[PASSED] Condemn 'Psychotic Dictatorships'

[Sedgistan]

Condemn 'Psychotic Dictatorships'

Condemnation

Nominee: Psychotic Dictatorships

A resolution to express shock and dismay at a nation or region.

In the name of all things democratic and free, this most august and well-endowed Security Council,

Detesting the existence of deplorable, despicable, disagreeable, diabolical, and all-around dastardly dominions in the world, which exist in spite of the best efforts of the influential and mighty nations of the world,

Aware that, while the possession of autocratic ideals is not an inherently vile disposition, it does lead the way for less savory and more ruthless characteristics,

Disgusted by the region of Psychotic Dictatorships, which has shown time and time again to not only foster these unscrupulous ideals in nations that otherwise had a chance of being good, but also to naturally seek out these nations and thrust them on the world stage for no other good reason than to commit atrocities towards the people of these nations, as well as signalling ill-will towards other nations,

Noting that the region has disavowed the World Assembly for many years due to the region being incompatible with many of the principles and ideals of the organization, as demonstrated by their policy of unchecked isolationism which is ever-present within the region as shown by their near-complete lack of embassies, save for the envoy with the Bedetopian Network, a splitaway region created by a former officer of Psychotic Dictatorships,

Disgusted by the fact that this embassy with the Bedetopian Network is present due to Psychotic Dictatorships use of the Network as a proxy for raiding missions, breaking their time-honored tradition of World Assembly rejection for the most despicable reasons possible,

Deploring the actions of the founder nation of this sanctum for the deranged, Menta Lee-IL, whose leader has shown that while it can oftentimes be difficult to isolate a singularly crazed individual a place so filled to the brim with psychopathic individuals, it is also quite possible to discern the person behind the lunacy,

Viscerally nauseated by the fact that Menta Lee-IL has forbidden the use of the name of their leader, simply requiring all nations (and presumably the residents within those nations, which would mean this edict is affecting trillions upon trillions of sapient individuals) to refer to them as "DEAREST LEADER" or similar, and explicitly mentioning this so-called "DEAREST LEADER's" feet as smelling of the highest quality roses and cologne that is in existence - a decree that was, rather oddly, accepted with minimal resistance,

Doubting that this individual's feet can smell anywhere close to that which they are described, and believing that if they do, in fact, smell of roses and cologne, that such a condition is a medical mystery that "DEAREST LEADER" should have professionally examined at the soonest opportunity possible,

Saddened by the complete dismissal of the World Assembly and its many benefits, despite the undeniable goodness that the World Assembly brings to the world at large on all accounts - a dismissal which, for many years, included a complete and explicit ban for all of Psychotic Dictatorships' nations from joining the World Assembly, which was no doubt in order to commit more atrocities without feeling the wrath that the World Assembly can bring down upon the region,

Perturbed by the nations which had the potential to do much good for the world hindered by this region, especially that of Samantha-Higgs, a nation that is ruled by somebody named Samantha who simply wanted to save their planet from nuclear war, but ended up killing all of the leaders of that planet and suppressing the many people residing on it,

Further disappointed that regions with such fruitful art collections such as that housed by Destructive Government Economic System are kept hidden from the world by the tyannical regime which runs it,

Unnerved by the excessive use of exclamation marks in the region, including in regional doctrine and public documents,

Slightly confused as to the reason why words relating to democratic ideals must be censored, given that the censorship of such words does no such thing to lessen actual thoughts of the ideology or its relatives,

And unhinged by the fact that "BEING A PONY NATION" results in removal from the region, a rule that is completely out of place and totally unfair,

Hereby condemns Psychotic Dictatorships.

[Morover]

Reserved for drafts:

In the name of all things democratic and free, this most august and well-endowed Security Council,

Noting the existence of dastardly, despicable, disagreeable, diabolical, and all-around deplorable nations in the world, in spite of the best efforts of the influential and mighty nations of the world,

Aware that, while the lack of democratic ideals is not an inherently vile disposition, it does lead way for less savory and more ruthless characteristic,

Disgusted by the region of Psychotic Dictatorships, which has shown time and time again to not only foster these unscrupulous ideals in nations that otherwise had a chance of being good, but also to naturally seek out these nations and thrust them on the world stage for no other good reason than to commit atrocities towards the people of these nations, as well as signalling ill-will towards other nations,

