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Chan Island
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Postby Chan Island » Fri Aug 30, 2019 10:42 am

*reads description*

Somebody's watched Yes, Minister I see.

Otherwise not much to add to be honest. Seems decent to me.
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Conserative Morality wrote:"It's not time yet" is a tactic used by reactionaries in every era. "It's not time for democracy, it's not time for capitalism, it's not time for emancipation." Of course it's not time. It's never time, not on its own. You make it time. If you're under fire in the no-man's land of WW1, you start digging a foxhole even if the ideal time would be when you *aren't* being bombarded, because once you wait for it to be 'time', other situations will need your attention, assuming you survive that long. If the fields aren't furrowed, plow them. If the iron is not hot, make it so. If society is not ready, change it.

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Candlewhisper Archive
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Postby Candlewhisper Archive » Fri Aug 30, 2019 1:13 pm

Yes, Prime Minister, in fact. The episode was called One of Us.

I'd rather this came across as loving tribute rather than plaigirism - best way to do that would be to drop some references. I'd suggest naming the Brigadier General Geoffrey Hastings.
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Marilyn Manson Freaks
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Postby Marilyn Manson Freaks » Sun Sep 01, 2019 4:48 pm

Candlewhisper Archive wrote:Yes, Prime Minister, in fact. The episode was called One of Us.

I'd rather this came across as loving tribute rather than plaigirism - best way to do that would be to drop some references. I'd suggest naming the Brigadier General Geoffrey Hastings.


Done. I'll be uploading a new draft tonight. I plan on changing #4 to be about a nationalist using this incident as a crutch in his efforts to demand more security and military funding.
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