by Poson » Sat Sep 26, 2020 9:13 pm
by Poson » Fri Oct 09, 2020 4:21 pm
by Tinhampton » Fri Oct 09, 2020 5:23 pm
The Prelude to the First World Order's Constitution wrote:In order to create a more stable region with a defined rule of law. I present to you a constitution which will serve as the supreme rule of the land And a way to judge situations in a more fare way.
by Poson » Fri Oct 09, 2020 6:24 pm
Tinhampton wrote:The Prelude to the First World Order's Constitution wrote:In order to create a more stable region with a defined rule of law. I present to you a constitution which will serve as the supreme rule of the land And a way to judge situations in a more fare way.
There are multiple grammatical mistakes and out-of-character references (in the offline sense, at least) in this sentence. Firstly, there should not be a full stop after the word "law;" secondly, it is neither traditional nor expected for a constitution to be introduced from the point of view of a single individual; thirdly, declaring that a particular constitution will be "the supreme rule of the land" makes no sense in English; fourthly, the word "And" should not be capitalised; and finally, the word "fair" has been misspelled as "fare."
As of its Constitution's enactment, the First World Order - which is an Anglophone roleplay community - had approximately 560 nations. If the person who wrote the Constitution was not a native English speaker, I would have imagined that at least one of the FWO's hundreds of other residents would have a good enough understanding of the language to avoid the careless mistakes observed in its Prelude, let alone those scattered within its fifteen "Emendations" (including an appendicial dispatch on how a bill becomes a law in the FWO - is the number of senators supposed to equal "nine" or "none total," for instance?).
by Comfed » Sat Oct 10, 2020 6:28 am
Poson wrote:Tinhampton wrote:There are multiple grammatical mistakes and out-of-character references (in the offline sense, at least) in this sentence. Firstly, there should not be a full stop after the word "law;" secondly, it is neither traditional nor expected for a constitution to be introduced from the point of view of a single individual; thirdly, declaring that a particular constitution will be "the supreme rule of the land" makes no sense in English; fourthly, the word "And" should not be capitalised; and finally, the word "fair" has been misspelled as "fare."
As of its Constitution's enactment, the First World Order - which is an Anglophone roleplay community - had approximately 560 nations. If the person who wrote the Constitution was not a native English speaker, I would have imagined that at least one of the FWO's hundreds of other residents would have a good enough understanding of the language to avoid the careless mistakes observed in its Prelude, let alone those scattered within its fifteen "Emendations" (including an appendicial dispatch on how a bill becomes a law in the FWO - is the number of senators supposed to equal "nine" or "none total," for instance?).
Sadly my submission was not approved and I don’t know who wrote that one
by Bhang Bhang Duc » Sat Oct 10, 2020 1:01 pm
Comfed wrote:So your region can’t be bothered to even spellcheck their constitution?
Pierconium wrote:I see Funk as an opportunistic manipulator that utilises the means available to him to reach his goals. In other words, a nation after my own heart.
RiderSyl wrote:If an enchantress made it so one raid could bring about world peace, Unibot would ask raiders to just sign a petition instead.
Sedgistan wrote:The SC has just has a spate of really shitty ones recently from Northumbria, his Watermelon fanboy…..
by Kingdom Of Casetaria » Sat Oct 10, 2020 1:41 pm
I know , i will try to get it edited into a better version
Our region was not experienced in raiding that timeBhang Bhang Duc wrote: You should see them trying to raid another region.I watched them trying to raid Asia from their RMB a couple or so months back. The phrase “couldn’t organise a piss-up in a brewery” comes to mind.
by Badjuristan » Sat Oct 10, 2020 1:52 pm
Kingdom Of Casetaria wrote:I know , i will try to get it edited into a better versionComfed wrote:So your region can’t be bothered to even spellcheck their constitution?
You should see them trying to raid another region.Our region was not experienced in raiding that timeBhang Bhang Duc wrote: I watched them trying to raid Asia from their RMB a couple or so months back. The phrase “couldn’t organise a piss-up in a brewery” comes to mind.
by Kingdom Of Casetaria » Sat Oct 10, 2020 1:56 pm
The government is getting better nowBadjuristan wrote:I've lived in FWO for a long time, and i love the region, but we suck at being Orginized.
No matter what we say, or how contrived out government seems, it's a hellhole up there
and our raids suck so much
Don't say "we sucked back then", We always sucked.
by Xeosia Later » Sat Oct 10, 2020 2:08 pm
Kingdom Of Casetaria wrote:The government is getting better nowBadjuristan wrote:I've lived in FWO for a long time, and i love the region, but we suck at being Orginized.
No matter what we say, or how contrived out government seems, it's a hellhole up there
and our raids suck so much
Don't say "we sucked back then", We always sucked.
by Jar Wattinree » Sat Oct 10, 2020 4:14 pm
Xeosia Later wrote:Kingdom Of Casetaria wrote: The government is getting better now
No. No the FWO military definitely sucks at raiding things. Maybe because only the minority of people in FWO actually care about raiding and such. I'm not even sure if it can be called a military in the first place, to be honest. The government may not be a burning trash fire, but the military is definitely horrible.
by Comfed » Sat Oct 10, 2020 6:26 pm
Badjuristan wrote:I've lived in FWO for a long time
by Badjuristan » Sun Oct 11, 2020 1:44 am
by Varanius » Sun Oct 11, 2020 9:09 pm
Angeloid Astraea wrote:I can't think of anyone that creates controversy out of nothing better than you!
Excidium Planetis wrote:Yeah, if you could enlighten me as to why you're such an asshole, that would be great.
Koth wrote:Vara is such a dedicated hater, it's impressive
Mlakhavia wrote:Vara isn't a gameplay personality, he's a concentrated ball of spite
by Team Lennox » Tue Oct 13, 2020 11:52 am
Varanius wrote:Why bother giving them this much attention? It’s not deserved.
by Varanius » Tue Oct 13, 2020 1:33 pm
Angeloid Astraea wrote:I can't think of anyone that creates controversy out of nothing better than you!
Excidium Planetis wrote:Yeah, if you could enlighten me as to why you're such an asshole, that would be great.
Koth wrote:Vara is such a dedicated hater, it's impressive
Mlakhavia wrote:Vara isn't a gameplay personality, he's a concentrated ball of spite
by Jar Wattinree » Tue Oct 13, 2020 4:12 pm
by Septaaria » Tue Oct 13, 2020 8:29 pm
Kingdom Of Casetaria wrote:I know , i will try to get it edited into a better versionComfed wrote:So your region can’t be bothered to even spellcheck their constitution?
Our region was not experienced in raiding that timeBhang Bhang Duc wrote: You should see them trying to raid another region.I watched them trying to raid Asia from their RMB a couple or so months back. The phrase “couldn’t organise a piss-up in a brewery” comes to mind.
by Kingdom Of Casetaria » Wed Oct 14, 2020 7:43 am
I think those were orders on the RMB to move and endorse the point of an occupation.Septaaria wrote:At the time? As far as I can tell you're still commanding raids from your RMB.
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