Hediacrana wrote:Three versions of option 2 here. I'd like to know which one people think I should use, or whether they have suggestions for a better one. The variant bits are in italics."Political correctness gone amok!" scoffs @@RANDOMNAME@@, president of the conservative @@CAPITAL@@ Family Values Institute. "You know, if you start showing acceptance to this bunch, you'll only encourage others to join their ranks. Instead, we need to make sure that our school curriculums are clear that a person's gender is either male or female and determined at conception by his or her chromosomes. No need to confuse the kids with details like intersex conditions and what have you."
This version is the best because of its cohesion.
Option 1 is so vanilla. I suggest that the author pepper that option's text with buzzwords. Just some ideas: oppression/oppressive, systemic, cisnormative, cishet, patriarchy, queer, LGBTQIA+, assigned, violence, gender non-conforming, transphobic, inclusive, delegitimize, marginalize, discriminatory, privilege, experience, binary, and exclusionary.