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[PASSED] Commend Kuriko

Postby Morover » Sun Aug 09, 2020 6:39 pm

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The Security Council

Commend Kuriko

Commendation

Nominee: Kuriko

A resolution to recognize outstanding contribution by a nation or region.

The World Assembly Security Council,

Revering the success of Kuriko in and around the world, such as in the foundation and maintenance of The Hole To Hide In, which continues to hold one of the largest and most well-documented geopolitical communities,

Praising Kuriko’s efforts to further the regional defender movement, which includes the organization of independent or collaborative defender military forces in order to liberate ransacked regions,

Further acknowledging Kuriko’s force as a leader of peacekeeping forces, historically holding over half-a-dozen high-ranking positions in nearly that many regions or organizations, including in positions that established nearly unprecedented levels of communication with natives in order to ensure their general happiness and well-being during the defense,

Astonished by the utter magnitude and significance of the defense missions that Kuriko has undergone, numbering in the hundreds, including:
  1. The coordination of the Ten Thousand Islands Treaty Organization's forces in order to help thwart the attempted 2019 coup of the East Pacific,
  2. The pivotal role taken in the refoundation of Iran, restoring the region to its natives and ensuring its security onward,
  3. Participation in the final liberation attempt of Anontia, a region raided as a part of annual celebrations by invaders,

Realizing that Kuriko's roles in non-military positions are no less crucial towards NationStates as a whole, and as such, believing that Kuriko's time spent in roles such as Officer of Culture in the Rejected Realms, Secretary of State in The Free Nations Region, and as a Court Justice in The Union of Democratic States, enriched public life and ensured that domestic order was maintained,

Thanking Kuriko for their contributions specifically to 10000 Islands, in which they have contributed massively, ultimately spending more time as Delegate than anybody in the region prior,

Celebrating that during their time as Delegate, they have ushered in a new era of international relations for the region, as seen through treaties with Yggdrasil, the East Pacific, and the South Pacific, as well as through various cultural exchanges with the Rejected Realms and the North Pacific,

Flattered by Kuriko's constant efforts to better this already unfathomably great chamber through inordinate amounts of Security Council resolutions, being one of the few authors to have ever passed a double-digit number of resolutions in this chamber, and surpassing all other author delegations,

Recognizing that Kuriko has helped bring to light both laudable and duplicitous nations through their various commendations and condemnations, such as:
  1. Commend Texas, a congratulatory acclamation for one of the oldest, prominent, and historically significant regions, Texas,
  2. The improved denunciation of Macedon through Condemn Macedon, the first entity recognized by this esteemed body, bringing it up-to-date with modern standards for condemnation, and the subsequent repeal of the original resolution,
  3. Commend Common Territories, which congratulated The Empire of Common Territories for being among the most benevolent nations in the world, who allows a remarkable amount of autonomy to its various provinces,

Further admiring Kuriko's use of the Security Council to further defender causes, especially through resolutions such as:
  1. Liberate The Monarchist Entente and the ensuing repeal of the resolution, the first of which was in order to ensure that raiding forces could be expelled from the regions and the latter of which was to ensure that the natives of the region could secure the region safely,
  2. Liberate Boston, a resolution passed in order to ensure that the region of Boston did not fall victim to fascist or otherwise despicable invaders,

Hereby commends Kuriko.
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Postby Morover » Sun Aug 09, 2020 6:40 pm

This draft is intended to be a replacement for SCR#300, of which I have a repeal in drafting. Comments, as always, are appreciated!

Drafts:
The World Assembly Security Council,

Noting that among nations who are successful in many different facets of NationStates, Kuriko and any subsidiaries or aliases thereof are incredibly prominent,

Celebrating, first off, the success of The Hole To Hide In, a region both founded and maintained by Kuriko, which continues to hold one of the largest and most well-documented geopolitical communities,

Praising the furtherance of the regional defender movement at large, both through the organization of independent or collaborative defender military forces in order to liberate ransacked regions, or as a leader of peacekeeping forces, as best exemplified through their service as Secretary of Defense in The Free Nations Region, One of the Commanders of Solidarity, Warden Commander of The Order of The Grey Wardens, Second in Command of the Lazarene Celestial Armada, and many more high-ranking positions in various armed forces organizations,

Astonished by the utter magnitude and significance of the defense missions that Kuriko has undergone, numbering in the hundreds, not the least impressive of which are:
  1. The help in the defense of The East Pacific through their coordination of the Ten Thousand Islands Treaty Organization, ultimately contributing to thwarting the coup attempt and keeping the residents of the region safe,
  2. The pivotal role taken in the refoundation of Iran, restoring the region to its natives and ensuring its security onward,
  3. Participation in the final liberation attempt of Anontia, a region raided in jest during annual celebrations by invaders,

Realizing that Kuriko's roles in non-military positions are no less crucial towards NationStates as a whole, and as such, recognizing Kuriko's time spent as Officer of Culture in the Rejected Realms, Secretary of State in The Free Nations Region, and Justice of the Court in The Union of Democratic States,