Deploring the actions of the founder of this sanctum for the deranged, Menta Lee-IL, who has shown that, while it can oftentimes be difficult to isolate a singularly crazed individual a place so filled to the brim with psychopathic individuals, it is also quite possible to discern the person behind the lunacy,

Viscerally nauseated by the fact that Menta Lee-IL has forbade the use of their name, simply requiring all nations (and presumably the residents within those nations, which would mean this edict is affecting trillions upon trillions of sapient individuals) to refer to them as "DEAREST LEADER" or similar, and explicitly mentioning this so-called "DEAREST LEADER's" feet as smelling of the highest quality roses and cologne that is in existence - a decree that was, rather oddly, accepted with minimal resistance,

Doubting that this individual's feet can smell anywhere close to that which they are described, and believing that if they do, in fact, smell of roses and cologne, that such a condition is a medical mystery that "DEAREST LEADER" should have professionally examined at the soonest opportunity possible,

Saddened by the complete dismissal of the World Assembly and its many benefits, despite the undeniable goodness that the World Assembly brings to the world at large on all accounts - a dismissal which, for many years, included a complete and explicit ban for all of Psychotic Dictatorships' nations from joining the World Assembly, which was no doubt in order to commit more atrocities without feeling the wrath that the World Assembly can bring down upon the region,

Perturbed by the nations which had the potential to do much good for the world hindered by this region, especially that of Samantha-Higgs, a nation that is ruled by somebody named Samantha who simply wanted to save their planet from nuclear war, but ended up killing all of the leaders of that planet and suppressing the many people residing on it,

Further disappointed that regions with such fruitful art collections such as that housed by Destructive Government Economic System are kept hidden from the world by the tyannical regime which runs it,

Unnerved by the presence of far too many exclamation marks within the text of the region,

Slightly confused as to the reason why words relating to democratic ideals must be censored, given that the censorship of such words does no such thing to lessen actual thoughts of the ideology or its relatives,

And unhinged by the fact that "BEING A PONY NATION" results in a banjection, a rule that is completely out of place and totally unfair,

Hereby condemns Psychotic Dictatorships.

In the name of all things democratic and free, this most august and well-endowed Security Council,

Noting the existence of dastardly, despicable, disagreeable, diabolical, and all-around deplorable nations in the world, in spite of the best efforts of the influential and mighty nations of the world,

Aware that, while the lack of democratic ideals is not an inherently vile disposition, it does lead way for less savory and more ruthless characteristic,

Disgusted by the region of Psychotic Dictatorships, which has shown time and time again to not only foster these unscrupulous ideals in nations that otherwise had a chance of being good, but also to naturally seek out these nations and thrust them on the world stage for no other good reason than to commit atrocities towards the people of these nations, as well as signalling ill-will towards other nations,

Sickened by the policy of unchecked isolationism which is ever-present within the region, as shown by their near-complete lack of embassies, save for the envoy with the Bedetopian Network, a splitaway region created by a former officer of Psychotic Dictatorships, which has participated in a multitude of proxy military missions, and successfully capturing fifteen different regions under the flag of Psychotic Dictatorships,

Deploring the actions of the founder nation of this sanctum for the deranged, Menta Lee-IL, whose leader has shown that, while it can oftentimes be difficult to isolate a singularly crazed individual a place so filled to the brim with psychopathic individuals, it is also quite possible to discern the person behind the lunacy,

Viscerally nauseated by the fact that Menta Lee-IL has forbade the use of the name of their leader, simply requiring all nations (and presumably the residents within those nations, which would mean this edict is affecting trillions upon trillions of sapient individuals) to refer to them as "DEAREST LEADER" or similar, and explicitly mentioning this so-called "DEAREST LEADER's" feet as smelling of the highest quality roses and cologne that is in existence - a decree that was, rather oddly, accepted with minimal resistance,

Doubting that this individual's feet can smell anywhere close to that which they are described, and believing that if they do, in fact, smell of roses and cologne, that such a condition is a medical mystery that "DEAREST LEADER" should have professionally examined at the soonest opportunity possible,

Saddened by the complete dismissal of the World Assembly and its many benefits, despite the undeniable goodness that the World Assembly brings to the world at large on all accounts - a dismissal which, for many years, included a complete and explicit ban for all of Psychotic Dictatorships' nations from joining the World Assembly, which was no doubt in order to commit more atrocities without feeling the wrath that the World Assembly can bring down upon the region,

