Trotterdam wrote:You might want to add a bit to the main option text foreshadowing that effect line, too.Frieden-und Freudenland wrote:I changed the effect line accordingly. In fact, I have 2 candidates for effect lines. The first one states that mothers are assumed to love their children more than fathers do (echoing your suggestion) and the second one brings back the old effect line that I had deleted.
OK, I tried to add a few lines that foreshadow the effect line.