Thanking Kuriko for their contributions specifically to 10000 Islands, in which they have set a historical record for time spent as Delegate, during which time they have launched a trend within the region to leave behind an ideology of looking inwards towards themselves, and instead be much more prominent within the international community outside of simply militaristic activities, as is especially prominent through treaties that Kuriko brokered such as that with Yggdrasil and the South Pacific,

Flattered by Kuriko's constant efforts to better this already unfathomably great chamber through inordinate amounts of Security Council resolutions, being one of the few authors who have achieved a number that is in the double-digits and surpasses all author delegations,

Recognizing the recognitions that Kuriko authored in order to recognize, such as those of:
  1. Commend Texas, a congratulatory acclamation for one of the oldest, prominent, and historically significant regions, Texas,
  2. The improved denunciation of Macedon through Condemn Macedon, the first entity recognized by this esteemed body, bringing it up-to-date with modern standards for condemnation, and the subsequent repeal of the original resolution,
  3. Commend Common Territories, which congratulated The Empire of Common Territories for being among the most benevolent nations in the world, who allows a remarkable amount of autonomy to its various provinces,

Further admiring Kuriko's use of the Security Council to further defender causes, especially through resolutions such as:
  1. Liberate The Monarchist Entente and the ensuing repeal of the resolution, the first of which was in order to ensure that raiding forces could be expelled from the regions and the latter of which was to ensure that the natives of the region could secure the region safely,
  2. Liberate Politics Amino, which was unfortunately passed just too late to save the region for the natives, as the region was refounded by intruding forces,[/url]

Congratulating the Kurikoian Empress Aelia Murena for her victory in the 2020 World Assembly Secretary-General election, no doubt stemming from their previous accomplishments within the World Assembly, as well as their noble campaign,

Hereby commends Kuriko.

First edit: Fixed a few grammar changes, added some more justification to the "Realizing..." clause.
The World Assembly Security Council,

Noting that among nations who are successful in many different facets of NationStates, Kuriko and any subsidiaries or aliases thereof are incredibly prominent,

Celebrating, first off, the success of The Hole To Hide In, a region both founded and maintained by Kuriko, which continues to hold one of the largest and most well-documented geopolitical communities,

Praising the furtherance of the regional defender movement at large, both through the organization of independent or collaborative defender military forces in order to liberate ransacked regions, or as a leader of peacekeeping forces, as best exemplified through their service as Secretary of Defense in The Free Nations Region, one of the Commanders of Solidarity, Warden Commander of The Order of The Grey Wardens, Second in Command of the Lazarene Celestial Armada, and many more high-ranking positions in various armed forces organizations,

Astonished by the utter magnitude and significance of the defense missions that Kuriko has undergone, numbering in the hundreds, not the least impressive of which are:
  1. The help in the defense of The East Pacific through their coordination of the Ten Thousand Islands Treaty Organization, ultimately contributing to thwarting the coup attempt and keeping the residents of the region safe,
  2. The pivotal role taken in the refoundation of Iran, restoring the region to its natives and ensuring its security onward,
  3. Participation in the final liberation attempt of Anontia, a region raided in jest during annual celebrations by invaders,

Realizing that Kuriko's roles in non-military positions are no less crucial towards NationStates as a whole, and as such, believing that Kuriko's time spent in roles such as Officer of Culture in the Rejected Realms, Secretary of State in The Free Nations Region, and Justice of the Court in The Union of Democratic States enrich public life and ensure domestic order is maintained,

Thanking Kuriko for their contributions specifically to 10000 Islands, in which they have set a historical record for time spent as Delegate, during which time they have launched a trend within the region to leave behind an ideology of looking inwards towards themselves, and instead be much more prominent within the international community outside of simply militaristic activities, as is especially prominent through treaties that Kuriko brokered such as that with Yggdrasil and the South Pacific,

Flattered by Kuriko's constant efforts to better this already unfathomably great chamber through inordinate amounts of Security Council resolutions, being one of the few authors who have achieved a number that is in the double-digits and surpasses all author delegations,

Recognizing the recognitions that Kuriko authored in order to recognize, such as those of:
  1. Commend Texas, a congratulatory acclamation for one of the oldest, prominent, and historically significant regions, Texas,
  2. The improved denunciation of Macedon through Condemn Macedon, the first entity recognized by this esteemed body, bringing it up-to-date with modern standards for condemnation, and the subsequent repeal of the original resolution,
  3. Commend Common Territories, which congratulated The Empire of Common Territories for being among the most benevolent nations in the world, who allows a remarkable amount of autonomy to its various provinces,

Further admiring Kuriko's use of the Security Council to further defender causes, especially through resolutions such as:
  1. Liberate The Monarchist Entente and the ensuing repeal of the resolution, the first of which was in order to ensure that raiding forces could be expelled from the regions and the latter of which was to ensure that the natives of the region could secure the region safely,
  2. Liberate Politics Amino, which was unfortunately passed just too late to save the region for the natives, as the region was refounded by intruding forces,

Congratulating the Kurikoian Empress Aelia Murena for her victory in the 2020 World Assembly Secretary-General election, no doubt stemming from their previous accomplishments within the World Assembly, as well as their noble campaign,

Hereby commends Kuriko.

