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Sooo, the big question RE bicameralism is how to get a situation going for such an issue to start. Anyone have any ideas for such a thing?

The Finntopian Empire wrote:I am trying to write better issues but I don't know how, I have written quite a few issues but none of them have been published, is this normal? or am I bad at writing?

Issues take a long time to be accepted, if ever. Don't worry too much about it.

Generally you will want to post drafts on the Got Issues forum so that other writers and editors can critique your idea before you submit it. Those improvements and the discussion the draft starts will exponentially improve your chances of getting it accepted but, again, no guarantees.

If your issue is accepted you'll just get a telegram telling you as such one day.

Chan Island wrote:Sooo, the big question RE bicameralism is how to get a situation going for such an issue to start. Anyone have any ideas for such a thing?

Threat of invasion from the United Federation "to bring democracy to @@NAME@@", perhaps? It was an issue premise I once entertained.

How long does it take for an issue to be accepted? I haven't submitted any accepted ones before, but my guess is about 6 months.

Daarwyrth wrote:Threat of invasion from the United Federation "to bring democracy to @@NAME@@", perhaps? It was an issue premise I once entertained.

They'll even invade nations that are already democratic but unicameral?

Trotterdam wrote:

Daarwyrth wrote:Threat of invasion from the United Federation "to bring democracy to @@NAME@@", perhaps? It was an issue premise I once entertained.

They'll even invade nations that are already democratic but unicameral?

Could be that they consider bicameralism an inherent part of democracy, and an abolishment of that as an attempt at Autocracy? Invasion may be a little excessive, but otherwise some sort of international critique or sanctions. It was just a thought of course, not a "we must do this" it's really difficult to think of an exciting scenario for this other than "people aren't pleased with your decision to abolish the upper house and have petitioned you to return to bicameralism".

The Finntopian Empire wrote:I am trying to write better issues but I don't know how, I have written quite a few issues but none of them have been published, is this normal? or am I bad at writing?

Your four issue submissions were really bad. As in so bad they are borderline spam - and spamming issues results in warnings. I am struggling to take your request here seriously, given your issues have included:

"The secret organisation of FC has recently discovered a juice found in dinosaur excrement will make humans have superpowers." as a premise, "Well laddy dad" and "strippers overjoyed at rise of small notes!" as titles, and "freebee issue!" as your fourth - which gives you a choice of "+1" to various different stats.

If you are here seriously, then draft your issues in this forum. Post a new thread for each one, and seek feedback from other experienced issues players/authors. Read this thread too, as it explains how to write a good issue.

I've just noticed the FAQ needs a minor update -

Candlewhisper Archive wrote:Is there a list of all the issues somewhere?

Jutsa maintains this list. Please note that it may not always be up to date with new issues added into the game.

I plan on making my first issue, but I cannot think of an idea of what it will be about. Help

Free Ravensburg wrote:I plan on making my first issue, but I cannot think of an idea of what it will be about. Help

Try to look to your local news and media. What's happening in your town/city? What's happening in your local region? Or perhaps even your nation as a whole? A lot of issues are inspired by actuality in the real world, and I can assure you the newspapers or news sites are a treasure trove of inspiration

Daarwyrth wrote:

Free Ravensburg wrote:I plan on making my first issue, but I cannot think of an idea of what it will be about. Help

Try to look to your local news and media. What's happening in your town/city? What's happening in your local region? Or perhaps even your nation as a whole? A lot of issues are inspired by actuality in the real world, and I can assure you the newspapers or news sites are a treasure trove of inspiration :)

I would write about that canal ship getting stuck, but I think someone did that already, and I live in a quiet area, so no real news happens here.

Free Ravensburg wrote:

Daarwyrth wrote:Try to look to your local news and media. What's happening in your town/city? What's happening in your local region? Or perhaps even your nation as a whole? A lot of issues are inspired by actuality in the real world, and I can assure you the newspapers or news sites are a treasure trove of inspiration

I would write about that canal ship getting stuck, but I think someone did that already, and I live in a quiet area, so no real news happens here.

Yes, that was me, haha

Well, even if you live in a quiet area there may be interesting things to write about. Not all issues need to be about major world events, they can also be about the smaller things in life. And if you find that there isn't much that inspires you from regional news, try national news, or look even to international media and other countries. Neighbouring countries for example.

Daarwyrth wrote:

Free Ravensburg wrote:I would write about that canal ship getting stuck, but I think someone did that already, and I live in a quiet area, so no real news happens here.

Yes, that was me, haha :)

Well, even if you live in a quiet area there may be interesting things to write about. Not all issues need to be about major world events, they can also be about the smaller things in life. And if you find that there isn't much that inspires you from regional news, try national news, or look even to international media and other countries. Neighbouring countries for example.

I think about doing something from shakespeare, but would that be acceptable?

Free Ravensburg wrote:

Daarwyrth wrote:Yes, that was me, haha

Well, even if you live in a quiet area there may be interesting things to write about. Not all issues need to be about major world events, they can also be about the smaller things in life. And if you find that there isn't much that inspires you from regional news, try national news, or look even to international media and other countries. Neighbouring countries for example.

I think about doing something from shakespeare, but would that be acceptable?

It depends on what you want to do about Shakespeare. Do you want to write about Shakespeare's play being read less? There's an issue about that already. Do you want people to attend more Shakespeare plays in theatre? There's an issue about theatres lacking funding and income already. What do you have in mind involving Shakespeare?

Daarwyrth wrote:

Free Ravensburg wrote:I think about doing something from shakespeare, but would that be acceptable?

It depends on what you want to do about Shakespeare. Do you want to write about Shakespeare's play being read less? There's an issue about that already. Do you want people to attend more Shakespeare plays in theatre? There's an issue about theatres lacking funding and income already. What do you have in mind involving Shakespeare?

more like just a feud between two powerful families.

