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[submitted]- Immigrant in the political field?

Postby Holaloperho » Sat May 07, 2011 4:57 am

This is my first time to summit a issue and I am a non-native speaker in English; if I make any mistake or this issue is being repeated, please inform me and I will change it ASAP, thank you :)

Title: Immigrant in the political field?

Description: After a controversial victory of an immigrant @@RANDOMNAME@@ winning a position in the parliament of @@NAME@@, the public are divided in opinion about should immigrant join the political field.

Validity: Valid for nations with democratic system which is conservative

[options] “Why should those *beep*ing foreigners get a seat in OUR glorious country’s parliament? This is OUR country and its politics should only be reserved for OUR country's people. Those immigrants come over and they just take OUR country’s welfare and yet they don't produce any positive effect. As I said, we should ban them from joining the political field and take away their voting rights. At the same time, we also need to tighten our immigrant policy to keep those useless immigrants from entering our country.” yelled @@RANDOMNAME@@, the founder and spokesman of @@NAME@@’s purity organization.
[effect] immigrants’ from other countries become @@NAME@@’s second-class citizens
[stats] funding for law and order increase, funding for defense increase, funding for welfare decrease, funding for social policy decrease, funding for healthcare decrease slightly, economy decrease slight, civil right decrease, political freedom decrease, crime decreases slightly, tax decrease slight

[options] “It's a shame for a nation like this to accept such a ridiculous idea!” shouted @@RANDOMNAME@@, the representative of the Immigrant’s Union in @@NAME@@, who had just been granted a @@NAME@@ian passport. “The only reason why this country thrives is because it is able to accept people which are capable from anywhere in the world, including people who are capable in politics. If we introduce such policy, we will destroy the foundation for our country's economy. Yes, I have to admit that some of them come in just because they want to get welfare, but that's a small price we have to pay for success.”
[effect] highly educated and super rich immigrants’ are widely seen in society while welfare and healthcare funding reach record-breaking number
[stats] funding for welfare increase, funding for social policy increase, funding for healthcare increase, economy increase, civil right increase, political freedom increase, crime increase slightly, tax increase

[options] “We don’t have to go to either extreme.” says @@RANDOMNAME@@, chairman of @@NAME@@’s chamber of commerce. “Yes, rich and educated immigrants are one of the factors for our country’s success, but the tax increase due to the increase of welfare and healthcare funding are harming our country’s economy, and my bonus, too. My suggestion is that we only accept immigrants that are useful to our country and we stop the others from becoming citizens.”
[effect] immigrants’ family are force to break apart since some members of the family doesn’t fit the requirement to become citizen in @@NAME@@.
[stats] economy increase, tax decrease slightly, civil rights decrease slightly, funding for social policy increase slightly, funding for healthcare decrease slightly, funding for welfare decrease slightly


Post have been edited according to what Aescentia suggest
Last edited by Holaloperho on Sun May 08, 2011 12:57 am, edited 5 times in total.
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Postby Hungramy » Sat May 07, 2011 5:05 am

It look's good to me and great job!

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Postby Aescentia » Sat May 07, 2011 9:59 am

A bit of copyediting:

Option 1 should read:
“Why should those *beep*ing foreigners get a seat in OUR glorious country’s parliament? This is OUR country and its politics should only be reserved for OUR country's people. Those immigrants come over and they just take OUR country’s welfare and yet they don't produce any positive effect. As I said, we should ban them from joining the political field and take away their voting rights. At the same time, we also need to tighten our immigrant policy to keep those useless immigrants from entering our country.” yelled @@RANDOMNAME@@, the founder and spokesman of @@NAME@@’s purity organization.


Option 2 should read:
“It's a shame for a nation like this to accept such a ridiculous idea!” shouted @@RANDOMNAME@@, the representative of the Immigrant’s Union in @@NAME@@, who had just been granted a @@NAME@@ian passport. “The only reason why this country thrives is because it is able to accept people which are capable from anywhere in the world, including people who are capable in politics. If we introduce such policy, we will destroy the foundation for our country's economy. Yes, I have to admit that some of them come in just because they want to get welfare, but that's a small price we have to pay for success.”


Option 3 should read:
“We don’t have to go to either extreme.” says @@RANDOMNAME@@, chairman of @@NAME@@’s chamber of commerce. “Yes, rich and educated immigrants are one of the factors for our country’s success, but the tax increase due to the increase of welfare and healthcare funding are harming our country’s economy, and my bonus, too. My suggestion is that we only accept immigrants that are useful to our country and we stop the others from becoming citizens.”


Lots of errors, but pretty good for a nonnative speaker!
Last edited by Aescentia on Sat May 07, 2011 10:02 am, edited 6 times in total.
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Postby Holaloperho » Sun May 08, 2011 12:46 am

Aescentia wrote:A bit of copyediting:

Lots of errors, but pretty good for a nonnative speaker!


Thanks! :) I have fixed the post already
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