Perturbed by the nations which had the potential to do much good for the world hindered by this region, especially that of Samantha-Higgs, a nation that is ruled by somebody named Samantha who simply wanted to save their planet from nuclear war, but ended up killing all of the leaders of that planet and suppressing the many people residing on it,

Further disappointed that regions with such fruitful art collections such as that housed by Destructive Government Economic System are kept hidden from the world by the tyannical regime which runs it,

Unnerved by the presence of far too many exclamation marks within the text of the region,

Slightly confused as to the reason why words relating to democratic ideals must be censored, given that the censorship of such words does no such thing to lessen actual thoughts of the ideology or its relatives,

And unhinged by the fact that "BEING A PONY NATION" results in a banjection, a rule that is completely out of place and totally unfair,

Hereby condemns Psychotic Dictatorships.

In the name of all things democratic and free, this most august and well-endowed Security Council,

Detesting the existence of deplorable, despicable, disagreeable, diabolical, and all-around dastardly dominions in the world, which exist in spite of the best efforts of the influential and mighty nations of the world,

Aware that, while the lack of democratic ideals is not an inherently vile disposition, it does lead way for less savory and more ruthless characteristics,

Disgusted by the region of Psychotic Dictatorships, which has shown time and time again to not only foster these unscrupulous ideals in nations that otherwise had a chance of being good, but also to naturally seek out these nations and thrust them on the world stage for no other good reason than to commit atrocities towards the people of these nations, as well as signalling ill-will towards other nations,

Believing that the region, despite years of disavowing the World Assembly, has delved into it, despite being incompatible with many of the principles and ideals of the organization, as demonstrated by their policy of unchecked isolationism which is ever-present within the region, as shown by their near-complete lack of embassies, save for the envoy with the Bedetopian Network, a splitaway region created by a former officer of Psychotic Dictatorships, which has participated in a multitude of proxy military missions, and successfully capturing fifteen different regions under the flag of Psychotic Dictatorships,

Deploring the actions of the founder nation of this sanctum for the deranged, Menta Lee-IL, whose leader has shown that while it can oftentimes be difficult to isolate a singularly crazed individual a place so filled to the brim with psychopathic individuals, it is also quite possible to discern the person behind the lunacy,

Viscerally nauseated by the fact that Menta Lee-IL has forbade the use of the name of their leader, simply requiring all nations (and presumably the residents within those nations, which would mean this edict is affecting trillions upon trillions of sapient individuals) to refer to them as "DEAREST LEADER" or similar, and explicitly mentioning this so-called "DEAREST LEADER's" feet as smelling of the highest quality roses and cologne that is in existence - a decree that was, rather oddly, accepted with minimal resistance,

Doubting that this individual's feet can smell anywhere close to that which they are described, and believing that if they do, in fact, smell of roses and cologne, that such a condition is a medical mystery that "DEAREST LEADER" should have professionally examined at the soonest opportunity possible,

Saddened by the complete dismissal of the World Assembly and its many benefits, despite the undeniable goodness that the World Assembly brings to the world at large on all accounts - a dismissal which, for many years, included a complete and explicit ban for all of Psychotic Dictatorships' nations from joining the World Assembly, which was no doubt in order to commit more atrocities without feeling the wrath that the World Assembly can bring down upon the region,

Perturbed by the nations which had the potential to do much good for the world hindered by this region, especially that of Samantha-Higgs, a nation that is ruled by somebody named Samantha who simply wanted to save their planet from nuclear war, but ended up killing all of the leaders of that planet and suppressing the many people residing on it,

Further disappointed that regions with such fruitful art collections such as that housed by Destructive Government Economic System are kept hidden from the world by the tyannical regime which runs it,

Unnerved by the over-excessive use of exclamation marks in the region, including in regional doctrine and public documents,

Slightly confused as to the reason why words relating to democratic ideals must be censored, given that the censorship of such words does no such thing to lessen actual thoughts of the ideology or its relatives,

And unhinged by the fact that "BEING A PONY NATION" results in removal from the region, a rule that is completely out of place and totally unfair,

Hereby condemns Psychotic Dictatorships.

