Astrobolt wrote:This is really well written, and I would vote whole heartedly in favour once it reaches the floor.
I do have a couple of suggestions.Quebecshire wrote:Creeper is a pillar of our community and in particular the roleplay subset of it. While roleplay is not what The League is most known for in circles like gameplay, it's a huge part of our domestic culture and development. Creeper pioneered our use of wiki which has led to scores of quality articles and hundreds/thousands of various smaller ones - with him by far being the most extensive contributor. He's helped integrate and educate new roleplayers, maintained our canon extensively despite new joins and departures, wrote exhaustive storylines, compiled global information, and so on. In general he's an extremely hard worker and goes above and beyond, especially when it comes to tasks others might not want to take up.
I know it might be a challenge with the word count, but I think Creeper the player’s contributions should be mentioned as well. Him essentially helping build and enrich The League’s roleplay subcommunity is worthy of mention. (To stick with the theme of the condemn, perhaps something like that their seemingly helpful behaviour on the international stage, only serves to sanitize the nation’s public image, and prevent their heinous civil rights violations from coming to light?)Quebecshire wrote:Denouncing the Cooperation and Development Coalition, an international organization spearheaded by Creeperopolis which has used its influence in areas surrounding its members to abet undue foreign interference. Through this organization, Creeperopolis and Salisford have maintained a tight grip on their neighbors, extending their subversion to the southern portions of the continent Ecros, “neo-Sur”,
In this clause, Salisford seems to be introduced in an abrupt manner. (Initially, the clause talks about the entire Cooperation and Development Coalition, but then just mentions Creeper and Salisford, with no context as to what Salisford is, and why they are being mentioned. Would there be any way to briefly give context? (Maybe like 3 words describing it?)
I thought about your feedback for a bit, and unfortunately I think I'm going to have to pass on the first thing. It's unfortunate, because I would like to include Creeper's contributions as a player, but I don't think it's realistic. Creeper's work in roleplay management on an OOC level, regional historical preservation, WA Delegacy success, and more is pretty substantial. But, it's not easy to word as condemnable and we're already at the limit. So this leaves me with two options. One, cut roleplay stuff to include that, or two, to pass on it. While it's unideal and I wish everything could be included, at this point I think I'm going to make the decision based on what I think best fits the character of Creeper's nation and the purpose of this condemn, so I'm going to keep it roleplay-only in light of that and spacing constraints. Thank you for the suggestion, nonetheless, though!
As for the Salisford thing, that's a good point! Salisford is the other primary nation in that alliance, not the face of it in the same way as Creeperopolis is, but essential to the events being discussed in the resolution. I'd like to keep a mention of it in, so I'll see if I can find a way to introduce him easily. In the event that I can't, I will strike it, but I should beable to cook something up.
