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by Team Leo » Thu Apr 28, 2022 11:25 am
by Aenglaland » Thu Apr 28, 2022 11:29 am
Team Leo wrote:TWP is one of the most hated regions in NationStates.
by Aenglaland » Thu Apr 28, 2022 11:35 am
Team Leo wrote:Aenglaland wrote:Really? Because all I've seen so far was "hate" from newbies who got a free ticket for TRR for not respecting their rules. Though I believe they couldn't care less about such "hate".
TWP hates regions for no wrong. BBD hates us for no wrong. Gio hates us for no wrong. I believe we should be worrying about keeping them out!
by Platoon of Peace » Thu Apr 28, 2022 11:37 am
by Platoon of Peace » Thu Apr 28, 2022 11:45 am
by Aenglaland » Thu Apr 28, 2022 11:50 am
Team Leo wrote:People who actually have a purpose in NationStates
by WayNeacTia » Thu Apr 28, 2022 12:48 pm
RiderSyl wrote:You'd really think that defenders would communicate with each other about this. I know they're not a hivemind, but at least some level of PR skill would keep Quebecshire and Quebecshire from publically contradicting eac
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by Team Leo » Thu Apr 28, 2022 1:24 pm
Aenglaland wrote:Platoon of Peace wrote:He's trying to speak for the raiders.
I see. Thanks for clarifying.Well, as an indie who sympathizes more with the raider side, assuming you're right and if they actually hate raiders... why would that be a problem? I see Defenders showing hate for Raiders all the time, and vice-versa. Never really bothered me. Does it stop you from raiding? Does it personally get to you? Then I'm afraid it's not their problem.
Edit: apparently that's not the reason.Team Leo wrote:People who actually have a purpose in NationStates
So they hate, like, 90% of all players? Because most have a purpose, be it nation-building, region-building, politics, R/D, RP... You're free to dislike TWP, or any other region, but saying they hate people who have a purpose in NS is kind of a vague statement. But that's a discussion for somewhere else, not on this specific thread.
by Guess and Check » Thu Apr 28, 2022 1:50 pm
Team Leo wrote:Get the hint y'all, Bran Astor did nothing commendable. All he just did was serve TWP as a delegate. I bet most of the information found here is fake or has no meaning. Guys we needa understand this, and TWP is one of the most hated regions in NationStates. What we should be concerned about is commending raiders.
by Platoon of Peace » Thu Apr 28, 2022 1:53 pm
by Team Leo » Thu Apr 28, 2022 2:21 pm
Guess and Check wrote:Team Leo wrote:Get the hint y'all, Bran Astor did nothing commendable. All he just did was serve TWP as a delegate. I bet most of the information found here is fake or has no meaning. Guys we needa understand this, and TWP is one of the most hated regions in NationStates. What we should be concerned about is commending raiders.
Speaking purely objectively here, Bran's career in TWP has, based on the resolution, established things that define a unique culture in TWP. I mean half the things in the draft are things I associate purely with TWP, and I was purely shocked to learn they were from Bran.
Its difficult for leaders to make change, especially in GCRs. Its even more difficult to make change that both lasts and defines the culture of a region.
Go ahead and be against for your agendaposting, but no one can deny that, solely based on the resolution, Bran is a commendable regionalist, probably more than most commended regionalists out there.
Also, if TWP was the most hated region then they wouldnt have embassies with some of the most reputable regions in the game. Js.
Twertis wrote:Just ignore him, PoP. Yeesh.
by Altai Almas » Thu Apr 28, 2022 3:40 pm
Praising Bran Astor’s work through their satellite state Illahee in founding The Sasquatch Republic (TSR), a vibrant community where they celebrate with friends and companions, and organize activities such as:
TSR’s Country Fair, a festival where nations can enter activities such as a rodeo, featuring themed poetic and artistic competitions, and
TSR Curling, a sports competition where nations submit teams to design flags and other competitive events,
TSR’s Friendship Tartan, where participating nations select their own patterns that are all combined at the end to form a colorful tartan,
by WayNeacTia » Thu Apr 28, 2022 5:28 pm
RiderSyl wrote:You'd really think that defenders would communicate with each other about this. I know they're not a hivemind, but at least some level of PR skill would keep Quebecshire and Quebecshire from publically contradicting eac
wait
by Varanius » Sat Apr 30, 2022 10:57 am
Angeloid Astraea wrote:I can't think of anyone that creates controversy out of nothing better than you!
Excidium Planetis wrote:Yeah, if you could enlighten me as to why you're such an asshole, that would be great.
Koth wrote:Vara is such a dedicated hater, it's impressive
Mlakhavia wrote:Vara isn't a gameplay personality, he's a concentrated ball of spite
by Twertis » Sat Apr 30, 2022 12:18 pm
by Zukchiva » Sat Apr 30, 2022 5:13 pm
I'd suggest making the clause about both regions if you're going to mention TSR here.Realizing that the nation of Bran Astor has been a longtime contributor to The West Pacific (TWP) as well as their own region of The Sasquatch Republic (TSR)and haslargely constructed the current cultural and foreign affairs infrastructure of both regionsTWP;
This is a bit run-on and confusing with all those commas and phrases, would suggest reworking this. Would also try focusing on making this flow better.Applauding Bran Astor’s development of Today in the West in 2018, an ongoing program to encourage Regional Message Board (RMB) activity by providing TWP’s RMB with daily updates on regional activities, holidays, and celebrations, including Haikuesday and Thank You Thursday, partially through the revival of the Regional Guides Program, this has ultimately played an undeniable role in shaping TWP’s RMB culture to become one of the most unique in the multiverse;
I'd insert when bran created the RP to give a sense of time and dedication. Would also simplify this clause.Noting Bran Astor’s creation of TWP’s nation simulation program, a program which he continues to maintainand overseeto this day, includingby managing the program's application processdeciding who [Strike]is and is not eligible[/Strike], continuously updating the initiative's mapfor said simulation, and encouraging participants to be more engagedengagement;
You need to state here why we should be astonished. It's great Bran ran these events, but you should summarize what these events generally did for TWP in a short phrase here. Additionally, I'd reword these clause because you don't make clear in the festival descriptions themselves what exactly Bran did. It may be necessary to remove some events so you can elaborate a bit more on what Bran did generally for all these festivals.Astonished at Bran Astor’s other cultural contributions to TWP, among which are:
When you have limited characters, it's always a good idea to remove "Xs and Ys".