In the name of all things democratic and free, this most august and well-endowed Security Council,

Detesting the existence of deplorable, despicable, disagreeable, diabolical, and all-around dastardly dominions in the world, which exist in spite of the best efforts of the influential and mighty nations of the world,

Aware that, while the possession of autocratic ideals is not an inherently vile disposition, it does lead way for less savory and more ruthless characteristics,

Disgusted by the region of Psychotic Dictatorships, which has shown time and time again to not only foster these unscrupulous ideals in nations that otherwise had a chance of being good, but also to naturally seek out these nations and thrust them on the world stage for no other good reason than to commit atrocities towards the people of these nations, as well as signalling ill-will towards other nations,

Believing that the region, despite years of disavowing the World Assembly, has delved into it, due to the region being incompatible with many of the principles and ideals of the organization, as demonstrated by their policy of unchecked isolationism which is ever-present within the region as shown by their near-complete lack of embassies, save for the envoy with the Bedetopian Network, a splitaway region created by a former officer of Psychotic Dictatorships, which has participated in a multitude of proxy military missions, and successfully capturing fifteen different regions under the flag of Psychotic Dictatorships,

Deploring the actions of the founder nation of this sanctum for the deranged, Menta Lee-IL, whose leader has shown that while it can oftentimes be difficult to isolate a singularly crazed individual a place so filled to the brim with psychopathic individuals, it is also quite possible to discern the person behind the lunacy,

Viscerally nauseated by the fact that Menta Lee-IL has forbidden the use of the name of their leader, simply requiring all nations (and presumably the residents within those nations, which would mean this edict is affecting trillions upon trillions of sapient individuals) to refer to them as "DEAREST LEADER" or similar, and explicitly mentioning this so-called "DEAREST LEADER's" feet as smelling of the highest quality roses and cologne that is in existence - a decree that was, rather oddly, accepted with minimal resistance,

Doubting that this individual's feet can smell anywhere close to that which they are described, and believing that if they do, in fact, smell of roses and cologne, that such a condition is a medical mystery that "DEAREST LEADER" should have professionally examined at the soonest opportunity possible,

Saddened by the complete dismissal of the World Assembly and its many benefits, despite the undeniable goodness that the World Assembly brings to the world at large on all accounts - a dismissal which, for many years, included a complete and explicit ban for all of Psychotic Dictatorships' nations from joining the World Assembly, which was no doubt in order to commit more atrocities without feeling the wrath that the World Assembly can bring down upon the region,

Perturbed by the nations which had the potential to do much good for the world hindered by this region, especially that of Samantha-Higgs, a nation that is ruled by somebody named Samantha who simply wanted to save their planet from nuclear war, but ended up killing all of the leaders of that planet and suppressing the many people residing on it,

Further disappointed that regions with such fruitful art collections such as that housed by Destructive Government Economic System are kept hidden from the world by the tyannical regime which runs it,

Unnerved by the excessive use of exclamation marks in the region, including in regional doctrine and public documents,

Slightly confused as to the reason why words relating to democratic ideals must be censored, given that the censorship of such words does no such thing to lessen actual thoughts of the ideology or its relatives,

And unhinged by the fact that "BEING A PONY NATION" results in removal from the region, a rule that is completely out of place and totally unfair,

Hereby condemns Psychotic Dictatorships.

[Zeritae]

Supported.

[ShrewLlamaLand]

Do they want a condemn?

[Morover]

Do they want a condemn?

I've contacted the leadership and they pretty much said that if it gains traction, to go ahead with it. The old attempts to condemn the region seems to make them doubt whether they're worthy of it, but I personally think they are.

[ShrewLlamaLand]

Do they want a condemn?

I've contacted the leadership and they pretty much said that if it gains traction, to go ahead with it. The old attempts to condemn the region seems to make them doubt whether they're worthy of it, but I personally think they are.

It's unexpected they'd approve, but they're right - they don't deserve it.

[Morover]

I've contacted the leadership and they pretty much said that if it gains traction, to go ahead with it. The old attempts to condemn the region seems to make them doubt whether they're worthy of it, but I personally think they are.

It's unexpected they'd approve, but they're right - they don't deserve it.

Why don't you believe that? They do a good job at being bad.

EDIT: Also note that I said that it's mostly due to the other proposals on the subject being shot down, which isn't an accurate testament to whether they actually deserve it or not.

[Konar]

Do they want a condemn?

