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[DRAFT] Sabotage In Space

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[DRAFT] Sabotage In Space

Postby Earth Orbit » Sat Dec 14, 2019 10:15 pm

I think I have a good grasp on all the requirements and writing, but do feel free to bash this mercilessly.
This is loosely based on that fiasco a while back when people thought Russians had sabotaged the ISS. I picked Blackacre to be the potential "bad guys" because I believe it's implied to be in some form of Cold War with your nation.

Title: Sabotage In Space (Definitely not final)

Validity:
  • Nation must have a space program
  • Nation must have computers

Description:
After the death of two @@DEMONYMADJECTIVE@@ astronauts when a @@NAME@@ Space Station airlock suddenly opened, it has come to your attention that the accident was potentially an act of sabotage by a Blackacrean crew member.

Option 1:
"This is unacceptable!" yells @@RANDOMNAME@@, the hot-headed leader of the space program. "We invited that Blackacrean up into our station as a gesture of diplomatic goodwill, and what does he do? He chucks two of our people out into hard vacuum! I say we tell the remaining crew on the station to send him back down to be tried... or better yet, just eject him as well!"

Effect: Crew members aboard @@NAME@@ Space Station who accidentally eat someone else's dinner pouch get thrown out into space without a suit.

Option 2:
"Woah, woah, woah," says @@RANDOMNAME@@, the accused Blackacrean, over the radio. "I didn't do anything. I was asleep when the incident happened, and neither I nor my country has any interest in wantonly murdering your citizens. Are you certain it wasn't an accident? I can inspect the airlock computer systems, if you'd like - make sure there's no dangerous problems. After that, I'll come back down voluntarily."

Effect: Any random foreigner can log into @@NAME@@ Space Station's computers, subjecting crew to constant looping music and ominous noises of groaning metal.

Option 3:
"Ladies, ladies!" Interjects your Minister of Foreign Affairs, @@RANDOMFEMALENAME@@. "This whole problem sources from our xenophobic attitude towards allowing foreign nationals on our space assets! We should rebrand @@NAME@@ Space Station as an International Space Station, and invite crew from around the world! I'm sure this accident is all just a big misunderstanding, and everything will be smooth sailing from here on out."

Effect: @@NAME@@ Space Station has been renamed to the International Space Station, to much global approval as well as the founding of "astronaut training programs" by several rogue nations.

Option 4:
"Eh? Space station?" says professional old person @@RANDOMMALENAME@@. "Why do we even need it? I say we let it drop out of the sky and... smash into the ground? We didn't need it when I was a kid, so I'm sure we don't need it now. Why don't you cut the entire space program and pass on the savings to us, the taxpayers?"

Effect: The space program is literally crashing and burning.
REMOVES POLICY: SPACE PROGRAM
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Postby Australian rePublic » Sat Dec 14, 2019 11:17 pm

This is an issue for a court, not a leader
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Postby Candlewhisper Archive » Sun Dec 15, 2019 11:27 am

Disagree with Aussie. We're talking an international space station and a potential act of war by another nation.

Having said that, I think there is an overlap with this issue with 679, as they're both essentially questions involving space stations and whether you can trust potentially hostile foreigners.
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Postby Earth Orbit » Sun Dec 15, 2019 1:32 pm

Candlewhisper Archive wrote:Disagree with Aussie. We're talking an international space station and a potential act of war by another nation.

Having said that, I think there is an overlap with this issue with 679, as they're both essentially questions involving space stations and whether you can trust potentially hostile foreigners.


Would I need to modify my draft to reduce the overlap, or are they too similar for this variation to have any chance at publication?
A 7/0/7 10.28 civilization according to this index.
I don't usually use NS Stats.
FNS HOMEPAGE | 11/23/2170 | BREAKING: VIOLETIST ATTACKS TAKING PLACE ACROSS FEDERATION, LUNA - STATE OF NATIONAL EMERGENCY DECLARED | 11/23/2170 | FNS HOMEPAGE
Ah yes, asteroid mining techno space-capitalism. I'll be boarding the rocket immediately. - Synne Industries
...I’ve never seen one [future nations] that’s an orbital country. That’s a really unique concept and I’m a fan of it to be honest. - Cantelo
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Postby Candlewhisper Archive » Mon Dec 16, 2019 7:45 am

In my opinion the overlap is too strong to be able to use this anywhere near its current form, so an amended version would likely not be recognisable as the same story any more.
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Postby Australian rePublic » Mon Dec 16, 2019 1:01 pm

Candlewhisper Archive wrote:Disagree with Aussie. We're talking an international space station and a potential act of war by another nation.


So shouldn't a court determine whether or not it was an act of war, before jumping the gun?
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Postby Jutsa » Wed Dec 18, 2019 7:24 pm

I AM the court.



Also that's basically nationstates (both GI and GP) in a nutshell.
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