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Postby Socio Polor » Fri Jan 06, 2017 4:19 pm

In that case another thought I have is a issue that focuses on the 1 child per family law. I got this idea from it being a law in China(Not sure if it still is).
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Postby Ransium » Fri Jan 06, 2017 4:32 pm

Socio polor wrote:In that case another thought I have is a issue that focuses on the 1 child per family law. I got this idea from it being a law in China(Not sure if it still is).


638.4 (not updated on the offical thing yet) “You know, I think our friends in Dàguó have the right idea with their one child policy,” suggests population control expert Colin Zhu while going over the latest birth statistics. “Mironus has a population of 4.954 billion and growing. We can barely keep up as it is without adding orphans into the mix. I propose adopting Dàguó’s one child policy here while offering generous tax incentives for the good people of Mironus to adopt our remaining orphans. It may be a tad restrictive, but the people will thank me when they aren’t suffocating on the subway.”
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Postby Trotterdam » Fri Jan 06, 2017 9:31 pm

Ransium wrote:I'm considering a list type of issue that's premised on your nation having rocket for launching satellites to space with a payload that, for reasons I haven't fully worked out, is suddenly in need of being filled. You need to decide what type of satellite should be placed in the rocket, options I see possible are:
I doubt such a thing could happen "suddenly". It takes a lot of time and money to build a satellite that's hardened against the rigors of space and can be trusted to stay functioning for years on end without anyone being able to pop over for maintainance.

On the other hand, "our space program is underfunded, what can we best spend our meager budget for the next several years on?" is something that NASA faces on a regular basis.

We already have several issues about space program priorities, but they mostly focus on peaceful vs military use of space. There's room for a different angle.

Socio polor wrote:In that case another thought I have is a issue that focuses on the 1 child per family law. I got this idea from it being a law in China(Not sure if it still is).
Several issues, starting with #136 option 4 (which for some reason counts as legalizing slavery), as well as #638 option 4 that Ransium mentioned.

#096 option 4 also lets you kick "people with too many kids" out of your country, though it doesn't specifically identify "too many" as "two". Similarly, #326 option 1 allows you to forcibly break up "families consisting of more than three people", but it's not clear what's happening to them as it's more of a joke overreaction to an issue that's really about something else.

What I don't think exists in the game yet is a followup for nations that have already chosen to implement a one-child policy, that explores the effects on society of every family having only one child.

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Postby Socio Polor » Sat Jan 07, 2017 12:37 am

Thanks, I may make an issue regarding that
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Postby Noahs Second Country » Tue Jan 10, 2017 11:58 am

Can someone remove "citizens accidentally discovering a top secret military base" from the list?
I've written one on it and there is a draft out right now.
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Postby Drasnia » Tue Jan 10, 2017 12:22 pm

NoahS SeconD CountrY wrote:Can someone remove "citizens accidentally discovering a top secret military base" from the list?
I've written one on it and there is a draft out right now.

It only gets if/when an issue is published in the game covering that idea.
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Postby Cyborgs and Sentient Machines » Tue Jan 10, 2017 12:24 pm

"Dealing with aspects of a socialist/communist system - centralised vs. decentralised economic planning, electing/appointing managers/officers."

I think that is already handled in other issues.

https://nsindex.net/wiki/NationStates_Issue_No._472

https://nsindex.net/wiki/NationStates_Issue_No._339

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Postby Drasnia » Tue Jan 10, 2017 12:31 pm

Cyborgs And Sentient Machines wrote:"Dealing with aspects of a socialist/communist system - centralised vs. decentralised economic planning, electing/appointing managers/officers."

I think that is already handled in other issues.

https://nsindex.net/wiki/NationStates_Issue_No._472

https://nsindex.net/wiki/NationStates_Issue_No._339

I don't mean to speak for the IE Team, but I imagine that prompt is more of a general thing because there are all sorts of problems that crop up in specifically socialist and communist systems. The second half is just a way to help give an idea of what they're thinking of.
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Postby Nation of Quebec » Tue Jan 10, 2017 3:13 pm

Drasnia wrote:
NoahS SeconD CountrY wrote:Can someone remove "citizens accidentally discovering a top secret military base" from the list?
I've written one on it and there is a draft out right now.

It only gets if/when an issue is published in the game covering that idea.


Correct. I periodically update the list when the team comes up with some new suggestions for issue ideas and when new issues are added to the game that cover previous suggestions.

Just because you submitted or are working on an issue doesn't mean it'll automatically be accepted. Please be patient.
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Postby Noahs Second Country » Tue Jan 10, 2017 3:16 pm

Nation of Quebec wrote:
Drasnia wrote:It only gets if/when an issue is published in the game covering that idea.


Correct. I periodically update the list when the team comes up with some new suggestions for issue ideas and when new issues are added to the game that cover previous suggestions.