The World Assembly Security Council,

Noting that among nations who are successful in many different facets of NationStates, Kuriko and any subsidiaries or aliases thereof are incredibly prominent,

Celebrating, first off, the success of The Hole To Hide In, a region both founded and maintained by Kuriko, which continues to hold one of the largest and most well-documented geopolitical communities,

Praising the furtherance of the regional defender movement at large, both through the organization of independent or collaborative defender military forces in order to liberate ransacked regions, or as a leader of peacekeeping forces, as best exemplified through their service as Secretary of Defense in The Free Nations Region, one of the Commanders of Solidarity, Warden Commander of The Order of The Grey Wardens, Second in Command of the Lazarene Celestial Armada, and many more high-ranking positions in various armed forces organizations,

Astonished by the utter magnitude and significance of the defense missions that Kuriko has undergone, numbering in the hundreds, not the least impressive of which are:
  1. The coordination of the Ten Thousands Treaty Organization's forces in order to help thwart the attempted 2019 coup of the East Pacific,
  2. The pivotal role taken in the refoundation of Iran, restoring the region to its natives and ensuring its security onward,
  3. Participation in the final liberation attempt of Anontia, a region raided as a part of annual celebrations by invaders,

Realizing that Kuriko's roles in non-military positions are no less crucial towards NationStates as a whole, and as such, believing that Kuriko's time spent in roles such as Officer of Culture in the Rejected Realms, Secretary of State in The Free Nations Region, and Justice of the Court in The Union of Democratic States enriched public life and ensured domestic order is maintained,

Thanking Kuriko for their contributions specifically to 10000 Islands, in which they have set a historical record for time spent as Delegate, where they have ushered in a new era of international relations with the region, especially through the areas of culture and foreign affairs, as can be shown through the treaties that Kuriko brokered with regions like Yggdrasil, the East Pacific, and the South Pacific, as well as through various cultural exchanges with the Rejected Realms and the North Pacific,

Flattered by Kuriko's constant efforts to better this already unfathomably great chamber through inordinate amounts of Security Council resolutions, being one of the few authors who have achieved a number that is in the double-digits and surpasses all author delegations,

Recognizing the recognitions that Kuriko authored in order to recognize, such as those of:
  1. Commend Texas, a congratulatory acclamation for one of the oldest, prominent, and historically significant regions, Texas,
  2. The improved denunciation of Macedon through Condemn Macedon, the first entity recognized by this esteemed body, bringing it up-to-date with modern standards for condemnation, and the subsequent repeal of the original resolution,
  3. Commend Common Territories, which congratulated The Empire of Common Territories for being among the most benevolent nations in the world, who allows a remarkable amount of autonomy to its various provinces,

Further admiring Kuriko's use of the Security Council to further defender causes, especially through resolutions such as:
  1. Liberate The Monarchist Entente and the ensuing repeal of the resolution, the first of which was in order to ensure that raiding forces could be expelled from the regions and the latter of which was to ensure that the natives of the region could secure the region safely,
  2. Liberate Politics Amino, which was unfortunately passed just too late to save the region for the natives, as the region was refounded by intruding forces,

Congratulating the Kurikoian Empress Aelia Murena for her victory in the 2020 World Assembly Secretary-General election, no doubt stemming from their previous accomplishments within the World Assembly, as well as their noble campaign,

Hereby commends Kuriko.

The World Assembly Security Council,

Noting that among nations who are successful in many different facets of NationStates, Kuriko and any subsidiaries or aliases thereof are incredibly prominent,

Celebrating, first off, the success of The Hole To Hide In, a region both founded and maintained by Kuriko, which continues to hold one of the largest and most well-documented geopolitical communities,

Praising the furtherance of the regional defender movement at large, both through the organization of independent or collaborative defender military forces in order to liberate ransacked regions, or as a leader of peacekeeping forces, as best exemplified through their service as over half a dozen high-ranking positions in nearly that many regions or organizations, especially through that of being one of the five commanders of Solidarity, which is unique in its goal of restoring invaded regions, including nearly unprecedented levels of communication with natives in order to ensure their general happiness and well-being during the defense,

Astonished by the utter magnitude and significance of the defense missions that Kuriko has undergone, numbering in the hundreds, not the least impressive of which are:
  1. The coordination of the Ten Thousands Treaty Organization's forces in order to help thwart the attempted 2019 coup of the East Pacific,
  2. The pivotal role taken in the refoundation of Iran, restoring the region to its natives and ensuring its security onward,
  3. Participation in the final liberation attempt of Anontia, a region raided as a part of annual celebrations by invaders,

Realizing that Kuriko's roles in non-military positions are no less crucial towards NationStates as a whole, and as such, believing that Kuriko's time spent in roles such as Officer of Culture in the Rejected Realms, Secretary of State in The Free Nations Region, and Justice of the Court in The Union of Democratic States enriched public life and ensured domestic order is maintained,

Thanking Kuriko for their contributions specifically to 10000 Islands, in which they have set a historical record for time spent as Delegate, where they have ushered in a new era of international relations with the region, especially through the areas of culture and foreign affairs, as can be shown through the treaties that Kuriko brokered with regions like Yggdrasil, the East Pacific, and the South Pacific, as well as through various cultural exchanges with the Rejected Realms and the North Pacific,

