by Worris » Mon May 09, 2016 1:12 pm
by Justin States 3 » Mon May 09, 2016 1:13 pm
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by Nationalist Gold Union » Mon May 09, 2016 1:23 pm
Worris wrote:Description: Today, you plan on creating a Tweeter Page for your government but you are unsure what to use it for.
Worris wrote:Validity: Not valid for people with low averageness and people with banned computers.
Worris wrote:[option] "Oh my god, this is like, a really good idea! Just imagine it!" says @@RANDOMNAME@@, your youngest advisor. "We can have a flashy pic, and a super neat banner! Also, we can tell the people about government stuff. I'll get it set up!"
[effect] "@NAME@ Government" is one of the most followed Tweeter Pages.
[stats] averageness and taxation goes up SLIGHTLY.
Worris wrote:[option] "That's a great idea n' all, but why not make some extra money," @@RANDOMNAME@@, your Minister of Economy says, while enjoying a Popso Light. "We could sponsor companies on the page and get a little extra money! It's a win for us and the companies!"
[effect] "Popso Sponsered Government Page" is the top page on Tweeter right now.
[stats] economy and taxation go up and so do industries but only SLIGHTLY.
How is it?
by Worris » Mon May 09, 2016 1:30 pm
Nationalist Gold Union wrote:Worris wrote:Description: Today, you plan on creating a Tweeter Page for your government but you are unsure what to use it for.
Perhaps explain what Tweeter is supposed to be? Also "page" should be lowercased. Also, why should it be "Today, you plan on"? Maybe "@@DENONYM@@s have been asking for the government to create a Tweeter page" would work better. Also that title is a bit uncreative... And "unsure what to you it for" doesn't make sense or correspond with the options of the issue.Worris wrote:Validity: Not valid for people with low averageness and people with banned computers.
Why low averageness?Worris wrote:[option] "Oh my god, this is like, a really good idea! Just imagine it!" says @@RANDOMNAME@@, your youngest advisor. "We can have a flashy pic, and a super neat banner! Also, we can tell the people about government stuff. I'll get it set up!"
[effect] "@NAME@ Government" is one of the most followed Tweeter Pages.
[stats] averageness and taxation goes up SLIGHTLY.
That's a little short of a response. Also instead of "@NAME@ Government" it should be @NAME@'s government. And pages shouldn't be capitalised.Worris wrote:[option] "That's a great idea n' all, but why not make some extra money," @@RANDOMNAME@@, your Minister of Economy says, while enjoying a Popso Light. "We could sponsor companies on the page and get a little extra money! It's a win for us and the companies!"
[effect] "Popso Sponsered Government Page" is the top page on Tweeter right now.
[stats] economy and taxation go up and so do industries but only SLIGHTLY.
How is it?
Sponsored*. And "Popso Sponsored Government Page" seems a little ambiguous, no? How about "@@NAMES@@'s social media pages tend to talk about the cool, refreshing taste of POPSO® instead of national happenings"
Also add a third option about how silly and pointless a tweeter page would be. Other than that and a few grammar mistakes, I think this issue isn't too bad.
by Logophilia Lyricalia » Mon May 09, 2016 2:22 pm
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Zakuvia wrote:If you aren't imagining a chain gang of adorable old retirees building a wall with Fixodent and using their Hoverounds as tow trucks then you're not the NS I remember.
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