Just because you submitted or are working on an issue doesn't mean it'll automatically be accepted. Please be patient.

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Civil Rights Lovefest

Postby The Federation of Kendor » Thu Jan 12, 2017 4:32 am

I think i want to make an issue about a person getting killed in an amusement park ride and the family suing on it, but the owner don't want to compensate them. Is there a limit onhow many text i can put on the title of the issue, as i want to call it "I Have a Pen, I Have a Waiver, No Compensation"

PPAP reference by the way
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Postby Candlewhisper Archive » Thu Jan 12, 2017 5:12 am

The Federation of Kendor wrote:I think i want to make an issue about a person getting killed in an amusement park ride and the family suing on it, but the owner don't want to compensate them. Is there a limit onhow many text i can put on the title of the issue, as i want to call it "I Have a Pen, I Have a Waiver, No Compensation"

PPAP reference by the way


#585 is pretty much that, except I think I intervened at some stage to turn tragic death into "dozens of people left hanging upside down from stationary carriages for almost half an hour", as I thought that'd be more humorous.
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Postby The Federation of Kendor » Thu Jan 12, 2017 5:15 am

Candlewhisper Archive wrote:
The Federation of Kendor wrote:I think i want to make an issue about a person getting killed in an amusement park ride and the family suing on it, but the owner don't want to compensate them. Is there a limit onhow many text i can put on the title of the issue, as i want to call it "I Have a Pen, I Have a Waiver, No Compensation"

PPAP reference by the way


#585 is pretty much that, except I think I intervened at some stage to turn tragic death into "dozens of people left hanging upside down from stationary carriages for almost half an hour", as I thought that'd be more humorous.

So, what subject for issues do you think that can use the PPAP reference?
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Postby Candlewhisper Archive » Thu Jan 12, 2017 5:47 am

I don't think PPAP has achieved the notability of, say, Gangnam Style (youtube views for the latter are around three orders of magnitude higher, and its broken beyond the internet and into popular culture). At best PPAP deserves a minor reference within another issue, not an issue title to itself.

It's very easy to assume that memes that you've seen a lot are popular, but it's always worth looking at the numbers.
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Postby Outer Sparta » Thu Jan 12, 2017 5:03 pm

The Federation of Kendor wrote:I think i want to make an issue about a person getting killed in an amusement park ride and the family suing on it, but the owner don't want to compensate them. Is there a limit onhow many text i can put on the title of the issue, as i want to call it "I Have a Pen, I Have a Waiver, No Compensation"

PPAP reference by the way

That one's taken, but if you want to reverse the amusement park ban, then there's an idea.
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Postby The Federation of Kendor » Fri Jan 13, 2017 6:52 am

I want to ask, but is that allowed for one to not include the stat changes of an issue in the draft. I see some that don't do that
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Postby Ransium » Fri Jan 13, 2017 7:53 am

The Federation of Kendor wrote:I want to ask, but is that allowed for one to not include the stat changes of an issue in the draft. I see some that don't do that


They are optional. If you do include them, the editing team uses them as suggestions, meaning they may simply ignore some of them. My feeling is they shouldn't be added until the final draft, if at all.
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Postby Ransium » Fri Jan 13, 2017 10:49 pm

Am I missing it, or are there no issues on voter ID laws?

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Postby Trotterdam » Fri Jan 13, 2017 11:04 pm

Ransium wrote:Am I missing it, or are there no issues on voter ID laws?
Nope.

A draft has been submitted, though.

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Postby Candlewhisper Archive » Sat Jan 14, 2017 3:30 am

Ransium wrote:Am I missing it, or are there no issues on voter ID laws?


There have been good quality drafts on IDs which have been accepted. What take on this did you have in mind?
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Postby Ransium » Sat Jan 14, 2017 7:07 am

Very much along the lines of Chan's issue, which I'm fairly sure is sitting in the yes pool. I'm ditching the idea (I've got others...)

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Postby Socio Polor » Sat Jan 14, 2017 5:39 pm

About Issue #233 is it saying that 'Solo' was captured.
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Postby Drayxaso » Sun Jan 15, 2017 10:54 am

Frisbeeteria wrote:The People chart shows Leading Cause of Death. They are: ...Space Shuttle Mishap...

Alright, I need to know: How do you get this? What issue gives you this? Why aren't we using this more?
EDIT: This gives me an idea...
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Postby Outer Sparta » Sun Jan 15, 2017 11:36 am

I was thinking of writing an issue about farmed fish and its impacts, regulations, competition vs. wild-caught fish, etc.
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Postby Kentalia » Sun Jan 15, 2017 12:16 pm

Outer Sparta wrote:I was thinking of writing an issue about farmed fish and its impacts, regulations, competition vs. wild-caught fish, etc.

In what such context?

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