Flattered by Kuriko's constant efforts to better this already unfathomably great chamber through inordinate amounts of Security Council resolutions, being one of the few authors who have achieved a number that is in the double-digits and surpasses all author delegations,

Recognizing the recognitions that Kuriko authored in order to recognize, such as those of:
  1. Commend Texas, a congratulatory acclamation for one of the oldest, prominent, and historically significant regions, Texas,
  2. The improved denunciation of Macedon through Condemn Macedon, the first entity recognized by this esteemed body, bringing it up-to-date with modern standards for condemnation, and the subsequent repeal of the original resolution,
  3. Commend Common Territories, which congratulated The Empire of Common Territories for being among the most benevolent nations in the world, who allows a remarkable amount of autonomy to its various provinces,

Further admiring Kuriko's use of the Security Council to further defender causes, especially through resolutions such as:
  1. Liberate The Monarchist Entente and the ensuing repeal of the resolution, the first of which was in order to ensure that raiding forces could be expelled from the regions and the latter of which was to ensure that the natives of the region could secure the region safely,
  2. Liberate Boston, a resolution passed in order to ensure that the region of Boston did not fall victim to fascist or otherwise despicable invaders,

Congratulating the Kurikoian Empress Aelia Murena for her victory in the 2020 World Assembly Secretary-General election, no doubt stemming from their previous accomplishments within the World Assembly, as well as their noble campaign,

Hereby commends Kuriko.

The World Assembly Security Council,

Noting that among nations who are successful in many different facets of NationStates, Kuriko and any subsidiaries or aliases thereof are incredibly prominent,

Celebrating, first off, the success of The Hole To Hide In, a region both founded and maintained by Kuriko, which continues to hold one of the largest and most well-documented geopolitical communities,

Praising the furtherance of the regional defender movement at large, both through the organization of independent or collaborative defender military forces in order to liberate ransacked regions, or as a leader of peacekeeping forces, as best exemplified through their service as over half a dozen high-ranking positions in nearly that many regions or organizations, especially through that of being one of the five commanders of Solidarity, which is unique in its goal of restoring invaded regions, including nearly unprecedented levels of communication with natives in order to ensure their general happiness and well-being during the defense,

Astonished by the utter magnitude and significance of the defense missions that Kuriko has undergone, numbering in the hundreds, not the least impressive of which are:
  1. The coordination of the Ten Thousand Islands Treaty Organization's forces in order to help thwart the attempted 2019 coup of the East Pacific,
  2. The pivotal role taken in the refoundation of Iran, restoring the region to its natives and ensuring its security onward,
  3. Participation in the final liberation attempt of Anontia, a region raided as a part of annual celebrations by invaders,

Realizing that Kuriko's roles in non-military positions are no less crucial towards NationStates as a whole, and as such, believing that Kuriko's time spent in roles such as Officer of Culture in the Rejected Realms, Secretary of State in The Free Nations Region, and as a Court Justice in The Union of Democratic States enriched public life and ensured domestic order is maintained,

Thanking Kuriko for their contributions specifically to 10000 Islands, in which they have set a historical record for time spent as Delegate, where they have ushered in a new era of international relations with the region, especially through the areas of culture and foreign affairs, as can be shown through the treaties that Kuriko brokered with regions like Yggdrasil, the East Pacific, and the South Pacific, as well as through various cultural exchanges with the Rejected Realms and the North Pacific,

Flattered by Kuriko's constant efforts to better this already unfathomably great chamber through inordinate amounts of Security Council resolutions, being one of the few authors who have achieved a number that is in the double-digits and surpasses all author delegations,

Recognizing the recognitions that Kuriko authored in order to recognize, such as:
  1. Commend Texas, a congratulatory acclamation for one of the oldest, prominent, and historically significant regions, Texas,
  2. The improved denunciation of Macedon through Condemn Macedon, the first entity recognized by this esteemed body, bringing it up-to-date with modern standards for condemnation, and the subsequent repeal of the original resolution,
  3. Commend Common Territories, which congratulated The Empire of Common Territories for being among the most benevolent nations in the world, who allows a remarkable amount of autonomy to its various provinces,

Further admiring Kuriko's use of the Security Council to further defender causes, especially through resolutions such as:
  1. Liberate The Monarchist Entente and the ensuing repeal of the resolution, the first of which was in order to ensure that raiding forces could be expelled from the regions and the latter of which was to ensure that the natives of the region could secure the region safely,
  2. Liberate Boston, a resolution passed in order to ensure that the region of Boston did not fall victim to fascist or otherwise despicable invaders,

Congratulating the Kurikoian Empress Aelia Murena for her victory in the 2020 World Assembly Secretary-General election, no doubt stemming from their previous accomplishments within the World Assembly, as well as their noble campaign,

Hereby commends Kuriko.

