Trotterdam wrote:Your effect lines are really bland.Libertas Omnium Maximus wrote:Outcome: actually drowning in red tape has become a legitimate concern for many business ownersLibertas Omnium Maximus wrote:Outcome: life and auto insurance are being bundled at an increased rateThe last one is the least bad, but it's also the only one I have a suggestion for:Libertas Omnium Maximus wrote:Outcome: dying in an automobile accident is considered to be an occupational hazard for most elected officialsbicycles are rising in popularity among politicians(Actually, my first suggestion was going to be horses, but bicycles make more sense.)
I fixed up Effect Line #2 but couldn't think of anything for Effect Line #1. Does Anybody have any suggestions?