[ACCEPTED; #1110] - Curtains For The Horrorshow

[Sacara]

I can certainly relate to that.

Personally, I think it looks good for submission. Your call, I think.
(I'm not the best person to give submission advice)

Thanks, Jutsa.

Any final tips? If not, I will probably submit this sometime tomorrow.

[Caracasus]

Hmm. I'd be tempted to add a different detail than the zombie tearing a man's arm off in option 2 as you've used it in option 1, but other than that I would just suggest reading through, checking your spelling, punctuation and grammar and all that.

[Sacara]

Hmm. I'd be tempted to add a different detail than the zombie tearing a man's arm off in option 2 as you've used it in option 1, but other than that I would just suggest reading through, checking your spelling, punctuation and grammar and all that.

I changed the detail and caught a few mistakes. Thanks for the feedback.

Anything else?

[Sacara]

Aaaaaand submitted!

[Jutsa]

Good luck, Sacara!