The World Assembly Security Council,

Celebrating, first off, the success ofKuriko, such as that which is exemplified through the success of the region they founded and maintained The Hole To Hide In, which continues to hold one of the largest and most well-documented geopolitical communities,

Praising the furtherance of the regional defender movement at large, both through the organization of independent or collaborative defender military forces in order to liberate ransacked regions, or as a leader of peacekeeping forces, as best exemplified through their service as over half a dozen high-ranking positions in nearly that many regions or organizations, especially through that of being one of the five commanders of Solidarity, which is unique in its goal of restoring invaded regions, including nearly unprecedented levels of communication with natives in order to ensure their general happiness and well-being during the defense,

Astonished by the utter magnitude and significance of the defense missions that Kuriko has undergone, numbering in the hundreds, not the least impressive of which are:
  1. The coordination of the Ten Thousand Islands Treaty Organization's forces in order to help thwart the attempted 2019 coup of the East Pacific,
  2. The pivotal role taken in the refoundation of Iran, restoring the region to its natives and ensuring its security onward,
  3. Participation in the final liberation attempt of Anontia, a region raided as a part of annual celebrations by invaders,

Realizing that Kuriko's roles in non-military positions are no less crucial towards NationStates as a whole, and as such, believing that Kuriko's time spent in roles such as Officer of Culture in the Rejected Realms, Secretary of State in The Free Nations Region, and as a Court Justice in The Union of Democratic States enriched public life and ensured that domestic order was maintained,

Thanking Kuriko for their contributions specifically to 10000 Islands, in which they have set a historical record for time spent as Delegate, where they have ushered in a new era of international relations with the region, especially through the areas of culture and foreign affairs, as can be shown through the treaties that Kuriko brokered with regions like Yggdrasil, the East Pacific, and the South Pacific, as well as through various cultural exchanges with the Rejected Realms and the North Pacific,

Flattered by Kuriko's constant efforts to better this already unfathomably great chamber through inordinate amounts of Security Council resolutions, being one of the few authors who have achieved a number that is in the double-digits and surpasses all author delegations,

Recognizing the recognitions that Kuriko authored in order to recognize, such as:
  1. Commend Texas, a congratulatory acclamation for one of the oldest, prominent, and historically significant regions, Texas,
  2. The improved denunciation of Macedon through Condemn Macedon, the first entity recognized by this esteemed body, bringing it up-to-date with modern standards for condemnation, and the subsequent repeal of the original resolution,
  3. Commend Common Territories, which congratulated The Empire of Common Territories for being among the most benevolent nations in the world, who allows a remarkable amount of autonomy to its various provinces,

Further admiring Kuriko's use of the Security Council to further defender causes, especially through resolutions such as:
  1. Liberate The Monarchist Entente and the ensuing repeal of the resolution, the first of which was in order to ensure that raiding forces could be expelled from the regions and the latter of which was to ensure that the natives of the region could secure the region safely,
  2. Liberate Boston, a resolution passed in order to ensure that the region of Boston did not fall victim to fascist or otherwise despicable invaders,

Congratulating the Kurikoian Empress Aelia Murena for her victory in the 2020 World Assembly Secretary-General election, no doubt stemming from their previous accomplishments within the World Assembly, as well as their noble campaign,

Hereby commends Kuriko.

The World Assembly Security Council,

Celebrating the success of Kuriko in around the world, such as in the foundation and maintenance of The Hole To Hide In, which continues to hold one of the largest and most well-documented geopolitical communities,

Praising Kuriko’s efforts to further the regional defender movement, which includes the organization of independent or collaborative defender military forces in order to liberate ransacked regions,

Further acknowledging Kuriko’s force as a leader of peacekeeping forces, historically holding over half-a-dozen high-ranking positions in nearly that many regions or organizations, including in positions that established nearly unprecedented levels of communication with natives in order to ensure their general happiness and well-being during the defense,

Astonished by the utter magnitude and significance of the defense missions that Kuriko has undergone, numbering in the hundreds, including:
  1. The coordination of the Ten Thousand Islands Treaty Organization's forces in order to help thwart the attempted 2019 coup of the East Pacific,
  2. The pivotal role taken in the refoundation of Iran, restoring the region to its natives and ensuring its security onward,
  3. Participation in the final liberation attempt of Anontia, a region raided as a part of annual celebrations by invaders,

Realizing that Kuriko's roles in non-military positions are no less crucial towards NationStates as a whole, and as such, believing that Kuriko's time spent in roles such as Officer of Culture in the Rejected Realms, Secretary of State in The Free Nations Region, and as a Court Justice in The Union of Democratic States, enriched public life and ensured that domestic order was maintained,

Thanking Kuriko for their contributions specifically to 10000 Islands, in which they have more time than any other as Delegate,

Celebrating that during their time as Delegate, they have ushered in a new era of international relations with the region, as seen through treaties with Yggdrasil, the East Pacific, and the South Pacific, as well as through various cultural exchanges with the Rejected Realms and the North Pacific,

Flattered by Kuriko's constant efforts to better this already unfathomably great chamber through inordinate amounts of Security Council resolutions, being one of the few authors to have ever passed a double-digit number of resolutions in this chamber, and surpassing all other author delegations,

