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by Trotterdam » Sat Aug 08, 2020 8:26 pm
by Jutsa » Sun Aug 09, 2020 7:31 am
by Minskiev » Sun Aug 09, 2020 7:53 am
by Trotterdam » Sun Aug 09, 2020 9:36 am
What? Like, two different hijacker groups who by complete coincidence happened to be trying to take over the same plane? That would be hilarious, but also rather improbable and distracting from the real government issue.Minskiev wrote:Well, now I’m questioning if they should ALL be Ultra-Violetists. Half-terrorist half-hijacker would be an interesting predicament...
by Minskiev » Sun Aug 09, 2020 12:51 pm
Trotterdam wrote:What? Like, two different hijacker groups who by complete coincidence happened to be trying to take over the same plane? That would be hilarious, but also rather improbable and distracting from the real government issue.Minskiev wrote:Well, now I’m questioning if they should ALL be Ultra-Violetists. Half-terrorist half-hijacker would be an interesting predicament...
by Daarwyrth » Sun Aug 16, 2020 6:03 am
a sizable chunk
“We’ve got two minutes until government operations as we know it cease to exist!”
the hundreds of MILLIONS of @@CURRENCYPLURAL@@ in damage
small planes are used as fireworks
[option] “And kill hundreds of people?” asks your niece, as she types #FreedomOfReligion on the conservative @@ANIMAL@@ News live broadcast of the hijacking. “Instead, let’s give the “terrorists” what they want, and accept them with open arms into our welcome community. Isn’t it such a wonderful thought: a Bigtopian holding hands with a Tasmanian, holding hands with a Gullivadian; never mind that they’re sacrificing an orphan. So, what do you say you send a message to the scared, unrepresented hijackers, and let them practice here, away from trouble, in perfect harmony.” She starts drooling from her daydream, but is awoken by many angry alerts from her phone.
[effect] multiculturalists have begun to join in on the sacrifices
by Minskiev » Sun Aug 16, 2020 7:42 am
Daarwyrth wrote:a sizable chunk
Question: how big is the plane? I get that a portion of the capital city would be damaged/destroyed, depending on the speed, velocity and angle of descent, but when you say "sizeable chunk" I'm imagining 1/3 of the city to be reduced to rubble at least. Perhaps you could consider changing this to something along the lines of "seemingly counting down to billions of @@CURRENCYPLURAL@@ in damages to @@CAPITAL@@".Well, sizable is..subjective, so that’s not too great of an adjective, you’re right.“We’ve got two minutes until government operations as we know it cease to exist!”
So, the plane is heading towards a government building? Perhaps this could be specified in the premise of the issue, that the planet is presumed to be heading towards the government building. Because as I said before, unless the plane is loaded with serious explosives, then I am not sure how it would cause so much destruction that a great chunk of the city would be gone.Yeah, that needs clearing up.the hundreds of MILLIONS of @@CURRENCYPLURAL@@ in damage
Hmm, you mention the millions of @@CURRENCYPLURAL@@ in damage here, but I think it would better serve as a replacement for the "chunk of @@CAPITAL@@" bit.Alright.small planes are used as fireworks
Consider changing this to "the air force blows up small planes during their fireworks displays".Nah, the former is quicker and darker, far superior joke.[option] “And kill hundreds of people?” asks your niece, as she types #FreedomOfReligion on the conservative @@ANIMAL@@ News live broadcast of the hijacking. “Instead, let’s give the “terrorists” what they want, and accept them with open arms into our welcome community. Isn’t it such a wonderful thought: a Bigtopian holding hands with a Tasmanian, holding hands with a Gullivadian; never mind that they’re sacrificing an orphan. So, what do you say you send a message to the scared, unrepresented hijackers, and let them practice here, away from trouble, in perfect harmony.” She starts drooling from her daydream, but is awoken by many angry alerts from her phone.
[effect] multiculturalists have begun to join in on the sacrifices
But how does this deal with the imminent danger of the hijacked plane going to @@CAPITAL@@? This could be an approach to prevent such a thing from happening in the future, but it doesn't really deal with the present situation, I feel. Unless the hijackers are to be contacted they can practice their ways in peace in @@NAME@@? If so, you'd need to make that more clearly, but then again, if they already hijacked a plane and if their intent is to cause harm, then I don't think it would dissuade them from continuing their act of terrorism.
I guess I could make that clearer. I’ll also try and incorporate the lack of info, or maybe unincorporate it. Hmm.
by Fauxia » Sun Aug 16, 2020 1:11 pm
by Minskiev » Sun Aug 16, 2020 5:25 pm
Fauxia wrote:When you introduce it, because you just say "recently", I assume it already occurred. Use a specific time, like in #740 (93 minutes). Furthermore, aren't Ultra-Violetists also disgruntled hijackers? They're certainly hijackers if it's them. The last sentence doesn't give two real options. Even when I read the entire issue, I see Ultra-Violetists as one option, but do not know what the other really is.
I wouldn’t exactly say disgruntled is a suitable adjective of terrorists. But yeah, I won’t make the ‘conflicting news’ a big part of the issue.
As for option 2, I don't understand what is being recommended. Is this supposed to be a hostage situation? Do we know that the hijackers are even open to negotiation? Is anyone going to choose an option to just allow people who risked the lives of hundreds or thousands to get off the hook with nothing?
When it comes to terrorism, it doesn't really matter who the terrorists are. They still just hijacked an airplane and have it set to hit city hall. The issue to me just seems like a question of "do we try to negotiate or just shoot them down"? I've yet to see that the "are they Ultra-Violetists"? adds to anything here.
You’re right, I’ll clear it up.
by Tinhampton » Thu Aug 20, 2020 2:11 pm
by Minskiev » Thu Aug 20, 2020 2:31 pm
Tinhampton wrote:Minor suggestion for description: "@@CAPITAL@@, namely City Hall" ---> "@@CAPITAL@@'s City Hall"
Great title but I'm struggling to see how this particular band of presumed Ultra-Violetists are "Not Pilgrims"
by Minskiev » Thu Aug 20, 2020 5:15 pm
by Westinor » Thu Aug 20, 2020 5:43 pm
seemingly counting down to the demise of a fortune in property damage to @@CAPITAL@@
We’ve got two minutes until government operations as we know it cease to exist!
“That plane is going right towards the heart of the government,
Between a few brave casualties and thousands dead, not to mention the hundreds of MILLIONS of @@CURRENCYPLURAL@@ in damage, the former is the best option.
and blow up all deadly hijacked planes in the future too
And kill hundreds of people?
Instead, let’s see their side of the story, and try to negotiate with them. If they want money, give them money. If they want a shrine to Violet to sacrifice orphans on, so be it. Let the scared, unrepresented Violetists practice whatever they need to here, away from trouble, in perfect harmony.
by Minskiev » Fri Aug 21, 2020 9:51 am
by Minskiev » Sun Aug 23, 2020 11:44 am
by La Xinga » Sun Aug 23, 2020 11:57 am
by Minskiev » Sun Aug 23, 2020 11:58 am
La xinga wrote:I like the issue, the effect lines seem funny!
Tinhampton wrote:What's an Executive Transportation Actuary? I thought that actuaries dealt with finance, not government policy on transport.
by Tinhampton » Sun Aug 23, 2020 12:00 pm
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