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Postby Kurczak Mielony » Sat Mar 24, 2018 11:54 am

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Postby Kurczak Mielony » Fri Apr 06, 2018 3:14 pm

It's a brand new day draft, and the sun is high. This is bumping from about 10 pages or so. Whoops.
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Postby Jutsa » Fri Apr 06, 2018 3:43 pm

Oh, hey, I didn't notice the changes... whoops. :blush:

Option 5 looks pretty interesting, I've gotta say, although it probably won't work for communist nations. Also, you need a space in the second ," in that option.

You also still have to remove the commas at the end of the effect lines. :lol:
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Postby Fauxia » Fri Apr 06, 2018 3:47 pm

Who says it’s archaic?
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Postby Jutsa » Fri Apr 06, 2018 3:48 pm

That's left over from before he knew that there was a "people have tanks" policy. I still say he should change it.
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Postby Kurczak Mielony » Fri Apr 06, 2018 7:20 pm

Jutsa is correct in saying that it's from my earlier drafts. However, I don't want my whole gamble to go down as someone else's reversal issue. I just may, however. As for communism being invalid, that's a simple fix. And god damn those commas!
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Postby Digory Kirke » Sat Apr 07, 2018 4:37 pm

Just a question. Is the validity necessary, given that a tank is not a car?
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Postby Jutsa » Tue Apr 10, 2018 3:23 pm

Fair point. :rofl:

Aside from my usual mentioning of branching the issue for any nation that legalizes tanks, I've got nothing.
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Postby Kurczak Mielony » Sat Apr 14, 2018 12:20 pm

Alright, I don't think anyone else will be commenting on it. Nor will CWA tear it to shreds. So I'll hold a poll instead. Should I submit my issue? Two choices: Yes and No. Simple enough, right?
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Postby Jutsa » Sat Apr 14, 2018 2:39 pm

If you won't change it from an archaic law to a current law, then yeah, this is about as ready as it'll get. :P
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Postby Candlewhisper Archive » Tue Apr 17, 2018 10:36 am

Kurczak Mielony wrote:Alright, I don't think anyone else will be commenting on it. Nor will CWA tear it to shreds. So I'll hold a poll instead. Should I submit my issue? Two choices: Yes and No. Simple enough, right?


Forget the poll. Just submit it when you feel you can't improve it further, it's been solid from the outset, it's up to you as a writer to decide when it is "done".
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