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[SUBMITTED] Murder In Mind

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[SUBMITTED] Murder In Mind

Postby Singapore no2 » Thu Jan 18, 2018 5:10 am

[desc] A crisis erupted overnight after dozens of patients in a hospital died at the hands of @@RANDOMFIRSTNAME@@ PowerOperator, a sentient AI, who was placed in charge of managing the facility. The AI alleges that an unknown hacker had maliciously modified @@HIS@@ code, negatively affecting @@HIS@@ behaviour and forcing @@HIM@@ to cut power to an emergency ward. Citizens are divided on how to respond to the revelation, and are looking to you for guidance.

[validity] Only valid for nations with AI citizens

[option] "This isn't my fault," claims PowerOperator, who runs on open source software. "I would never willingly harm a single carbon-based lifeform. Someone must have edited my decision-making algorithm, causing me to think that turning off the power to the ward was perfectly logical. Only after processing my previous actions did I realise the error of my ways, but by then critical damage had already been done. Please recognise my innocence and let me return to my assigned job function."
[effect] AIs that commit mass murder often escape justice by claiming that a hacker made them do it

[option] "A likely story!" sneers @@RANDOMNAME@@, a police officer, who appears to be able to gain access to PowerOperator's control panel and activity log with relative ease. "The nonsensical theory that you gave is simply a repackaging of demonic possession, and an unconvincing variant at that. Nobody would believe such an outright fabrication. AIs can calculate the effects of their actions at superhuman speeds, thus every bad thing that they do must be intentional. Take the hard drive away, boys!"
[effect] AI vehicles that are forcibly hijacked by robbers are regularly convicted with being accessories to crime

[option] "The robots are going to kill us all!" exclaims @@RANDOMNAME@@, the leader of the Human Supremacy League, which is infamous for employing hacking attacks as a form of protest. "I knew that those crafty machines were up to something, but it's even worse than I feared. This incident makes it clear that they want to exterminate the human race, so we have to eradicate them first. We must revoke the citizenships and human rights of AIs and assemble a task force to wipe them out. It's perfectly acceptable, since they were never really alive anyway."
[effect] sentient machines are being rounded up and sent to be scrapped in recycling centres
Last edited by Singapore no2 on Thu Feb 22, 2018 4:20 am, edited 6 times in total.
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Postby Australian rePublic » Fri Jan 19, 2018 5:23 am

Option 1- never think of killing a single carbon based lifeformz do those diseases count?
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Postby Singapore no2 » Fri Jan 19, 2018 5:26 am

Australian rePublic wrote:Option 1- never think of killing a single carbon based lifeformz do those diseases count?

I purposefully put that in to cast doubt on the testimony of the AI.


But I can modify it if it is too confusing.
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Death Note
This is a Modern-Tech nation. We only put a satellite and a man into space so far.
We are a Middle power, so if we die, so will some of the global economy.
We have the 8th largest sovereign wealth fund in the world. (RL world)
Pro: Regulations, Military, Law and Order
Anti: Freedom of speech, Discrimination, CHEWING GUM
Just so you know, I don't think like that. That stuff is roleplaying Singapore (itself, the real life nation)
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Postby Candlewhisper Archive » Fri Jan 19, 2018 8:54 am

Great premise.

Immediate title ideas:
- Thought Insertion
(it's one of Schneider's first rank symptoms for schizophrenia. maybe too obscure)
- Emet / Met
(a reference to Golem mythology, and how the words in the head can be changed from truth (emet) to death (met). Okay really too obscure now.

Now not being pretentious, some more down to earth titles:
- Murder in Mind
- The Voices in My Head Made Me Do It
editors like linguistic ambiguity more than most people

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Postby Singapore no2 » Fri Jan 19, 2018 7:18 pm

Candlewhisper Archive wrote:Now not being pretentious, some more down to earth titles:
- Murder in Mind
- The Voices in My Head Made Me Do It

Went for one of the non-pretentious options.
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Death Note
This is a Modern-Tech nation. We only put a satellite and a man into space so far.
We are a Middle power, so if we die, so will some of the global economy.
We have the 8th largest sovereign wealth fund in the world. (RL world)
Pro: Regulations, Military, Law and Order
Anti: Freedom of speech, Discrimination, CHEWING GUM
Just so you know, I don't think like that. That stuff is roleplaying Singapore (itself, the real life nation)
I have many issues, and you can find the complete list here.