Does it matter? If a region is utterly and truly condemnable, and the members of the Security Council agrees upon it, then they should be condemned, regardless of their desires.

[Zeritae]

Do they want a condemn?

Does it matter? If a region is utterly and truly condemnable, and the members of the Security Council agrees upon it, then they should be condemned, regardless of their desires.

Shrew's just jealous.

[Lamenia]

Do they want a condemn?

Does it matter? If a region is utterly and truly condemnable, and the members of the Security Council agrees upon it, then they should be condemned, regardless of their desires.

Shrew tolerates the WA, until it does its job.

[Zeritae]

Does it matter? If a region is utterly and truly condemnable, and the members of the Security Council agrees upon it, then they should be condemned, regardless of their desires.

Shrew tolerates the WA, until it does its job.

No more deceit, No more elite, too much bullsh*t, from shrew.

[Jocospor]

It's unexpected they'd approve, but they're right - they don't deserve it.

Why don't you believe that? They do a good job at being bad.

EDIT: Also note that I said that it's mostly due to the other proposals on the subject being shot down, which isn't an accurate testament to whether they actually deserve it or not.

PD is something I might keep on the mantelpiece in my CCD office. Looks pretty, completely inanimate.

[Lamenia]

Shrew tolerates the WA, until it does its job.

No more deceit, No more elite, too much bullsh*t, from shrew.

Oh, I'm fine with the WA just not the security council, the general assembly or delegates.

[ShrewLlamaLand]

It's unexpected they'd approve, but they're right - they don't deserve it.

Why don't you believe that?

Why do you think they deserve a condemn? The region has under 100 nations, no WA involvement, mostly a bunch of relatively inactive puppets. The RMB averages maybe a dozen posts a week. They've done absolutely nothing notable other than existing for a while.

They do a good job at being bad.

Yeah, so do we.

[Jocospor]

Why don't you believe that?

Why do you think they deserve a condemn? The region has under 100 nations, no WA involvement, mostly a bunch of relatively inactive puppets. The RMB averages maybe a dozen posts a week. They've done absolutely nothing notable other than existing for a while.

^ mantelpiece

[South Reinkalistan]

This is hilarious. Full support.

[Morover]

Why don't you believe that?

Why do you think they deserve a condemn? The region has under 100 nations, no WA involvement, mostly a bunch of relatively inactive puppets. The RMB averages maybe a dozen posts a week. They've done absolutely nothing notable other than existing for a while.

Because, frankly, keeping up the RP for 10+ years in a humorous manner that does actually demonstrate the point of the region is significant. They are notable for their RP, which is done in a rather unique and funny way.

They do a good job at being bad.

Yeah, so do we.

I never said you don't. In fact, I believe I said that, under the right circumstances, a condemnation for the CCD is possible. You need to stop raving about "the WA Elite" unironically and actually manage your OOC appearance better than has been being done, but it can be done. Don't let your bitterness over the lack of respect to your own region be the reason you don't want another region to receive a condemn.

Perhaps I wasn't clear with what I meant in my initial response to you - it's not that they don't think they're deserving, it's just that they don't have a preference either way, and pointed out to me the historical condemn attempts for them.

EDIT: Also, you can feel free to talk more about how the CCD is more deserving of this or whatever, but this will be my final response on the subject. More thorough critiques will be read and considered, though.

[Bedetopia]

Let me suggest additional material:

You may have noticed PD's only embassy is with me.

I was an officer of the region in the past, and during that time, some regions were raided and captured because they messed with PD. Mostly by me, but Menta also did some refounds. This is quite dated, but a pinch of raiding can probably help with a condemnation.

[ShrewLlamaLand]

Why do you think they deserve a condemn? The region has under 100 nations, no WA involvement, mostly a bunch of relatively inactive puppets. The RMB averages maybe a dozen posts a week. They've done absolutely nothing notable other than existing for a while.

Because, frankly, keeping up the RP for 10+ years in a humorous manner that does actually demonstrate the point of the region is significant. They are notable for their RP, which is done in a rather unique and funny way.

I disagree because the region simply isn't relevant enough to warrant a condemn. It's inactive and mostly consists of puppet nations, and they have exactly zero international involvement.

Yeah, so do we.

