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by Trotterdam » Wed Aug 05, 2020 7:54 am
by Daarwyrth » Wed Aug 05, 2020 2:24 pm
A solid, but colorless marble statue of the founder of @@NAME@@ has been found and has been dated to around the time of their rise to power
@@DEMONYMADJECTIVE@@ parks have suspiciously similar statues
painting priceless statues are a common school project
by Minskiev » Wed Aug 05, 2020 2:27 pm
Daarwyrth wrote:A solid, but colorless marble statue of the founder of @@NAME@@ has been found and has been dated to around the time of their rise to power
Perhaps consider rephrasing this to "A solid, but colorless marble statue of @@NAME@@'s original founder has been discovered, dating back to the time they rose to power".@@DEMONYMADJECTIVE@@ parks have suspiciously similar statues
Consider adding "colored" between "similar" and "statues".painting priceless statues are a common school project
Change "are" to "is".
by Daarwyrth » Wed Aug 05, 2020 2:43 pm
Minskiev wrote:Daarwyrth wrote:A solid, but colorless marble statue of the founder of @@NAME@@ has been found and has been dated to around the time of their rise to power
Perhaps consider rephrasing this to "A solid, but colorless marble statue of @@NAME@@'s original founder has been discovered, dating back to the time they rose to power".@@DEMONYMADJECTIVE@@ parks have suspiciously similar statues
Consider adding "colored" between "similar" and "statues".painting priceless statues are a common school project
Change "are" to "is".
And change it to similarly on your second suggestion.
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