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[Draft]Hear Their bee Typos

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Farengeto
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Founded: Jun 22, 2013
Democratic Socialists

[Draft]Hear Their bee Typos

Postby Farengeto » Thu May 01, 2014 2:31 pm

Name:Hear Their bee Typos

Description: Parliament has ground to a halt after a typo was discovered in the constitution of @@NAME@@, with debates divided on how they should be fixed. Your advisors have asked you to intervene.

[option]"@@LEADER@@, we must give the Speaker the ability to make these changes," says @@RANDOMNAME@@, who also happens to be the Speaker. "There's no sense bogging down the Parliament with these endless debates over silly little changes. And while we're at it, I'll just change a few words here."
[effect]the government regularly modifies the constitution.
[stats]corruption increases, political freedom decreases

[option]"WHERE'S THE OVERSIGHT! WHAT DETERMINES A TYPO?" screams political rights activist and opposition leader @@RANDOMNAME@@. "All changes must be determined by a lengthy debate and a consensus vote! It's the only fair way."
[effect]Parliament is stalemated over the benefits of numeric vs alphabetic labeling conventions.
[stats]government size increases, political freedom increases, administration costs increase

[option]"Why do we even a constitution?" asks your uncle, @RANDOMNAME@@. "Surely you don't need a piece of paper telling you how to run the country? After all, you know best."
[effect]the Parliament has been demolished and replaced by the private castle of @@LEADER@@.
[stats]political freedom decreases, civil rights decreases, authoritarianism increases

I wasn't really sure about the stats for the first or effect for the third, so I could especially use some feedback there.

The typos in the issue name are entirely intentional.
Last edited by Farengeto on Thu May 01, 2014 7:25 pm, edited 2 times in total.

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Yeezyville
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Founded: Jan 29, 2014
Ex-Nation

Postby Yeezyville » Sat May 03, 2014 11:35 am

A funny effect for the first option could be "The @@NAME@@ Constitution now reads, '4 Legs Good, 2 Legs Better'."

Your stats are fine, but what I'd recommend doing is going to the Analysis page from your nation and going through all of the categories. While you're going through the categories, just think "Would my issue affect this?".
Please give me suggestions for how to fix this issue: viewtopic.php?f=13&t=298846

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Los Pollos Grandes
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Founded: Dec 04, 2013
Ex-Nation

Postby Los Pollos Grandes » Sun May 04, 2014 11:41 am

About the last one...I think that there are some countries out there that have an oral constitution.

Just a little idea for another option there.
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Burgera
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Founded: Oct 03, 2013
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Postby Burgera » Sun May 04, 2014 12:15 pm

It's not realistic enough for countries to have typos in their constitutions and it just doesn't fit to have a long, bureaucratic discussion about it. Also, it almost doesn't affect any of the ingame stats.
Last edited by Burgera on Sun May 04, 2014 12:16 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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