooo » Tue Dec 01, 2020 2:29 pm
by Westinor » Mon Dec 07, 2020 11:34 pm
[desc] Some of your spies have uncovered a story about one of @@NAME@@'s long-standing allies and trade partners, Nassland, that has plans to bomb the @@DEMONYMADJECTIVE@@ Space Station within the next two months. It was presumed that they might send a missile towards the station. This story has caused pandemonium within the Capitol, with many people suggesting solutions.
We must launch a full-scale attack as soon as possible! They threaten us, we threaten them!" @@HE_1@@ proceeds to mutter nuclear codes, as if @@HE_1@@ is trying to remember them.
"We don't even know if the bombing is actually gonna happen. For all we know, Nassland might not even have nukes. So, I don't think we should jump to conclusions yet. Maybe we could send more spies over to see if there really is evidence. And if there isn't, then we can forget about the whole thing."
[option] "Why don't we just let it go?" suggests your Minister of Whatever, @@RANDOMNAME_3@@, as fiddling with a toy rocket. "After all, it was just a space station. We already have documents and recordings of people's experiences up there, so it's not like we need any more. Besides, if we really cared about them, we'd put a restaurant up there. How about a McZargald's? A Bonker Kong? What about Wordy's?" @@HE_3@@ drones on and on, listing fast food restaurants as @@HE_3@@ goes.
by Nooooooooooooooo » Fri Jan 08, 2021 2:36 pm
Westinor wrote:-snip-
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