OOC post because I don't have enough brain power to coat things into IC.
Morover wrote:Access to Hormonal Therapy
"Affordable Transgender Hormone Therapy" would be more apt and is only 39 or so marks long (current max is 52 or so).
Civil Rights | Significant
Could also easily fit into Healthcare, given that HRT is in RL a healthcare thing.
Believing that transgender people have basic rights and needs.
I know you mean well, but this is worded so that it makes me cringe. Maybe "Reaffirming that gender identity is not a valid reason for discrimination" since that's what this is all about, really. And for anyone crying "but what about gynecologist/[any other genital-based thing]", you can tell them that your proposal is not about genitals and that if they want to write a proposal about genitals, they're free to have a go at it.
Disgusted that some nations refuse to grant transgender people these rights and needs.
This, again, I get your point, but any nation that refuses to do so, is already in violation of WA law, so I suggest changing/removing this one.
Understanding that, for many transgender people, access to sex hormones is vital to one's sense of identity.
...no. Hormones =/= identity. It's the effect of the hormones on the body, changing the secondary sex characteristics, that can help narrow down the gulf between the body and the mind, and to make passing as the sex that matches your gender easier.
Further understanding that many transgender people do not use sex hormones.
Hereby,
Missing an empty line between the statement and Hereby. And also, why the statement? A better one would be "Further understanding that the decision to take hormones should always be up to the individual". Because if you put in the word "many", people who don't understand the issue are going to think that this is something aimed at a minority of a minority.
Defines, for the purposes of this resolution, transgender as an individual whose gender identity is not the same as assigned to said individual at birth.
You're mixing gender and sex there. Better worded as "-individual whose gender identity does not match the sex they were assigned at birth".
Defines, for the purposes of this resolution, sex hormones (henceforth known as "hormones") as a bodily chemical which gives specific gender or sexual characteristics to an individual.
Again mixing with the gender and sex. Maybe better as "-as a chemical naturally produced by the body, which gives the body secondary sex characteristics". For humans that works both ways; fat cells produce estrogen in all sexes,
testicles produce small amounts of it as well, and
ovaries and adrenal glands produce small amounts of testosterone. So as they are produced naturally anyway, you can use the "naturally produced", and anyone who doesn't know biology, can take a leap off the cliff known as Wikipedia.
Defines, for the purposes of this resolution, hormonal therapy as an intentional change in the balance of hormones, in order to more accurately represent an individual's gender or sexual identity.
As others have said, don't use sexual identity, as it has nothing to do with being trans. Also, please use normal English words; "hormone therapy" instead of "hormonal therapy". Also, that's a bad definition. It should at minimum have "using hormones to", since you define hormones above.
Requires all member-states to legalize hormonal therapy for all individuals.
"...all individuals capable of consenting to the treatment." Be very careful how you word this, by the way, because PRA lets parents decide for their kids, which makes CD's arguments on this thread null.
Requires all member-states to have an affordable, easy-to-access way for its transgender population to access hormonal medication.
I disagree with Kenmoria I think it was, about the use of "affordable", and would suggest keeping it this way rather than changing to "reasonable". Both to give some more oomph for your proposal (some spending or regulations by the nation required) as well as to not contradict existing healthcare resolutions.
Forbids any member-state from keeping hormones from a transgender person as punishment for a crime.
I'd add "or as part of a punishment" in there.
Forbids any member-state from forcing an individual to undergo hormonal therapy.
No complaints of this.
Demands that all suppliers of hormones which operate under the jurisdiction of a member-state keep their prices reasonable.
Don't. Keep "affordable" earlier, and nix this entirely. Then the nations are free to decide whether they want to pass a national law requiring low hormone prices from manufacturers, or if the state will cover the costs between affordability and what the manufacturers want for their wares.