by Orgrua » Thu Mar 16, 2017 9:24 pm
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by Trotterdam » Thu Mar 16, 2017 11:45 pm
by Barunia » Thu Mar 16, 2017 11:55 pm
by Australian rePublic » Fri Mar 17, 2017 2:44 am
by Candlewhisper Archive » Fri Mar 17, 2017 3:23 am
Orgrua wrote:Title: A for Effort
Description: After a news story surfaced about a home-schooled student's acceptance into the nation's top school, @@CAPITOL@@ University with a supposed 5.0 weighted GPA, questions are being tossed around regarding the legitimacy of his grades.
by Australian rePublic » Fri Mar 17, 2017 4:06 am
Candlewhisper Archive wrote:If you're willing to take your time, I think we can get somewhere with this one.Orgrua wrote:Title: A for Effort
Description: After a news story surfaced about a home-schooled student's acceptance into the nation's top school, @@CAPITOL@@ University with a supposed 5.0 weighted GPA, questions are being tossed around regarding the legitimacy of his grades.
So let's start here.
In the upsides, this is a nice concise opening, with good writing and good English.
GPA is, as has been mentioned, very much an American abbreviation. The concept of grade point average exists in a lot of RL nations, but mostly in ones where you have multiple examinations being taken with a universal numerical scoring system. Contrast the UK, which uses lettered grades (A, B, C, etc.), or the French Baccalauréat, which has a system of streams and weighting, and you can see that your initial premise here may be too parochial.
As has been suggested, I think maybe do some research and change the phrasing so that it is more internationally applicable.
On a separate, point, note issue #668, How To Examine Your Testees, which was my self-edit recent issue. There's a high risk of sizeable overlap here, as my issue asks about different approaches to examinations and standardised testing, and as one option suggests home-schooling and avoiding universal standards altogether. Worth being aware of and reading that issue, to make sure you stay as distinct as possible.
by Orgrua » Fri Mar 17, 2017 9:26 am
Barunia wrote:The effect for option 1 doesn't seem to make sense. If we are accepting home-schooled student marks at face value, then we believe that the kid has a university pass mark. The effect says that universities won't let him in. But if he has got the mark, the uni should let him in. The effect basically states the exact opposite of what a person choosing option 1 would expect to see.
Also a 5.0 GPA means nothing to me, probably because I'm not American. I'm assuming it's American. Perhaps change it to something more general, like "with a perfect admissions score."
Also, the correct macro would be @@CAPITAL@@' with two As.
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by Orgrua » Fri Mar 17, 2017 9:32 am
Australian Republic wrote:It's always nice to see a new writer This is a brilliant premise for an issue, and I am surprised that it wasn't thought of sooner
But let's see,
1. Option 1- How would a parent have the right to decide whether or not a student's marks are adequate for university, isn't there some auditing process? If so, why is this contested
2. Option 2- Not all nations have school buses, some use public transport. Also, why limit to bus, why not trains, or any other form of transport
3. Option 3- Doesn't using standardised testing and curricular defeat the purpose of homeschooling in the first place?
4. Description- I have no knowledge of how education actually works, but would assume that every nation has a different GPA system (though there is an extremely high chance that I am wrong). I wouldn't recommend specifying numbers. Just say that it was very good marks
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by Orgrua » Fri Mar 17, 2017 9:39 am
Candlewhisper Archive wrote:If you're willing to take your time, I think we can get somewhere with this one.Orgrua wrote:Title: A for Effort
Description: After a news story surfaced about a home-schooled student's acceptance into the nation's top school, @@CAPITOL@@ University with a supposed 5.0 weighted GPA, questions are being tossed around regarding the legitimacy of his grades.
So let's start here.
In the upsides, this is a nice concise opening, with good writing and good English.
GPA is, as has been mentioned, very much an American abbreviation. The concept of grade point average exists in a lot of RL nations, but mostly in ones where you have multiple examinations being taken with a universal numerical scoring system. Contrast the UK, which uses lettered grades (A, B, C, etc.), or the French Baccalauréat, which has a system of streams and weighting, and you can see that your initial premise here may be too parochial.
