[SUBMITTED] Where The Sun Don't Shine

[Frieden-und Freudenland]

This is NationStates, where's the option of "We can change the weather, damn it!"?

6. [option]"Hey, who says we can't change the weather?" asks @@RANDOMNAME@@, your eccentric neighbour, blowing away the papers on your desk with a leaf-blower. "Look here, it is those damn'd clouds that cover the Sun, and we're gonna build a huuuugggge leaf-blower-thing and blow the clouds away all the way to Smalltopia. What d'you think?"
[effect]@@NAME@@ wastes public money on scientifically unsound projects

[Frieden-und Freudenland]

Bump.

More comments before submission?

[Jutsa]

Yeah, just kind-of skimming as it looks like a really good issue,
but I noticed(while looking for punctuation errors) that you've used the word "asked" after the first dialogue for the three last options.
You could, perhaps, use "asks", "questions", and... well, anything like "snaps" or "argues" for the last one.
Your choice, though. It otherwise looks good to me.

[Trotterdam]

[validity]bad weather

Okay, I questioned the relevance of this before, and I still do. While the evidence shows some relationship between weather and vitamin D deficiency, some of the worst-affected places are in the sunny Middle East, so clearly being cloudy isn't actually a requirement for this to be a problem.

[Frieden-und Freudenland]

[validity]bad weather

Okay, I questioned the relevance of this before, and I still do. While the evidence shows some relationship between weather and vitamin D deficiency, some of the worst-affected places are in the sunny Middle East, so clearly being cloudy isn't actually a requirement for this to be a problem.

Well, yes, maybe it could be valid for all nations. But isn't it funnier when nations with bad weather get this issue?

[Frieden-und Freudenland]

Yeah, just kind-of skimming as it looks like a really good issue,
but I noticed(while looking for punctuation errors) that you've used the word "asked" after the first dialogue for the three last options.
You could, perhaps, use "asks", "questions", and... well, anything like "snaps" or "argues" for the last one.
Your choice, though. It otherwise looks good to me.

Alright.

3 is "asks," 4 is "butts in" (*wink wink*), and 5 is "snaps."

[Frieden-und Freudenland]

Submitted!

Thanks to everyone for comments and suggestions

[Australian rePublic]

Good luck!