Ardchoille wrote:... native, Nikolaos The Great, who intended --> which intended
... therefore unlikely that he is allied --> it or this nation or Yauna
I caught myself on that kind of thing over and over and over when I was writing my Krulltopia commendation. I was always finding myself referring to the nation as "he" and had to go back and fix it many times. As far as referring to the nation goes, "he" or "his" is out of the question. Although, if I referred to the "rabbit overlord" as "he," it'd work.
Just rambling.