Here's my telegram template:
The United Empires of Britannia welcome you to NationStates. This game is full of regions just waiting for you to accept and join their ranks. I'm sure that you'll already have a few telegrams from other regions with tantalising offers. So why choose us?
For starters, this region is only for empires, queendoms, kingdoms, unions and commonwealths like you, therefore we specialise in them and can help you and your state on the road to greatness.
Second of all, there's so many jobs and positions that you can fill here. You can be head of an Embassy and help forge foreign relations with other regions, or become a politician and hope that one day you might become Prime Minister of our Union. There's so much to choose from.
Finally - we're small. Other regions want you to join their ranks purely to make their numbers look impressive (I've been there before myself - I know what it feels like), and don't care about everyone in their region. In our region, you're guaranteed to get your say in, because we're small. You can help forge the way for our region to go. Even if we do amass 100 or more nations, we'll still have the interests of our states at heart, and that'll never change.
Swayed you yet? If this has, please visit the region page by clicking here United Empires of Britannia.
Then, if I've managed to persuade you, become part of the region by clicking on 'Move to United Empires of Britannia' and visit our regional forum (link's in the factbook). More instructions are there.
Again, welcome to NationStates, and we look forward to seeing you soon.
Signed,
His Royal Majesty King of Malfonde and Holy Emperor of the Malfondese Empire
What do you think? Do I need to change stuff or is it something else I'm doing wrong (I'm post these telegrams to people who have just been filtered into the Pacific regions...)
Thanks ever so much!