As has been suggested, I think maybe do some research and change the phrasing so that it is more internationally applicable.
On a separate, point, note issue #668, How To Examine Your Testees, which was my self-edit recent issue. There's a high risk of sizeable overlap here, as my issue asks about different approaches to examinations and standardised testing, and as one option suggests home-schooling and avoiding universal standards altogether. Worth being aware of and reading that issue, to make sure you stay as distinct as possible.
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by Orgrua » Fri Mar 17, 2017 9:40 am
Trotterdam wrote:Don't universities have entrance exams? I don't think you have to rely entirely on the parent's say-so for the student's grades.
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by Orgrua » Fri Mar 17, 2017 9:58 am
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by Abhichandra » Fri Mar 17, 2017 4:47 pm
Option: "I think I've got the perfect solution for this situation," declares @@RANDOMNAME@@, CEO of Home-Skool Inc."With the new LearningLab 9000 platform, home-schooled students can now take all their classes online and prepackaged. Think about how much simpler things would be. Each student must enroll in six classes per year at only $200 each. There would be no need for standardized testing if all quizzes and tests are graded automatically and personally verified by our staff, for the low price of $149.97 per course verification. Just sign here, and we can roll the LearningLab 9000 into every home-school in @@NAME@@!
by Orgrua » Fri Mar 17, 2017 7:33 pm
Abhichandra wrote:Option: "I think I've got the perfect solution for this situation," declares @@RANDOMNAME@@, CEO of Home-Skool Inc."With the new LearningLab 9000 platform, home-schooled students can now take all their classes online and prepackaged. Think about how much simpler things would be. Each student must enroll in six classes per year at only $200 each. There would be no need for standardized testing if all quizzes and tests are graded automatically and personally verified by our staff, for the low price of $149.97 per course verification. Just sign here, and we can roll the LearningLab 9000 into every home-school in @@NAME@@!
I would changed this to:
There would be no need for standardized testing if all quizzes and tests are graded automatically and personally verified by our staff, for the low price of 149.97 @@CURRENCYPLURAL@@ per course verification. (Just because every nation has different currency)
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by Barunia » Sat Mar 18, 2017 3:02 am
Orgrua wrote:Barunia wrote:The effect for option 1 doesn't seem to make sense. If we are accepting home-schooled student marks at face value, then we believe that the kid has a university pass mark. The effect says that universities won't let him in. But if he has got the mark, the uni should let him in. The effect basically states the exact opposite of what a person choosing option 1 would expect to see.
Also a 5.0 GPA means nothing to me, probably because I'm not American. I'm assuming it's American. Perhaps change it to something more general, like "with a perfect admissions score."
Also, the correct macro would be @@CAPITAL@@' with two As.
For the GPA thing, I'll change it to an average grade percentage. But for the result, I said universities don't accept them because they don't trust a home-schooled student's final report card done by their parents. They don't trust the grades and won't usually let them in. I'm fixing the other issues addressed not only in this reply but in others as well. Changes will be shown in blue.
by Orgrua » Sat Mar 18, 2017 6:47 am
Barunia wrote:Orgrua wrote:
For the GPA thing, I'll change it to an average grade percentage. But for the result, I said universities don't accept them because they don't trust a home-schooled student's final report card done by their parents. They don't trust the grades and won't usually let them in. I'm fixing the other issues addressed not only in this reply but in others as well. Changes will be shown in blue.
I understand what you are saying about not trusting the grade, but the problem is that the mother is arguing that the university should trust the grade. By choosing this issue, my government is choosing to side with the mother on this. In other words, we're effectiveley legislating that univesities have to accept a homeschool grade at face value. In that case, the effect line makes no sense.
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by Orgrua » Sat Mar 18, 2017 9:52 pm
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by Abhichandra » Sat Mar 18, 2017 9:56 pm
Orgrua wrote:Just checking before I submit, is this good enough to do so? If no response is received within 24 hours, I will submit the issue.
at only $200 each.
by Australian rePublic » Sun Mar 19, 2017 3:24 am
by Candlewhisper Archive » Sun Mar 19, 2017 9:31 am
by Orgrua » Sun Mar 19, 2017 12:42 pm
Candlewhisper Archive wrote:3 days is too fast. Not even got past the description yet, and a lot of people won't even have read it yet.
