California, Hear

[Goldenson]

It has been 146 days and no reply, so I take my message to the public instead of directly telegramming. Directly below is the exact same message I sent via telegram, modified for a public forum post.

I, King Ashael Judah of Goldenson, hereby order The Irvine Ranch and Philz Coffee, pursuant to the poll to determine which nation will refound California and the subsequent violation of this polls' results ending in The Irvine Ranch by Philz Coffee, to surrender the password to enter California immediately to me, King Ashael Judah of Goldenson.

I will not meet this violation with the use of "please."

[Vespertania]

I'll be happy to refound the region and open it back up to the public.

[Goldenson]

I'll be happy to refound the region and open it back up to the public.

I appreciate your enthusiasm, but, valid password receipt is the priority.

[Consular]

Maybe I'm misreading, it is rather late here, but that telegram is a grammatical mess.

[Goldenson]

Maybe I'm misreading, it is rather late here, but that telegram is a grammatical mess.

Comma added after second instance of Philz. Now all extra information is properly contained as proper addendums.

Without addendums, it could be read as:
I hereby order The Irvine Ranch and Philz Coffee to surrender the password to enter California immediately to me.

[Consular]

And why should they do that?

[Goldenson]

And why should they do that?

Because their own law and the rule of law via democratic consensus demands it.