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by Candlewhisper Archive » Tue Jul 30, 2019 5:17 pm
by Greater Cesnica » Tue Jul 30, 2019 5:21 pm
Candlewhisper Archive wrote:There's grey areas, and there's boundaries to be pushed. I personally have a high tolerance for mature content, despite the fact that children will see the issues. I've published an issue about honour killing (632), for example. There's also issues about castrating rapists (75). On the flipside, we've always nixed any issues that mention paedophilia or child abuse, with the closest thing being a joke in the effect line of 648.1, and we've tried and failed to find a way to present an issue on FGM that passes all sensibilities.
So what you're describing here isn't no go, but its in that grey area. If this was a bad draft, then there'd be no problem with tossing it away.
As it is, we have to make a decision about appropriateness as a team. I'd suggest that as an author you'd be best off making that decision as easy as possible by keeping it toned down, and using allusions rather than explicit descriptions. The opening is pushing it, and option 1 goes too far, in my opinion. Dial it back a bit.
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San Lumen wrote:You are ridiculous.George Orwell wrote:“That rifle on the wall of the labourer's cottage or working class flat is the symbol of democracy. It is our job to see that it stays there.”
by Greater Cesnica » Wed Jul 31, 2019 11:16 am
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San Lumen wrote:You are ridiculous.George Orwell wrote:“That rifle on the wall of the labourer's cottage or working class flat is the symbol of democracy. It is our job to see that it stays there.”
by Chan Island » Thu Aug 01, 2019 10:51 am
Conserative Morality wrote:"It's not time yet" is a tactic used by reactionaries in every era. "It's not time for democracy, it's not time for capitalism, it's not time for emancipation." Of course it's not time. It's never time, not on its own. You make it time. If you're under fire in the no-man's land of WW1, you start digging a foxhole even if the ideal time would be when you *aren't* being bombarded, because once you wait for it to be 'time', other situations will need your attention, assuming you survive that long. If the fields aren't furrowed, plow them. If the iron is not hot, make it so. If society is not ready, change it.
by Candlewhisper Archive » Thu Aug 01, 2019 2:10 pm
DESCRIPTION: After the revelation of systemic, high-reaching sexual abuse against female soldiers over the span of more than a decade and the failure of senior military officials in stopping it, the @@DENONYM@@ military has found itself in the midst of a public relations nightmare. As scrutiny mounts against the armed forces and their ability to keep female soldier safe, you have agreed to meet with one of the victims of the abuse.
Option 1: "I joined the army to serve my country, because I've always felt there was a duty for me to do so." says Corporal @@RANDOMFEMALEFIRSTNAME(1)@@ @@RANDOMLASTNAME(1)@@, a victim of sexual abuse by one of her superiors. "I lived in perpetual fear and through a sense of overwhelming despair while I suffered through my ordeal. When the scandal broke and gained traction in the media, I felt... relief. Relief that it was over for me. But what about all the others who suffered? I want to see justice. I want women like me to feel safe serving their country. @@NAME@@ needs more protections for female soldiers and harsher penalties for rapists and those who enable them. Like life in prison."
Outcome: male soldiers offering handshakes to their female counterparts may be charged with sexual harassment
Option 2: Colonel @@RANDOMMALEFIRSTNAME(1)@@ @@RANDOMLASTNAME(2)@@, newly-appointed commander of the base where this particular incident took place has accompanied Corporal @@RANDOMLASTNAME(1)@@ to your office. "I tried to stop what was happening. I re-assigned dozens of officers and recommended courts martial for them all, but they would simply be be allocated to another base with a clear record. What I see here is a culture of intimidation, of utter disregard for the dignity of @@DENONYM@@ women. A lack of basic human empathy for others. Most of the perpetrators won't see real punishment with our current punishments and culture. We need a serious deterrent, @@LEADER@@. The long drop with a short stop should do the trick.
Outcome: the government has bulk-purchased thousands of yards of manila rope
Option 3: As they leave the former commander of the base, Colonel @@RANDOMMALEFIRSTNAME(2)@@ @@RANDOMLASTNAME(3)@@ enters. "This would have never happened if women were not allowed into active duty or the reserves in the first place. When men and women are in crowded barracks, these... incidents are bound to happen. Now now, I'm not condoning what has happened, or defending the people who committed these acts! But to effectively curb scandals like these occurring in the future, drastic action must be taken." Saluting you, he leaves your office.
Outcome: the number of nursing school applicants has quadrupled
Option 4: Hoping to take your mind off of this unfortunate topic, you pull out your phone only to find a text message from your nephew.
Opening the message, you read: "idk about you but imo having women serve in like a separate military service with limited roles and stuff would solve this whole military rape thing." As you read the message again another one appears on the screen: "also having a special female-only military force would be so sick cuz u know, guns and girls lol"
Outcome: the @@DENONYM@@ military is experiencing a gender identity crisis
by Australian rePublic » Thu Aug 01, 2019 3:33 pm
by Candlewhisper Archive » Fri Aug 02, 2019 2:02 am
Australian rePublic wrote:Why assume that the rape victims are women? Men can be rape victims too
by Greater Cesnica » Fri Aug 02, 2019 1:17 pm
Candlewhisper Archive wrote:Australian rePublic wrote:Why assume that the rape victims are women? Men can be rape victims too
Sure, but that's not the issue at hand, and doesn't need to be addressed.