Free Ravensburg wrote:

Daarwyrth wrote:It depends on what you want to do about Shakespeare. Do you want to write about Shakespeare's play being read less? There's an issue about that already. Do you want people to attend more Shakespeare plays in theatre? There's an issue about theatres lacking funding and income already. What do you have in mind involving Shakespeare?

more like just a feud between two powerful families.

Unfortunately, there's an issue about that already. It even uses alterations on the names of the Montagues and Capulets. Issue 571 "Family Feud".

Daarwyrth wrote:

Free Ravensburg wrote:more like just a feud between two powerful families.

Unfortunately, there's an issue about that already. It even uses alterations on the names of the Montagues and Capulets. Issue 571 "Family Feud".

How about one where it makes 1, 2, or 3 houses of legislature?

Free Ravensburg wrote:

Daarwyrth wrote:Unfortunately, there's an issue about that already. It even uses alterations on the names of the Montagues and Capulets. Issue 571 "Family Feud".

How about one where it makes 1, 2, or 3 houses of legislature?

Well, the question of how to reverse unicameralism (in other words, restore bicameralism) is a topic that is still being discussed on how to approach. So far, a suitable approach to such an issue that makes sense and is exciting at the same time wasn't found, and it's proving very difficult to find a good angle. Until there is a reversal option, my advice would be not to add any issues that would allow a player to abolish bicameralism and install unicameralism. Perhaps an issue on tricameralism could be done, but then we'd have the entire dilemma start again on how to find an issue that reverses that.

Daarwyrth wrote:

Free Ravensburg wrote:How about one where it makes 1, 2, or 3 houses of legislature?

Well, the question of how to reverse unicameralism (in other words, restore bicameralism) is a topic that is still being discussed on how to approach. So far, a suitable approach to such an issue that makes sense and is exciting at the same time wasn't found, and it's proving very difficult to find a good angle. Until there is a reversal option, my advice would be not to add any issues that would allow a player to abolish bicameralism and install unicameralism. Perhaps an issue on tricameralism could be done, but then we'd have the entire dilemma start again on how to find an issue that reverses that.

So waiting on to see how we could do that.

How about something dealing with sports? i.e. unusual sports.

Free Ravensburg wrote:

Daarwyrth wrote:How about something dealing with sports? i.e. unusual sports.

That's a broad subject, yes, I bet there is something in there that hasn't been written about yet. What did you have in mind?

Daarwyrth wrote:

Free Ravensburg wrote:

That's a broad subject, yes, I bet there is something in there that hasn't been written about yet. What did you have in mind?

In my Lore, i have Siege the Castle, and it is very unorthodox. This existing would get some attention in real life. I would have it set with three alternatives, one where it is allowed, one where it isn't, and one that just bans sports all together.

Free Ravensburg wrote:

Daarwyrth wrote:That's a broad subject, yes, I bet there is something in there that hasn't been written about yet. What did you have in mind?

In my Lore, i have Siege the Castle, and it is very unorthodox. This existing would get some attention in real life. I would have it set with three alternatives, one where it is allowed, one where it isn't, and one that just bans sports all together.

Okay, from what I see in the factbook you state that the sport is fairly bloody (and thus I assume violent). The problem with this is that there is already an issue that talks about dangerous/violent sports and how they should be limited/banned. The issue in question is #415 "Brain Pain On The Sports Plain". Perhaps you could try to see whether there is a different angle regarding unusual sports. Not sure if this is a good suggestion, but maybe a new sport is becoming popular in your nation, but none of the stadiums, playing fields, or other sports accommodations are built for that sport? Players of the sport want to train/hold competitions, but they don't have anywhere to do so because of it. Perhaps that's an angle you could pursue?

Daarwyrth wrote:

Free Ravensburg wrote:In my Lore, i have Siege the Castle, and it is very unorthodox. This existing would get some attention in real life. I would have it set with three alternatives, one where it is allowed, one where it isn't, and one that just bans sports all together.

Okay, from what I see in the factbook you state that the sport is fairly bloody (and thus I assume violent). The problem with this is that there is already an issue that talks about dangerous/violent sports and how they should be limited/banned. The issue in question is #415 "Brain Pain On The Sports Plain". Perhaps you could try to see whether there is a different angle regarding unusual sports. Not sure if this is a good suggestion, but maybe a new sport is becoming popular in your nation, but none of the stadiums, playing fields, or other sports accommodations are built for that sport?

The last thing I can think of is LARPing, and it would fall under some other thing already done

Free Ravensburg wrote:

Daarwyrth wrote:Okay, from what I see in the factbook you state that the sport is fairly bloody (and thus I assume violent). The problem with this is that there is already an issue that talks about dangerous/violent sports and how they should be limited/banned. The issue in question is #415 "Brain Pain On The Sports Plain". Perhaps you could try to see whether there is a different angle regarding unusual sports. Not sure if this is a good suggestion, but maybe a new sport is becoming popular in your nation, but none of the stadiums, playing fields, or other sports accommodations are built for that sport?

The last thing I can think of is LARPing, and it would fall under some other thing already done

Doesn't have to be. I think you can think of a sport, or use even a sport that's already mentioned, and approach it from the subject that I suggested. Your nation doesn't have the sporting accommodations to allow a new popular sport to be properly practiced, that would seem as an interesting topic to write on! you could even use your nation's sport I think.

In any issues, is there a spoof of INTERPOL on the books? If not, any suggestions on what to name INTERPOL in the NS multiverse?

If you want to do something about Shakespeare, I don't think there is an issue about something like Macbeth. It's about an ambitious general who wants to become king. I'm sure there is a way to adapt that into a NS issue.