USS Monitor wrote:It's long...
It takes 5 seconds longer to read it than the average issue description.
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by Radical Islamic Buddhism » Sun Sep 30, 2018 1:07 pm
USS Monitor wrote:It's long...
by Australian rePublic » Sun Sep 30, 2018 3:24 pm
by USS Monitor » Sun Sep 30, 2018 4:27 pm
Australian rePublic wrote:Radical Islamic Buddhism wrote:
It takes 5 seconds longer to read it than the average issue description.
Not the description, the descriotion's fine. The entire issue. As a general rule of thumb, the more an options an issue has, the shorter each option should be. I'll see if I can cut it down a bit, then TG you
by Australian rePublic » Sun Sep 30, 2018 5:32 pm
by Radical Islamic Buddhism » Sun Sep 30, 2018 6:14 pm
by Jutsa » Sun Sep 30, 2018 6:46 pm
by Candlewhisper Archive » Mon Oct 01, 2018 2:32 am
Radical Islamic Buddhism wrote:[desc]An ancient city-state called Jeevoosh had been rumored to exist within the territory of @@NAME@@, but the evidence for Jeevoosh is sketchy at best. Recently, archaeologists discovered stone tablets in the border town of Red Hill. Written in a language that seems to be the ancestor of Lilliputian, the tablets are an epic poem with a plot similar to the famous Lilliputian epic, “The King of Books.” The government of Lilliput has proclaimed Jeevoosh to be Lilliput's ancient heritage and wants to reclaim their newly discovered homeland.
by Radical Islamic Buddhism » Mon Oct 01, 2018 7:25 pm
by Australian rePublic » Tue Oct 02, 2018 2:18 pm
by Australian rePublic » Tue Oct 02, 2018 2:18 pm
by USS Monitor » Tue Oct 02, 2018 8:10 pm
Australian rePublic wrote:[desc] The border town of Red Hill was rumoured to be an ancient city-state conquered and renamed by @@NAME@@ several centuries prior. However, there was no proof of this until last week's archiological discovery unearthed a major tablet
by The Marsupial Illuminati » Tue Oct 02, 2018 8:13 pm
Australian rePublic wrote:Should we ditch this?
by The Free Joy State » Wed Oct 03, 2018 12:29 am
USS Monitor wrote:Australian rePublic wrote:[desc] The border town of Red Hill was rumoured to be an ancient city-state conquered and renamed by @@NAME@@ several centuries prior. However, there was no proof of this until last week's archiological discovery unearthed a major tablet
And?
This still suffers from the problem that it's unclear what the dilemma is after reading the desc.
Aussie, I know you busted your butt on this and you found a new writing buddy and all of that is cool, but I am not sure if you can make this work.
by Australian rePublic » Wed Oct 03, 2018 1:38 am
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