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Greater Rhodes wrote:

Kalasparata wrote:

Greater Rhodes wrote:Could use a little more detail. And by a little more detail I mean a lot more detail..

Where

History and Geography for a start, also emergency services, policing, military, You also have no information on your government, and little to no political information. For starters you should check out some fantastic factbooks like Pacitalia, and Grays Harbor...check out his website too.

Kalasparata wrote:I frixed mosr of it

Daistallia 2104 wrote:

Kalasparata wrote:I frixed mosr of it

Yes, you did indeed "frixed mosr" of it. Now try fixing it, as your spelling and grammar are still awful. Once you run it through a spell checker and grammar checker, we can start talking about style and substance.

Greater Rhodes wrote:

Kalasparata wrote:

Greater Rhodes wrote:Could use a little more detail. And by a little more detail I mean a lot more detail..

Where

History and Geography for a start, also emergency services, policing, military, You also have no information on your government, and little to no political information. For starters you should check out some fantastic factbooks like Pacitalia, and Grays Harbor...check out his website too.

Grays Harbor wrote:

Greater Rhodes wrote:

Kalasparata wrote:

Greater Rhodes wrote:Could use a little more detail. And by a little more detail I mean a lot more detail..

Where

History and Geography for a start, also emergency services, policing, military, You also have no information on your government, and little to no political information. For starters you should check out some fantastic factbooks like Pacitalia, and Grays Harbor...check out his website too.

umm... thanks.

Kalsparata, first off... use spellcheck. Seriously. The frequency of the misspellings make wanting to read it nearly mindbogglingly tedious. That is the biggest complaint. Also, "bumping" a factbook is rather pointless. You have a good bit of info, but some graphic illustrations also help. And when you use them, make them pertinent to what you are illustrating. Myself, I tend to go a bit graphic heavy, as that is what I enjoy doing. Its not for everybody, but I find it a hoot.

Kalasparata wrote:

Daistallia 2104 wrote:

Kalasparata wrote:I frixed mosr of it

Yes, you did indeed "frixed mosr" of it. Now try fixing it, as your spelling and grammar are still awful. Once you run it through a spell checker and grammar checker, we can start talking about style and substance.

I ran it throgh both!

Novograd IV wrote:its:
no-one OR
no one

NOT:
noone

Daistallia 2104 wrote:

Kalasparata wrote:

Daistallia 2104 wrote:

Kalasparata wrote:I frixed mosr of it

Yes, you did indeed "frixed mosr" of it. Now try fixing it, as your spelling and grammar are still awful. Once you run it through a spell checker and grammar checker, we can start talking about style and substance.

I ran it throgh both!

Clearly you did either 1) did nothing of the sort, 2) you didn't make the changes it suggested, or 3) ran it through a spell checker that accepts "desrt" and and "recto scale" as well as through a grammar checker that allows for randomized capitalization.

Kalasparata wrote:Well I did run it through it, it must be the origional, u -edited copy before the spell check which I spent about an hour on , I'll fix it when I'm bothered

Kalasparata wrote:Introduction
The Democratic Republic of Kalasparata is a Central, liberal Nation where everything is Centralised into Ipsola Central District (ICD) which is the CBD of our biggest city (size & population) which is also our capital city, Ipsola, our currency is the kalaspi. We hope you enjoy reading about the great free land we call Kalasparata!
[Geography]Imagine a great desrt, spreading over thousands of kilometers, an extremely minor fault line (with tiny volcanos that only relase a liter of lava and the biggest earthquakes are 1-2 on the recto scale and tsunamis are only 1 meter high), really, really tall mountains and really, really deep cliffs which spread past the nations boarders, grass lands great enough to feed 3 million sheep, the grand waters of the pacific ocean, bush, forests and woods bigger than you can ever know, snow in the tropics, the international date line, the equator, cyclones, a desert as large as Europe, a beach so sandy that it goes km past anyones imagination, sunshine, summer and winter at the same time with-in the one km, elevations, sea, desert and snow breezes all meeting together, extremely fertile land, natural beauty. Now imagine it all meeting together in a 3 sq km location. That's Ipsola Central District for you!

The rest of Kalasparata has all these things but not centralised. The greatest number of the following a 8 sq km land (other than ICD) has is 5! Our greatest earthquake was a 2 on the rycta scale thanks to our extremely tiny fault line! The rest of Kalasparta sits on a plate.

Pacitalia wrote:Kala, I'd suggest you start making a wiki page to build a factbook. That way you'd also have no problems uploading images and making easy edits. And if you need any help with it, there are plenty of knowledgeable people around to help fix any errors.

Daistallia 2104 wrote:

Kalasparata wrote:I frixed mosr of it

Yes, you did indeed "frixed mosr" of it. Now try fixing it, as your spelling and grammar are still awful. Once you run it through a spell checker and grammar checker, we can start talking about style and substance.

Nort Eurasia wrote:

Daistallia 2104 wrote:

Kalasparata wrote:I frixed mosr of it

Yes, you did indeed "frixed mosr" of it. Now try fixing it, as your spelling and grammar are still awful. Once you run it through a spell checker and grammar checker, we can start talking about style and substance.

Stop being a grammar Nazi. It's annoying and trollish.

Denecaep wrote:

Nort Eurasia wrote:

Daistallia 2104 wrote:

Kalasparata wrote:I frixed mosr of it

Yes, you did indeed "frixed mosr" of it. Now try fixing it, as your spelling and grammar are still awful. Once you run it through a spell checker and grammar checker, we can start talking about style and substance.

Stop being a grammar Nazi. It's annoying and trollish.

Being a grammar nazi is when you bug people about "who" and "whom," or nominative and objective case.

He wasn't being a grammar nazi for noting words that have been mispelled to great lengths.

Denecaep wrote:

Nort Eurasia wrote:

Daistallia 2104 wrote:

Kalasparata wrote:I frixed mosr of it

Yes, you did indeed "frixed mosr" of it. Now try fixing it, as your spelling and grammar are still awful. Once you run it through a spell checker and grammar checker, we can start talking about style and substance.

Stop being a grammar Nazi. It's annoying and trollish.

Being a grammar nazi is when you bug people about "who" and "whom," or nominative and objective case.

He wasn't being a grammar nazi for noting words that have been mispelled to great lengths.

By law, all KES veichals... has the technology to go over speed bumps

Nort Eurasia wrote:

Denecaep wrote:

Nort Eurasia wrote:

Daistallia 2104 wrote:

Kalasparata wrote:I frixed mosr of it

Yes, you did indeed "frixed mosr" of it. Now try fixing it, as your spelling and grammar are still awful. Once you run it through a spell checker and grammar checker, we can start talking about style and substance.

Stop being a grammar Nazi. It's annoying and trollish.

Being a grammar nazi is when you bug people about "who" and "whom," or nominative and objective case.

He wasn't being a grammar nazi for noting words that have been mispelled to great lengths.

True... But what he did is still trollish.