The Free Joy State wrote:USS Monitor wrote:You still have a reference to "the district" in the intro. If you wanted "districts" out of the equation, you should probably go ahead and take out that last reference.
It should be "oriented." AFAIK, "orientated" is not a word.
Just to interject. "Orientated" is the British version of "oriented".
Didn't notice that. But yes, 'orientated' is just a quaint little Britishism. Nothing wrong with it.