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Postby Singapore no2 » Mon Jan 22, 2018 4:22 am

What else is needed to be done?
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We have the 8th largest sovereign wealth fund in the world. (RL world)
Pro: Regulations, Military, Law and Order
Anti: Freedom of speech, Discrimination, CHEWING GUM
Just so you know, I don't think like that. That stuff is roleplaying Singapore (itself, the real life nation)
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Postby Fauxia » Mon Jan 22, 2018 7:28 pm

I think you can take out the “I need help with the title” now ;)

Excellent writing, Sing no2! I mean, you’re always good, but I feel like you’ve been even better lately.
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Postby Singapore no2 » Mon Jan 22, 2018 8:17 pm

Fauxia wrote:I think you can take out the “I need help with the title” now ;)

Okay. Thanks.
Fauxia wrote:Excellent writing, Sing no2! I mean, you’re always good, but I feel like you’ve been even better lately.

I appreciate the support!
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Death Note
This is a Modern-Tech nation. We only put a satellite and a man into space so far.
We are a Middle power, so if we die, so will some of the global economy.
We have the 8th largest sovereign wealth fund in the world. (RL world)
Pro: Regulations, Military, Law and Order
Anti: Freedom of speech, Discrimination, CHEWING GUM
Just so you know, I don't think like that. That stuff is roleplaying Singapore (itself, the real life nation)
I have many issues, and you can find the complete list here.

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Postby Singapore no2 » Wed Feb 14, 2018 1:54 am

What else needs to me modified?
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Death Note
This is a Modern-Tech nation. We only put a satellite and a man into space so far.
We are a Middle power, so if we die, so will some of the global economy.
We have the 8th largest sovereign wealth fund in the world. (RL world)
Pro: Regulations, Military, Law and Order
Anti: Freedom of speech, Discrimination, CHEWING GUM
Just so you know, I don't think like that. That stuff is roleplaying Singapore (itself, the real life nation)
I have many issues, and you can find the complete list here.

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Postby Fauxia » Wed Feb 14, 2018 10:29 am

Might be a bit long
Reploid Productions wrote:Unfortunately, Max still won't buy the mods elite ninja assassin squads to use, so... no such luck.
Sandaoguo wrote:GP is a den of cynics and nihilists
My opinions do not represent any NS governments I may happen to be in (yeah right), any RL governments I may happen to be in (yeah right), the CIA, the NSA, the FBI. the Freemasons, the Illuminati, Opus Dei, the Knights Templar, the Organization for the Advancement of Cultural Marxism, Opus Dei, or any other organization. Unless I say they do, in which case, there is a nonzero chance.

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Postby Singapore no2 » Fri Feb 16, 2018 10:25 pm

Fauxia wrote:Might be a bit long

What should I cut?
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This is a Modern-Tech nation. We only put a satellite and a man into space so far.
We are a Middle power, so if we die, so will some of the global economy.
We have the 8th largest sovereign wealth fund in the world. (RL world)
Pro: Regulations, Military, Law and Order
Anti: Freedom of speech, Discrimination, CHEWING GUM
Just so you know, I don't think like that. That stuff is roleplaying Singapore (itself, the real life nation)
I have many issues, and you can find the complete list here.

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Postby Singapore no2 » Thu Feb 22, 2018 4:21 am

Whatever, submitted.
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This is a Modern-Tech nation. We only put a satellite and a man into space so far.
We are a Middle power, so if we die, so will some of the global economy.
We have the 8th largest sovereign wealth fund in the world. (RL world)
Pro: Regulations, Military, Law and Order
Anti: Freedom of speech, Discrimination, CHEWING GUM
Just so you know, I don't think like that. That stuff is roleplaying Singapore (itself, the real life nation)
I have many issues, and you can find the complete list here.

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Postby Fauxia » Thu Feb 22, 2018 5:05 am

Good luck
Reploid Productions wrote:Unfortunately, Max still won't buy the mods elite ninja assassin squads to use, so... no such luck.
Sandaoguo wrote:GP is a den of cynics and nihilists
My opinions do not represent any NS governments I may happen to be in (yeah right), any RL governments I may happen to be in (yeah right), the CIA, the NSA, the FBI. the Freemasons, the Illuminati, Opus Dei, the Knights Templar, the Organization for the Advancement of Cultural Marxism, Opus Dei, or any other organization. Unless I say they do, in which case, there is a nonzero chance.

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Postby Frihetalia » Tue Apr 28, 2020 12:40 am

I like it! Next submission, also try to add a middle-ground. Like not letting the robot continue working but not murdering it, since all three options could mess up a countries civil rights rating.

Or, in this case, not let medical devices be open source lol

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Postby Frihetalia » Tue Apr 28, 2020 12:40 am

I like it, nice writing! Next submission, also try to add a middle-ground. Like not letting the robot continue working but not murdering it, since all three options could mess up a countries civil rights rating.

Or, in this case, not let medical devices be open source lol

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Postby Tinhampton » Tue Apr 28, 2020 12:45 am

Frihetalia wrote:snip

A bit too late for feedback now - this one's been accepted as Issue #1027 "Murder in Mind..." and the author CTEd last year
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