- TWPride Month, a month long event in which the region
honors andcelebrates the history of the region’s LGBTQ+ community, offeringand thereby offers support to LGBTQ+ citizens of the West,
I'd make this its own clause, don't think it fits in here even if its a part of regional culture in a sense. I'll be honest and say I don't think just recruiting people for an initiative is commendable in on itself - you need to elaborate more on what Bran did besides recruiting to revive The Western Post. Because I'm sure he didn't just gather recruits and tell them to do what they wishedThe revival of The Western Post through the active recruitment of additional writers, which allowed The Western Post to flourish and prosper into one of the highest quality monthly publications in the multiverse, with consistent updates on regional events, comics, and satirical articles;
I'd reword the part before the colon as its way too run-on.Impressed by the cultural expertise demonstrated by Bran Astor in their dedication to strengthening bonds between regions through festivals and celebrations of community developed largely or entirely by their hand, the encompassing creative direction and often single-handed visual design of events are typified by the prominent annual events of: the Burning Marsupial,(a bohemian celebration of art and camaraderie featuring unique high-concept graphical visions),and the Festival of the Perfections,the(along-standing exposition event where states display their cultures through art, poetry, and literature);
Just because someone established something doesn't mean much - they could establish it then do absolutely nothing to develop it. I'd either elaborate on what Bran did to help UTWP become what it is today, or nix this.Enthralled by Bran Astor’s establishment of the University of The West Pacific, where new students are taught about the World Assembly, foreign affairs, and international warfare, thereby cultivating generations of informed and educated Westerners;
If possible, would also summarize what these treaties b rought to TWP. Tighter cultural bonds? Innovation? At least one thing to give us a glimpse of what the list details.Admiring Bran Astor’s improvement of TWP’s foreign affairs through the development of treaties with:
I'd directly state a treaty was written here, because as it is it implies there was an already existing treaty and Bran just did some extra activities, which I believe is not what you're going for.
- The Pacific, continuing the legacy of the Holy Principality of Saint Mark and ultimately leading to an increase in cultural and World Assembly cooperation, solidifying the bond between these historically friendly regions, and
Would reword to make it sound better, left a suggestion or a few. Honestly not sure if this works well in this clause because with TP you stated directly what the relationship bought TWP, with Karma you don't mention what the specific bond brought to TWP but rather speak of a general beneficial trend it brought.Karma, with the treaty’s informal style starting a legacy of “casual” TWP treaties, a trend which promoted an emphasis on cultural ties andaccessibility and made, makingforeign affairs more accessible to new nations -andallowing these relationships to prosper into true friendships rather than merely strategic decisions;
It may be possible to reword this to show that the fact Bran runs all these events plays a role in TSR being a friendly and celebratory community. If so, would usggest doing so.Praising Bran Astor’s work through their satellite state Illahee in founding TSR, a vibrant community full of celebration and camadariewhere they celebrate with friends and companions, and organizing regionalorganizeactivities such as:
Would elaborate more on this if possible as I personally think this is a pretty unique event.[*]TSR’s Friendship Tartan, where participating nations create their own patterned tartans for submission with a winner decided by an impartial judge from another universe, and
Slight re-work.[*]TSR’s Regional Quilt, an activity in which participating nations select from a variety of available patterns, with all selections are ultimately combined to form a large quilt - signifying the unity and diversity of TSRwhich are all combined in the end to form a large quilt, signifying both the diversity and unity of the community;[/list]
fixesInspired by Bran Astor’s cultural expertise and innovative approach to foreign affairs, alongside the degree of effort they have dedicated to bothinThe West Pacific and the region they themselves founded;
by Varanius » Tue May 03, 2022 11:25 am
Twertis wrote:I like this a lot more. At first glance (maybe I'll look over it some more at one point), why would you be "astonished" at their other cultural achievements? Or "enthralled" by their establishment of a university? This all seems like poor word choice to me
Angeloid Astraea wrote:I can't think of anyone that creates controversy out of nothing better than you!
Excidium Planetis wrote:Yeah, if you could enlighten me as to why you're such an asshole, that would be great.
Koth wrote:Vara is such a dedicated hater, it's impressive
Mlakhavia wrote:Vara isn't a gameplay personality, he's a concentrated ball of spite
by Varanius » Mon May 09, 2022 11:37 am
Angeloid Astraea wrote:I can't think of anyone that creates controversy out of nothing better than you!
Excidium Planetis wrote:Yeah, if you could enlighten me as to why you're such an asshole, that would be great.
Koth wrote:Vara is such a dedicated hater, it's impressive
Mlakhavia wrote:Vara isn't a gameplay personality, he's a concentrated ball of spite
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