Set this thread back to draft, I think, and keep at it for a few weeks.
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by Candlewhisper Archive » Mon Mar 20, 2017 1:44 am
by Orgrua » Mon Mar 20, 2017 11:49 am
Candlewhisper Archive wrote:It's fine, I've deleted the submission. Just change this back to a draft thread, and resubmit it when its ready.
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by Drasnia » Mon Mar 20, 2017 10:01 pm
But why was this suspicious? There needs to be an event that throws doubt on his grades, like him flunking his first term or something. Maybe he got a massive scholarship because of these supposedly false scores and so part of the issue is of academic and financial fraud.Orgrua wrote:Title: A for Effort
Description: After a news story surfaced about a home-schooled student's acceptance into the nation's top school, @@CAPITAL@@ University with supposedly near perfect grades in all classes, questions are being tossed around regarding the legitimacy of his grades.
There may or may not be a flag for banning formal education, but that's an editorial call and not particularly important.Validity: All
Again, I don't get why people doubt this one kid without any reason for it.Option: "I don't understand why my son can't do well in school without being called a liar for it," shouts @@RANDOMNAMEFEMALE@@, the home-schooling mother of @@RANDOMNAMEMALE@@, a future student at @@CAPITAL@@ University. "My son has worked extremely hard throughout these past four years. I gave him the grades I think he deserved; the idea of me not doing as such is absurd. His admittance to such a prestigious university is enough proof of his excellence, so I think the government should ban all entrance exams for colleges; he already proved himself.
Effect: Regular high school students try to bribe their teachers for extra points, in order to keep up with the the grades of home-schooling students.
Stats: Increases: Authoritarianism, Charmlessness, Corruption, Government Size, Industry: Arms Manufacturing, Industry: Automobile Manufacturing, Industry: Basket Weaving, Industry: Pizza Delivery, Obesity, Recreational Drug Use, Wealth Gaps, Youth Rebelliousness; Decreases: Economy, Average Income, Ignorance, Industry: Book Publishing, Industry: Information Technology, Public Education, Scientific Advancement, Tourism
This is a better option idea. It'd be interesting if you banned homeschooling, though as it stands the case isn't very compelling. Once again, there needs to be that event that makes it seem like there's some sort of fraud or something going. The line about free school I think will prove to be a validity problem.Option: "You'd have better luck having Pinocchio try to convince me of those grades," disagrees @@RANDOMNAME@@, Superintendent of @@CAPITAL@@ Secondary Schools. "If this student has no disabilities and resides in a house that has access to several major modes of public transportation, there is no reason why he should even be able to be home-schooled. This great country offers free education through high school, and it makes no sense to continue to allow home-schooling. I say we ban it for the greater good of @@NAME@@!"
Effect: Socially awkward children used to a home environment don't fit in their giant classes.
Stats: Increases: Authoritarianism, Government Size, Public Education, Public Transport, Scientific Advancement, Social Conservatism, Taxation; Decreases: Averageness, Cheerfulness, Freedom from Taxation, Inclusiveness, Obesity
Not a fan of hard-coded costs. It'd be funnier if this guy spoke like "For just a nominal fee™, you can purchase our LearningLab9000©" and "declares @@RANDOMNAME@@, CEO of Home-Skool Inc.©®℠™"Option: "I think I've got the perfect solution for this situation," declares @@RANDOMNAME@@, CEO of Home-Skool Inc. "With the new LearningLab 9000 platform, home-schooled students can now take all their classes online and prepackaged. Each student must enroll in six classes per year at just 200 @@CURRENCYPLIRAL@@ each. There would be no debate about validity, since all assessments are graded automatically and personally verified by our staff, for the low price of 149.97 @@CURRENCYPLURAL@@, per course verification. Just sign here, and we can roll the LearningLab 9000 into every home-school in @@NAME@@!
Effect: Only the parents who can afford the LearningLab 9000 can secure a high school education for their children.
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by Candlewhisper Archive » Wed Mar 22, 2017 3:47 am
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