by Dytarma » Wed Mar 15, 2017 7:31 pm
by The Atlae Isles » Wed Mar 15, 2017 7:50 pm
Dytarma wrote:[Title] Murderous Dog Rampage!! Help!!
[Description] After a recent video had been previously released on Whotube, a popular video sharing website, showed a large dog with no leash attacking and mauling to death a much smaller dog, with the smaller dog being on its leash with two grandparents. The incident caused a lot of people to be outraged towards the owner of the large dog, and both the small and large dog owners have come to you to discuss the problem, not just for them, but also for others just like their problem.
[Option] “M-my baby dog!” Sobs @@RANDOMNAMEFEMALE@@, as @@HE@@ is grabbings a tissue. “I was walking my dog, and then out of nowhere, I see this, monstrous thing that I’m ashamed to call a dog. It mauled my little puppy to the point where I hardly recognized it, and I had to carry it all the way to the vet, and it was already too late. It’s just.. just..” She continues to cry as her husband steps in. “We need to get rid of the monsters; I don’t care what you do with them.”
[Effect] large dogs are being shot to death en masse to protect small dogs.
[Option] “Now hold on here, it’s not the dog’s fault he mauled that other dog.” Say the large dog’s owner, @@RANDOMNAME@@, as @@HE@@ is feeding @@HIS@@ dog dog-flavored food. “It’s mine. I should’ve been more responsible and had tied up my dog to a fence post or something, but instead, I decided to leave him untied, and he then went off to kill that pup! Please, make sure people like me can’t own pets of any sort, for other dogs’ protection!”
[Effect] dog owners are forced to take tests based on things relating to being humane.
[Option] “Maybe that dog was up to no good.” Exclaims @@RANDOMNAME@@, a dogphysiatristpsychiatrist who brought you a picture of a dog. “I’ve had peoplewho'rewhose dogs go up and strip off the living meat and bones of other animals. What’s even weirder is that they are great pet owners! Maybe instead of having the people be tested on, we should have the dogs be tested on by having pictures of other animals surround them.”
[Effect] dogs who didn’t pass the test are sent out to be withwolfswolves.
by Candlewhisper Archive » Thu Mar 16, 2017 3:14 am
by Dytarma » Thu Mar 16, 2017 4:12 am
by Socio Polor » Thu Mar 16, 2017 4:33 am
Dytarma wrote:Alright, I lessened the use of the word "dog", and made some other changes The Atlae Islands suggested. Do you guys have anything for Effect 2?
by Dytarma » Thu Mar 16, 2017 4:57 am
by Candlewhisper Archive » Thu Mar 16, 2017 6:26 am
by Dytarma » Thu Mar 16, 2017 10:53 am
by Candlewhisper Archive » Fri Mar 17, 2017 1:59 am
Dytarma wrote:[Title] Murderous Dog Rampage!! Help!!
[Description] After a recent video had been previously released on Whotube, a popular video sharing website, showed a large hound with no leash attacking and mauling to death a much smaller pup, with the smaller animal being on its leash with two grandparents. The incident caused a lot of people to be outraged towards the owner of the big hound, and both the small and large dog owners have come to you to discuss the problem, not just for them, but also for others who have the same problem.
[Option] “M-my baby puppy!” Sobs @@RANDOMNAMEFEMALE@@, as @@HE@@ is grabbing a tissue. “I was just walking my dog, and then out of nowhere, I see this, monstrous thing that I’m ashamed to call a man's best friend. It mauled my little puppy to the point where I hardly recognized it, and I had to carry it all the way to the vet, and it was already too late. It’s just.. just..” She continues to cry as her husband steps in. “We need to get rid of those hideous monsters; I don’t care what you do with them.”
[Effect] dogs who fail the height and weight test often get shot to death or deported.
[Option] “Now hold on here, it’s not the hound’s fault he mauled that other dog.” Say the large dog’s owner, @@RANDOMNAME@@, as @@HE@@ is feeding @@HIS@@ canine dog-flavored food. “It’s mine. I should’ve been more responsible and had tied up my dog to a fence post or something, but instead, I decided to leave him untied, and he then went off to kill that pup! Please, make sure people like me can’t own pets of any sort, for other dogs’ protection! And let's be honest, it's their fault for having their puppy be so small.”
[Effect] people wanting to own a pet are rejected due to low GPA.
[Option] “Maybe that hound was up to no good.” Exclaims @@RANDOMNAME@@, a canine psychiatrist who brought you a picture of a small pup to keep on your desk. “I’ve had people whose dogs go up and strip off the living meat and bones of other animals. What’s even weirder is that the people are great pet owners! Maybe instead of having the people be tested on, we should have the dogs be tested by height and weight, and maybe even by having pictures of other animals surround them 24/7.”
[Effect] dogs who didn’t pass the test are sent out to be with wolves.
Scenic tours are unheard of after most environmental laws were abolished, the government snoops on private internet connections, vitriolic divorce proceedings have become prime-time television, and traffic jams are a common sight due to construction work from a massive overhaul of the nation's freeways. Crime, especially youth-related, is all-pervasive, probably because of the absence of a police force. Candlewhisper Archive's national animal is the Three-Toed Indecent Dolphin Mutant Thing, which is also the nation's favorite main course.
by Australian rePublic » Fri Mar 17, 2017 2:32 am
Candlewhisper Archive wrote:Grab a thesaurus, and find some synonyms for dog.
by Dytarma » Fri Mar 17, 2017 6:30 am
by Dytarma » Fri Mar 17, 2017 8:13 am
Indastion wrote:we could trank them take them to animal control and then give them a better home in the future after some big dog training
by Australian rePublic » Sun Mar 19, 2017 4:31 am
by Dytarma » Sun Mar 19, 2017 7:17 am
by Australian rePublic » Sun Mar 19, 2017 7:30 am
by Dytarma » Sun Mar 19, 2017 10:54 am
by Dytarma » Mon Mar 20, 2017 6:35 am
Dytarma wrote:Ah, I see now. I'll try working into it later.
by Australian rePublic » Tue Mar 21, 2017 3:06 pm
by Dytarma » Tue Mar 21, 2017 6:57 pm
Australian Republic wrote:1. Effect for option 1- how about they're forcfully given lethal injections
2. Option 2- Nobody would ever own up to a problem like that
3. Effect for option 2- Not eferyone knows what a GPA isnot every country uses GPAs
by Golf Ball Liberty » Wed Mar 22, 2017 11:17 am
by Dytarma » Wed Mar 22, 2017 1:43 pm
Golf Ball Liberty wrote:[desc] not [description]
by Candlewhisper Archive » Wed Mar 22, 2017 3:01 pm
by Dytarma » Wed Mar 22, 2017 3:07 pm
Candlewhisper Archive wrote:No, he's right. The correct format is
[title]
[desc]
[validity]
[option]
[effect]
[stats]
Though unless you're using the advanced form, it doesn't matter.
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