Posted: Thu Sep 30, 2021 5:09 pm
This’ll probably go about as well as your other proposal.
Because sometimes even national leaders just want to hang out
https://forum.nationstates.net/
Some us should really actually say what we’d like instead of hiding between passive aggressive remarks . But really, why would I do that? It’s a bad proposal which will never pass, and unlike the authors I enjoy my time. Why on earth would I bore myself to death trying to offer honest critiques to a shitty proposal going nowhere, when it’s much more fun to do…well this.Andusre wrote:I respect Giovanniland's participation both in the Security Council and in this thread because though I'm sure he does and always will oppose this proposal in principle, he at the bare minimum had the decency to turn up & engage in good faith offering legitimate & sincere critiques - even when the proposal aims to commend someone whose region is in an open state of hostility to his own. Some of us should really be more like Giovanniland.
Varanius wrote:unlike the authors I enjoy my time.
Varanius wrote:Why on earth would I bore myself to death trying to offer honest critiques to a shitty proposal going nowhere, when it’s much more fun to do…well this.
Truly the saddest. Although, seeing how helpful you’ve been on this thread, I patiently await your departure!Andusre wrote:Varanius wrote:unlike the authors I enjoy my time.
sips water
Mhm...Varanius wrote:Why on earth would I bore myself to death trying to offer honest critiques to a shitty proposal going nowhere, when it’s much more fun to do…well this.
There is a common adage that I was taught growing up that says if you have nothing positive or helpful to say, say nothing at all. Maybe they don't teach that to kids anymore, how sad.
Varanius wrote:Truly the saddest. Although, seeing how helpful you’ve been on this thread, I patiently await your departure!Andusre wrote:sips water
Mhm...
There is a common adage that I was taught growing up that says if you have nothing positive or helpful to say, say nothing at all. Maybe they don't teach that to kids anymore, how sad.
Varanius wrote:The displayed ability to completely ignore criticism is on a level which rivals Commend LadyRebels. It’s unfortunate the both of you have decided to waste so much time on what is ultimately a doomed proposal. Good luck with this though, I am obligated to at least slightly encourage joke proposals when I see them.
Comfed wrote:I think trying to commend Lib is a lost cause, because his achievements don’t really go above and beyond those of a standard GCR delegate term.
Thousand Branches wrote:I’ll be honest, I think I’m also in the group of “not really sure if they’re commendable”. When I read through the proposal to do my edits, I can’t say anything really jumped out to me as something distinctly commendable. I’ve done things comparable in some regions I’ve been in, albeit not serving as delegate, but I am certainly not commendable in any way. The proposal lacked… how to say it… oomph? It didn’t quite have that “wow, that’s super impressive” feel that I think a proposal should have. Nothing against TEP or Lib but I’m just not sure it’s enough.
Aivintis wrote:One last bump for helpful, relevant comments. I'll talk to Hulldom about putting this on last call so that more folks look at it.
Aivintis wrote:the unrepresented Regional Message Board (RMB) community within the Ministry
Aivintis wrote:repealing the EPNS Act (which heavily restricted the operations of the EPNS) in the Magisterium so that the EPNS could function with greater flexibility and effectiveness,
Aivintis wrote:Recognizing Libertanny’s restructuring of the Ministry of Foreign Affairs following the coup, creating a new leadership council consisting of senior diplomats and delegating leadership responsibilities to it, helping democratize the decision-making process, ease the burden of leadership, and allow for such greater efficiency that it remains in use to this day,
Aivintis wrote:Increasing diverse representation through the creation of Ambassador positions for the RMB and the Cards Association, TEAPOT, connecting TEP’s government to more isolated parts of the region which might not otherwise be heard, as a result, fostering a greater sense of community in TEP,
The creation of Ambassador positions for various parts of TEP's government, such as the Regional Message Board Association and the Cards Association TEAPOT; this helped connect TEP’s government to more isolated parts of the region and foster a greater sense of community in TEP,
Aivintis wrote:Directing the creation REWARD without aid, a World Assembly Development Program which strengthens regional security by incentivizing the endorsement of regional security officers and encourages a more vibrant endorsement culture within the region,
Aivintis wrote:Saluting Libertanny’s contributions to diplomacy during their delegacy, mainly in the negotiation of many important treaties, which strengthened the diplomatic relationships of TEP and fostered a spirit of interregional goodwill, defense, and cooperation; notably including those with The Free Nations Region and Thaecia, both of which have become some of TEP’s closest allies,
Saluting Libertanny’s contributions to TEP's diplomacy during their delegacy, by building treaties with regions such as The Free Nations Region and Thaecia, both of which have become some of TEP’s closest allies,
Vikanias wrote:Way better then the previous version, if this makes it to quorum I’ll be voting for!
Apatosaurus wrote:Is this post "helpful, relevant comments"? I hope so
Is it really necessary to define that acronym, which you only use once other than there through the whole proposal?
Repealing some law I've never heard of until now is not commendable.
Is [Libertanny’s restructuring of the Ministry of Foreign Affairs following the coup] really commendable?
[Creating] Ambassador positions for various parts of TEP's government, such as the Regional Message Board Association and the Cards Association TEAPOT; this helped connect TEP’s government to more isolated parts of the region and foster a greater sense of community in TEP,
[The REWARD] section needs lots of work. Firstly, I don't see how "without aid" makes it more Commendable. Get rid of that. Secondly, change "strengthens regional security" to "has helped strengthen regional security" and change "and encourages a more..." to "and encouraged a more.."
Saluting Libertanny’s contributions to TEP's diplomacy during their delegacy, by building treaties with regions such as The Free Nations Region and Thaecia, both of which have become some of TEP’s closest allies,
Also, what happened to the clause about Commend Bach?
Varanius wrote:The displayed ability to completely ignore criticism is on a level which rivals Commend LadyRebels.
Aivintis wrote:Consider:
Creating Ambassador positions for various, underrepresented communities within TEP's government, such as the RMB and the Cards Association, TEAPOT, which helped connect TEP’s government to more isolated parts of the region and foster a greater sense of community in TEP,
Aivintis wrote:Saluting Libertanny’s contributions to TEP's diplomacy during their delegacy, by building treaties with regions such as The Free Nations Region and Thaecia, both of which have become some of TEP’s closest allies,
Consider:
Saluting Libertanny’s contributions to TEP diplomacy during their delegacy, mainly by building treaties emphasizing goodwill, mutual defense, and cooperation, with regions such as The Free Nations Region and Thaecia, both of which have become some of TEP’s closest allies,