You're sounding like the guy who attends a meeting about the institutionalised racism suffered by young black men in the workplace who stands up and says "but what about racism against white men?"
It sounds like you're making a valid point until you look at the numbers involved, the history, the context, and everything else... once those things have been examined it becomes clear that you've missed the point so hard that you've shot the guy behind you.
Sure men can be rape victims, but this issue is about the systematic mistreatment of women in the military. Which is a real thing. Saying "what about the men?" is frankly a dick move.
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San Lumen wrote:You are ridiculous.George Orwell wrote:“That rifle on the wall of the labourer's cottage or working class flat is the symbol of democracy. It is our job to see that it stays there.”
by Greater Cesnica » Sun Aug 11, 2019 8:34 pm
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San Lumen wrote:You are ridiculous.George Orwell wrote:“That rifle on the wall of the labourer's cottage or working class flat is the symbol of democracy. It is our job to see that it stays there.”
by Australian rePublic » Tue Aug 13, 2019 3:31 am
by Sanctaria » Tue Aug 13, 2019 6:04 am
Australian rePublic wrote:Why is this limited to male-on-female sexual assault? Male-on-male sexual assault exists, and even female-on-male sexual assault. By limiting this to male-on-female sexual assault, you're ignoring male victims of sexual assault
by Greater Cesnica » Sun Sep 01, 2019 11:04 am
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San Lumen wrote:You are ridiculous.George Orwell wrote:“That rifle on the wall of the labourer's cottage or working class flat is the symbol of democracy. It is our job to see that it stays there.”
by USS Monitor » Sun Sep 01, 2019 4:25 pm
Greater Cesnica wrote:Yeah sorry I don't know why I haven't updated this, I've just been extremely busy lately irl lol
by Greater Cesnica » Sun Sep 01, 2019 6:53 pm
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San Lumen wrote:You are ridiculous.George Orwell wrote:“That rifle on the wall of the labourer's cottage or working class flat is the symbol of democracy. It is our job to see that it stays there.”
by Greater Cesnica » Sun Sep 15, 2019 4:23 am
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San Lumen wrote:You are ridiculous.George Orwell wrote:“That rifle on the wall of the labourer's cottage or working class flat is the symbol of democracy. It is our job to see that it stays there.”
by Greater Cesnica » Sun Sep 29, 2019 3:29 pm
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San Lumen wrote:You are ridiculous.George Orwell wrote:“That rifle on the wall of the labourer's cottage or working class flat is the symbol of democracy. It is our job to see that it stays there.”
by Greater Cesnica » Sat Oct 05, 2019 5:16 am
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San Lumen wrote:You are ridiculous.George Orwell wrote:“That rifle on the wall of the labourer's cottage or working class flat is the symbol of democracy. It is our job to see that it stays there.”
by Bears Armed » Sat Oct 05, 2019 6:15 am
by Greater Cesnica » Sat Oct 05, 2019 6:46 am
Bears Armed wrote:Good luck!
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San Lumen wrote:You are ridiculous.George Orwell wrote:“That rifle on the wall of the labourer's cottage or working class flat is the symbol of democracy. It is our job to see that it stays there.”
by Australian rePublic » Sat Oct 12, 2019 3:51 pm
by Greater Cesnica » Sun Oct 13, 2019 8:29 pm
Australian rePublic wrote:Good Luck!
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San Lumen wrote:You are ridiculous.George Orwell wrote:“That rifle on the wall of the labourer's cottage or working class flat is the symbol of democracy. It is our job to see that it stays there.”
by Greater Cesnica » Wed Oct 23, 2019 3:54 am
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San Lumen wrote:You are ridiculous.George Orwell wrote:“That rifle on the wall of the labourer's cottage or working class flat is the symbol of democracy. It is our job to see that it stays there.”
by The Free Joy State » Wed Oct 23, 2019 4:00 am
Greater Cesnica wrote:I'm going to take a leap and assume that the issue didn't get accepted. Back to the drawing board, I guess?
Any ideas y'all have?
by Bears Armed » Wed Oct 23, 2019 6:02 am
The Free Joy State wrote:Our oldest submitted player issue is March 2017 (our oldest submitted Staff issue is from 2016).
We will not tell you if it has been accepted (or if it has not been). That is a deliberate choice. At most, you may be receive a TG if/when an editor takes a submission to work on, asking what you think of the edits (not all editors do that, some do; and not all those that do so do it all the time).
Our best suggestion is always: every time you submit an issue, make a wish and move on to the next draft.
If you ever hear about it again, it will be a happy surprise.
by Candlewhisper Archive » Wed Oct 23, 2019 6:49 am
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