My first time writing an issue. Please tell me what I can improve on.
DRAFT VERSION II
[issue]After a fire has recently burned down an abandoned factory in @@CAPITOL@@, the subject of what is to be done about the land has come to fruition.
[validity]All nations
[option]A man in a wheelchair rolls into your office, and manages to squeak, "Stay off my... uh... what was the word again... land! Back in my day, that f-factory was the greatest in @@CAPITOL@@! But we w-went out of business, and couldn't afford to call a demolition c-comp-company! So I left it to decay, in the h-hope that my p-poor family could eventually revive the f-factory." He then falls asleep in his chair.
[effect]When a building gets destroyed, it's not construction companies that are the hassle, it's the families that own the building.
[option]Suddenly, a dark cloud of purple smoke comes into your offices, and morphs into a dark figure in a purple cloak and hood. The figure says, in a deep, mysterious voice, "I am @@RANDOMNAME1@@. I am part of the Cult of Violet. We demand you hand over the land, or be annihilated." Before you can answer "What in the blazes?!", he points a purple scepter at you. Now, or be annihilated. With sweat dripping down your forehead, your mind finds an answer.
[effect]some say that religious cults control the government.
[option]"How about we make it a cornfield?" says country farmer @@RANDOMNAME2@@, who crashed into your office wall with a tractor, killing @@RANDOMNAME1@@ "It'll be nice to finally bring back some of the country to @@CAPITOL@@! It'll make food, clean up the air a bit, and soon people all over the world will fly to @@NATION@@ to taste some good-ol' @@DEMONYM@@ corn!" He then proceeds to spit in your favorite vase.
[effect]@@CAPITOL@@ is oddly filled with more farmland than urban land.
[option]"We could just build up a new factory." says @@RANDOMNAME3@@, a wealthy entrepreneur. "I mean, you're not going to listen to some hillbilly, are you? We need more factories, to provide jobs for the poor!" As @@RANDOMNAME3@@ is walking out the door, he adds, "You want me to patch up that wall of yours? I need a quick buck."
[effect]Unemployment is going down, and pollution is going up, causing what some call "Eternal Winter, but hey, at least the economy's up!"
[option]After @@RANDOMNAME3@@ fixed your wall, it instantly bursts into flames, and you are knocked unconscious. You awake in a dank sewer tunnel, tied to a chair. You hear behind you, "Hello @@NAME@@." Suddenly, a dark figure jumps into the sewer. "I am @@RANDOMNAME4@@. The fire is all part of my plan." You are visibly confused. "Allow me to explain. I set the factory on fire, so I could hold you hostage, force you to issue an order to build a nuclear power plant, and then blow it up, destroying all of @@CAPITOL@@!" You clutch a grenade you have in your pocket, and he says, "Whaddya say? Wanna blow something up today?"
[effect]@@CAPITOL@@ has been completely obliterated after a nuclear power plant blew up.