- getting rid of "also known as FuF" if it's not going to be used in the resolution.
- writing 'birthright citizenship' instead of just 'citizenship' for that last dot point in the issues authored clause
- "Creating a regional newspaper known as the Forest News Leaf, the first of its kind in the region which featured news from many of the nations residing therein." - the underlined section seems like a tautology - what other kinds of newspaper are there that don't feature news from many of the nations within it? To me it seems obvious that a regional newspaper features news from nations within its region. Maybe elaborate more as to why it's special. Also, does/did Forest have other newspapers? If no, then it's not really first of its kind.
- Suggested rewording: "Creating the annual Forest Photo Contest in 2015, a contest which has since run
every yearannuallyever since,thenfeaturing pictures from many nations throughout the realms." - I think some elaboration is warranted as to the other regional events FuF hosted, a list would be fine