Recognizing that Kuriko has helped bring to light both laudable and duplicitous nations through their various commendations and condemnations, such as:
  1. Commend Texas, a congratulatory acclamation for one of the oldest, prominent, and historically significant regions, Texas,
  2. The improved denunciation of Macedon through Condemn Macedon, the first entity recognized by this esteemed body, bringing it up-to-date with modern standards for condemnation, and the subsequent repeal of the original resolution,
  3. Commend Common Territories, which congratulated The Empire of Common Territories for being among the most benevolent nations in the world, who allows a remarkable amount of autonomy to its various provinces,

Further admiring Kuriko's use of the Security Council to further defender causes, especially through resolutions such as:
  1. Liberate The Monarchist Entente and the ensuing repeal of the resolution, the first of which was in order to ensure that raiding forces could be expelled from the regions and the latter of which was to ensure that the natives of the region could secure the region safely,
  2. Liberate Boston, a resolution passed in order to ensure that the region of Boston did not fall victim to fascist or otherwise despicable invaders,

Congratulating the Kurikoian Empress Aelia Murena for her victory in the 2020 World Assembly Secretary-General election, no doubt stemming from their previous accomplishments within the World Assembly, as well as their noble campaign,

Hereby commends Kuriko.
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Postby Tinhampton » Sun Aug 09, 2020 7:42 pm

Support as a replacement. You have not, however, told us why all of the positions you have listed were important for either the multiverse or Kuriko's reputation among other nations/players.

The first letter of "One" is unnecessarily capitalised in the PRAISING clause and you have a rogue [/url] in the FURTHER ADMIRING clause.
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Postby Morover » Sun Aug 09, 2020 8:11 pm

Tinhampton wrote:Support as a replacement. You have not, however, told us why all of the positions you have listed were important for either the multiverse or Kuriko's reputation among other nations/players.

The first letter of "One" is unnecessarily capitalised in the PRAISING clause and you have a rogue [/url] in the FURTHER ADMIRING clause.

Fixed the grammar issues - I'll try and add a bit more justification for the non-defender positions, but I only have about 100 characters to work around with, so it may not be possible to the fullest extent.

EDIT: Hopefully "Realizing..." is sufficient now - the draft sits at 4952 characters, 48 short of the limit.
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Postby Paffnia » Wed Aug 12, 2020 10:05 am

Morover wrote:they have launched a trend within the region to leave behind an ideology of looking inwards towards themselves, and instead be much more prominent within the international community outside of simply militaristic activities

Really not trying to open a can of worms here, but perhaps this could be phrased shorter/more positively/less on the past: "they led/spearheaded the reorienting of the region towards the international community" or "they strongly bolstered the region's ties to and prominence in the international community."

Also, in terms of XKI achievements, if there's room and any merit mentioning (not sure they do, but for reference), Kuri also was behind the increase in delegate term limits, ran cultural exchange events with TRR and TNP, and was one of the three nations who came up with the idea to dedicate a Senate seat to overseeing/expanding roleplay.
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Postby HumanSanity » Wed Aug 12, 2020 3:13 pm

Morover wrote:Praising the furtherance of the regional defender movement at large, both through the organization of independent or collaborative defender military forces in order to liberate ransacked regions, or as a leader of peacekeeping forces, as best exemplified through their service as Secretary of Defense in The Free Nations Region, one of the Commanders of Solidarity, Warden Commander of The Order of The Grey Wardens, Second in Command of the Lazarene Celestial Armada, and many more high-ranking positions in various armed forces organizations,

Perhaps add that Kuriko was at one point a TITO Tactical Officer? If we're just going to laundry list some military positions she's held.

However, the section would be improved if you specified what Kuriko did in those positions. What about her tenure as Secretary of Defense in FNR was so impactful? Perhaps speak to why Solidarity was unique as an organization?

Morover wrote:Astonished by the utter magnitude and significance of the defense missions that Kuriko has undergone, numbering in the hundreds, not the least impressive of which are:
  1. The help in the defense of The East Pacific through their coordination of the Ten Thousand Islands Treaty Organization, ultimately contributing to thwarting the coup attempt and keeping the residents of the region safe,

I realize you're writing this, but like, I feel like we could be more word efficient while still maintaining some sass here. Maybe "Coordinating the Ten Thousand Islands Treaty Organization's efforts to defend The East Pacific from the 2019 coup attempt" in the TEP bullet point? Maybe dropping some extra adjectives in the stem clause?

Morover wrote:
  1. Participation in the final liberation attempt of Anontia, a region raided in jest during annual celebrations by invaders,

I was CTE when this happened, but what are you referring to by "in jest"?

Morover wrote:Thanking Kuriko for their contributions specifically to 10000 Islands, in which they have set a historical record for time spent as Delegate, during which time they have launched a trend within the region to leave behind an ideology of looking inwards towards themselves, and instead be much more prominent within the international community outside of simply militaristic activities, as is especially prominent through treaties that Kuriko brokered such as that with Yggdrasil and the South Pacific,

I feel as if some of the phrasing on this is unnecessarily convoluted. Like "launched a trend within the region to leave behind an ideology of looking inwards towards themselves" seems like a lot of words for a relatively simple idea. That could free up space to explain how she did this.
I think when you say "outside of simply militaristic activities", perhaps use that change to specify what those things were/are (i.e.joint events with TNP/TRR that Paffnia identifies). I also am not a fan of the term "militarist" here.
Maybe change "especially prominent" because the word "prominent" currently appears twice in the clause?
Perhaps also include Kuriko's role in coordinating the treaty with The East Pacific?
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Postby Twobagger » Wed Aug 12, 2020 5:25 pm

HumanSanity wrote:
Morover wrote:
  1. Participation in the final liberation attempt of Anontia, a region raided in jest during annual celebrations by invaders,

I was CTE when this happened, but what are you referring to by "in jest"?

