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Minskiev
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Founded: Apr 20, 2020
Civil Rights Lovefest

Postby Minskiev » Thu Jul 16, 2020 5:13 pm

For example, take my draft here, that is DEFINITELY NOT a secret ploy for people to add advice to it. Thanks to lots of help from Westinor and others, it’s been rewritten to be humorous, read well, and have options RELATED TO THE PLOT. We’ll help you with rewriting.

What I’m saying is that it needs a fourth option, that is middle ground to the extremes presented, and related to the issue.

Also, make the validity for your current option 3 to be “doesn’t have Child Self Rearing”
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Rebel Maxonor
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Founded: May 15, 2020
Liberal Democratic Socialists

Postby Rebel Maxonor » Thu Jul 16, 2020 7:05 pm

Minskiev wrote:For example, take my draft here, that is DEFINITELY NOT a secret ploy for people to add advice to it. Thanks to lots of help from Westinor and others, it’s been rewritten to be humorous, read well, and have options RELATED TO THE PLOT. We’ll help you with rewriting.

What I’m saying is that it needs a fourth option, that is middle ground to the extremes presented, and related to the issue.

Also, make the validity for your current option 3 to be “doesn’t have Child Self Rearing”


Thank you very much!! I did like the one you presented and I'd like to do something similar.

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Candlewhisper Archive
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Founded: Aug 28, 2015
Anarchy

Postby Candlewhisper Archive » Fri Jul 17, 2020 2:35 am

Premise seems too similar to 1193, in my opinion.
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