Good to see you writing again.
This one reminds me a bit of my issue An Expensive Watch, though only thematically -- there's nothing near to overlapping here.
I like the premise and the ideas here, but I think the whole thing needs to be a little more to-the-point and concise.
If I were you, I'd endeavour to snip 5 options to 4, and to make the option lengths you currently have on the first and fifth option be your guideline of how long an option should be. Likewise, where you can, make the writing more efficient on each section, including the opening description the effect lines.
Self-edit this a little, and it'll be a far easier one to drop straight into the game.
And again, good to see you writing again. Your existing issues are excellent, and we need to see more of your creativity.