This was the annual Raidercon raid. After we successfully defended Philippines, raiders hit this region, which we then sieged and liberated.

I don't know about "in jest," though; to me, that carries connotations that raiders were only joking when they hit the region, and not so much that they did it as part of a celebration. But I guess that's beside the point - for this resolution, the important part isn't why the raiders took the region, but that Kuriko was present for part of the effort to defend it.
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Postby HumanSanity » Wed Aug 12, 2020 9:41 pm

Twobagger wrote:
HumanSanity wrote:
I was CTE when this happened, but what are you referring to by "in jest"?

This was the annual Raidercon raid. After we successfully defended Philippines, raiders hit this region, which we then sieged and liberated.

I don't know about "in jest," though; to me, that carries connotations that raiders were only joking when they hit the region, and not so much that they did it as part of a celebration. But I guess that's beside the point - for this resolution, the important part isn't why the raiders took the region, but that Kuriko was present for part of the effort to defend it.

Yeah, "in jest" seems wrong. Small potato, but worth mentioning.
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Postby Morover » Fri Aug 14, 2020 6:23 pm

Paffnia wrote:
Morover wrote:they have launched a trend within the region to leave behind an ideology of looking inwards towards themselves, and instead be much more prominent within the international community outside of simply militaristic activities

Really not trying to open a can of worms here, but perhaps this could be phrased shorter/more positively/less on the past: "they led/spearheaded the reorienting of the region towards the international community" or "they strongly bolstered the region's ties to and prominence in the international community."

Also, in terms of XKI achievements, if there's room and any merit mentioning (not sure they do, but for reference), Kuri also was behind the increase in delegate term limits, ran cultural exchange events with TRR and TNP, and was one of the three nations who came up with the idea to dedicate a Senate seat to overseeing/expanding roleplay.

I'll try and make it sound more positive on the past - I didn't mean for it to sound negative, honestly.

I'll try and add a few more XKI achievements within that clause - though a lot of it will not be able to make the cut due to the character limit. I also don't know how I'd legally phrase roleplay in this situation so that make not be able to be included, unfortunately.

HumanSanity wrote:Perhaps add that Kuriko was at one point a TITO Tactical Officer? If we're just going to laundry list some military positions she's held.

However, the section would be improved if you specified what Kuriko did in those positions. What about her tenure as Secretary of Defense in FNR was so impactful? Perhaps speak to why Solidarity was unique as an organization?

In a few drafts, I tried to give a lot more information about this positions. However, due to various issues with preservation of information, some of this isn't even reliably available, and the little I did have didn't feel like it was worth including, as it may unintentionally make it seem like some positions are more important than others, even if they weren't. Additionally, this is precariously close to the character limit, so any additionally included information may be difficult to put in there.

Frankly, I'm not super in-tune with the R/D game. If you (or anyone else who is) wants to DM me and we can work through that clause together, it would really help and probably be beneficial towards the proposal as well.

HumanSanity wrote:I realize you're writing this, but like, I feel like we could be more word efficient while still maintaining some sass here. Maybe "Coordinating the Ten Thousand Islands Treaty Organization's efforts to defend The East Pacific from the 2019 coup attempt" in the TEP bullet point? Maybe dropping some extra adjectives in the stem clause?

I'll tighten up the wording. My initial goal was for the formatting of those subclauses to be "Helping [name of event] through [way she helped]," but I also understand that such formatting isn't strictly necessary.

HumanSanity wrote:I was CTE when this happened, but what are you referring to by "in jest"?

Twobagger wrote:I don't know about "in jest," though; to me, that carries connotations that raiders were only joking when they hit the region, and not so much that they did it as part of a celebration. But I guess that's beside the point - for this resolution, the important part isn't why the raiders took the region, but that Kuriko was present for part of the effort to defend it.

My intention was for it to be "in their celebrations," but now that it's pointed out, I can't read it in any other way than "humorously," so that'll be changed.

HumanSanity wrote:I feel as if some of the phrasing on this is unnecessarily convoluted. Like "launched a trend within the region to leave behind an ideology of looking inwards towards themselves" seems like a lot of words for a relatively simple idea. That could free up space to explain how she did this.

I'll tighten this up.
HumanSanity wrote:I think when you say "outside of simply militaristic activities", perhaps use that change to specify what those things were/are (i.e.joint events with TNP/TRR that Paffnia identifies). I also am not a fan of the term "militarist" here.
Maybe change "especially prominent" because the word "prominent" currently appears twice in the clause?
Perhaps also include Kuriko's role in coordinating the treaty with The East Pacific?

I'll try and add as much of this as I can - I don't want to underemphasize her immense contributions to XKI.