I never said you don't. In fact, I believe I said that, under the right circumstances, a condemnation for the CCD is possible. You need to stop raving about "the WA Elite" unironically and actually manage your OOC appearance better than has been being done, but it can be done. Don't let your bitterness over the lack of respect to your own region be the reason you don't want another region to receive a condemn.

Perhaps I wasn't clear with what I meant in my initial response to you - it's not that they don't think they're deserving, it's just that they don't have a preference either way, and pointed out to me the historical condemn attempts for them.

EDIT: Also, you can feel free to talk more about how the CCD is more deserving of this or whatever, but this will be my final response on the subject. More thorough critiques will be read and considered, though.

Oh no, believe me, I really don't care about CCD condemn. We already have a shiny badge.

I also don't really want advice from you on how to run the region, but you know, thanks anyway.

[Morover]

Let me suggest additional material:

You may have noticed PD's only embassy is with me.

I was an officer of the region in the past, and during that time, some regions were raided and captured because they messed with PD. Mostly by me, but Menta also did some refounds. This is quite dated, but a pinch of raiding can probably help with a condemnation.

Oh shoot! I meant to add that in but forgot before posting! My bad!

This is actually the second version of the draft (In version one, I couldn't get it quite right), and I included that in there, but refrained from putting it in this version, since I didn't actually know too much about you. I'll add that in momentarily (as in, within the next few hours).

[Bhang Bhang Duc]

Quite a humorous draft, I like the alliteration in the second clause. Streets ahead of other Condemnation drafts I’ve seen for this region and it looks legal.

I’ll have a closer look at it later, but my first impression is that this is quite a good proposal.

[Bedetopia]

Let me suggest additional material:

You may have noticed PD's only embassy is with me.

I was an officer of the region in the past, and during that time, some regions were raided and captured because they messed with PD. Mostly by me, but Menta also did some refounds. This is quite dated, but a pinch of raiding can probably help with a condemnation.

Oh shoot! I meant to add that in but forgot before posting! My bad!

This is actually the second version of the draft (In version one, I couldn't get it quite right), and I included that in there, but refrained from putting it in this version, since I didn't actually know too much about you. I'll add that in momentarily (as in, within the next few hours).

Well, PD was basically my birthplace before I pursued a career in R/D and became famous/infamous depending on who you ask.

[Morover]

Oh shoot! I meant to add that in but forgot before posting! My bad!

This is actually the second version of the draft (In version one, I couldn't get it quite right), and I included that in there, but refrained from putting it in this version, since I didn't actually know too much about you. I'll add that in momentarily (as in, within the next few hours).

Well, PD was basically my birthplace before I pursued a career in R/D and became famous/infamous depending on who you ask.

Do you think the following clause would be satisfactory (I'd likely place it between the clauses beginning with "Digusted..." and "Deploring...")?

Sickened by the policy of unchecked isolationism which is ever-present within the region, as shown by their near-complete lack of embassies, save for the envoy with the Bedetopian Network, a splitaway region created by a former officer of Psychotic Dictatorships, which has participated in a multitude of proxy military missions, and successfully capturing fifteen different regions under the flag of Psychotic Dictatorships,

It's not perfect but, as a general idea, would that work?

[Menta Lee-IL]

PD is something I might keep on the mantelpiece in my CCD office. Looks pretty, completely inanimate.

So says the "dictator" who has tried to raid our region for members, who has NEVER held a single #1 in the world ranking in ANY despotic category, whereas we in our glory have held NUMEROUS ones, including: black market; police force; corruption; defence forces; authoritarianism; and so-says the "dictator" who doesn't even currently rank in the top 10 in the world in ANY category.

CCD is merely a PD knock-off whose alleged leader can't even keep his own states under control, as displayed by the endless bickering on the forums here. And let's not forget the glorious, disastrous attempt to run for General Secretary of the SCUMBAG WA.

We wouldn't even keep the CCD on our mantel; it deserves to be placed in the fires of history, burned, failed, as a complete ash-heap.

As for this PATHETIC condemnation, bring it on.

AND, as for raiding etc., we recently took control of The Psychotic Dictatorships via re-founding; nobody shall blaspheme OUR NAME and get away with it long term.

TO ULTIMATE TYRANNY.
The DEAREST LEADER of Menta Lee-IL

[Sedgistan]

There are some Rule 4 issues with the clauses on Menta Lee-IL (referring to a nation as a person), which you'll need to work on, but that shouldn't be an insurmountable problem.