I'm posting this before making changes to the draft - I'll edit the post when the changes have been made.
EDIT: Changes have been made. Let me know what you think.
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Postby Morover » Sun Aug 23, 2020 7:09 pm

More changes have been made. This is about 2 characters away from the limit.
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Postby Team Lennox » Sun Aug 23, 2020 8:13 pm

I would've had added the offensive liberation she put on a Nazi and fascist region Liberate: KAISERREICH Security Council Resolution#245 but that would be over the character limit
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Postby Kuriko » Fri Aug 28, 2020 9:04 am

I just want my commendation repealed, and to be left alone after. I'm not, nor will I ever be, a commendable figure within the community. Thank you for writing this Morover, I'm sorry that I'll never be a commendable nominee.
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Postby Honeydewistania » Fri Aug 28, 2020 9:09 am

Kuriko wrote:I just want my commendation repealed, and to be left alone after. I'm not, nor will I ever be, a commendable figure within the community. Thank you for writing this Morover, I'm sorry that I'll never be a commendable nominee.

Why not?
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Kuriko wrote:I just want my commendation repealed, and to be left alone after. I'm not, nor will I ever be, a commendable figure within the community. Thank you for writing this Morover, I'm sorry that I'll never be a commendable nominee.

As much as I disagree, I do respect your own personal opinion and will be putting this on hold indefinitely - at least until something changes in your mind or in the community. Either way, thank you for your service to NS.
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Postby Honeydewistania » Fri Aug 28, 2020 9:55 am

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Postby HumanSanity » Fri Aug 28, 2020 10:35 am

Kuriko wrote:I just want my commendation repealed, and to be left alone after. I'm not, nor will I ever be, a commendable figure within the community. Thank you for writing this Morover, I'm sorry that I'll never be a commendable nominee.

:(

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Postby Free Las Pinas » Fri Aug 28, 2020 5:25 pm

Kuriko wrote:I just want my commendation repealed, and to be left alone after. I'm not, nor will I ever be, a commendable figure within the community. Thank you for writing this Morover, I'm sorry that I'll never be a commendable nominee.

:(

It's unfortunate that you decided you didn't want to be commended and I hope you do change your mind. You may not believe you're a commendable figure, but a ton of us do!

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Postby Amerion » Fri Aug 28, 2020 11:07 pm

If I may echo the sentiments of the above members, I too think your achievements in this game are commendable and I hope you'll reconsider your position ^_^
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Postby WayNeacTia » Fri Aug 28, 2020 11:42 pm

Amerion wrote:If I may echo the sentiments of the above members, I too think your achievements in this game are commendable and I hope you'll reconsider your position ^_^

Not everyone is in it for the glory. There are people that crave the attention. I for one greatly commend Kuri for taking the stance he is taking.
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Postby Gorundu » Sat Aug 29, 2020 12:17 am

Wayneactia wrote:
Amerion wrote:If I may echo the sentiments of the above members, I too think your achievements in this game are commendable and I hope you'll reconsider your position ^_^

Not everyone is in it for the glory. There are people that crave the attention. I for one greatly commend Kuri for taking the stance he is taking.

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Postby RiderSyl » Sat Aug 29, 2020 7:30 am

HumanSanity wrote:Whatever sideshow has caused you to say this, the world is undoubtedly better because you played than if you didn't.

100% this^
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Postby Kuriko » Wed Sep 02, 2020 4:07 am

Kuriko wrote:I just want my commendation repealed, and to be left alone after. I'm not, nor will I ever be, a commendable figure within the community. Thank you for writing this Morover, I'm sorry that I'll never be a commendable nominee.

When I wrote this I was feeling depressed over something that makes me feel very sad when it's continuously brought up, and I felt like I wasn't worthy. Today I read a post by Noah on the TNP forum, and what he said makes sense. I'm done feeling sad about it, and it should really be up to the community whether I'm commendable or not. I retract what I said, after all i didn't give that consideration when I commended Fratt (which I'm still sorry for costing him his nation).
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Postby RiderSyl » Wed Sep 02, 2020 5:14 am

super glad you're in a better place emotionally, Kuriko :hug:
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Postby Fauxia » Wed Sep 02, 2020 8:07 am

Kuriko wrote:
Kuriko wrote:I just want my commendation repealed, and to be left alone after. I'm not, nor will I ever be, a commendable figure within the community. Thank you for writing this Morover, I'm sorry that I'll never be a commendable nominee.

When I wrote this I was feeling depressed over something that makes me feel very sad when it's continuously brought up, and I felt like I wasn't worthy. Today I read a post by Noah on the TNP forum, and what he said makes sense. I'm done feeling sad about it, and it should really be up to the community whether I'm commendable or not. I retract what I said, after all i didn't give that consideration when I commended Fratt (which I'm still sorry for costing him his nation).

Lol, it only cost him his nation because of his choice.

But good to hear that you’re doing better emotionally :)

I will, of course, support this.
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Postby Syberis » Thu Sep 03, 2020 8:04 am

Honestly, this is a well-written draft that focuses on the community-building and maintaining that Kuriko thrives at. I would give my unreserved support if it weren't for one thing.

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