by Sargon Reman » Wed May 01, 2019 7:35 am
by Eumaeus » Wed May 01, 2019 8:48 am
Sargon Reman wrote:Commend Woonsocket
COGNIZANT that many nations often go unrecognized for their regional dedication and goodwill,
BELIEVING that these nations should be acknowledged and celebrated for their achievementstoin both their native region and the international community,
RECOGNIZING that ,since its formation fifteen years ago, the nation of Woonsocket has contributed overwhelmingly to the 10000 Islands through civil service and militarily to the international community as a long time member of the Ten Thousand Islands Treaty Organization (TITO),
ACKOWLEDGING that Woonsocket served with distinction in the role of Chief Executive and Founder of the 10000 Islands for nearly three years where their tenure caused sizable regional development and growth,
AWARE that the contributions imputed to Woonsocket are voluminous and include:
-Being a defender in TITO for nearly a decade and having completed over 430 deployments. In this capacity they have been given the rank of TITO Knight Fleet Commander and have been decorated many times, including with
-Being a highly decorated defender in TITO for nearly a decade and having completed over 430 deployments. In this capacity they have been given the rank of TITO Knight Fleet Commander and have been award multiple honors, including the...
- Soldiers Medal,
- Woonsocket Bronze Star,
- Meritorious Service Medal,
- South America Defense Medal,
- TITO 1500th Mission Medal,
- TITO 2000th Mission Medal,
- 10 Year Anniversary Empire of Power Medal,
- TITO 2500th Mission Medal and the TITO 3000th Mission Medal.
-Being a highly decorated defender in TITO for nearly a decade and having completed over 430 deployments. In this capacity they have been given the rank of TITO Knight Fleet Commander and have been award multiple honors, including the...
[list][*]Soldiers Medal,
[*]Woonsocket Bronze Star,
[*]Meritorious Service Medal,
[*]South America Defense Medal,
[*]TITO 1500th Mission Medal,
[*]TITO 2000th Mission Medal,
[*]10 Year Anniversary Empire of Power Medal,
[*]TITO 2500th Mission Medal and the TITO 3000th Mission Medal.[/list]
-Participating in 10 refound operations where founderless regions were once again restored to peace and tranquility. These operations include the refounding of USA, The Skeleton Army, Beyond the Sea, Australia, Natan Region, Animal House, Hogwarts, Urbanites, Greece and United States Congress.
-Deploying in support of operations in Feeders and Sinkers alike in the interest of maintaining lawful regional governments and protecting them from coups. Among these are the Osiris Defense Medal for
support of the region Osiris which allowed the future of the region to be secure, The South Pacific Liberation Medal for assignment to The South Pacific during course of the Milograd coup in 2013 when more than 3,000 native nations were ejected from the region, and the Lazarus Liberation Medal for their role in Lazarus during the New Lazarene Order coup of 2015,
-Serving as a TITO Tactical Officer from January 2015 to August 2017,
OBSERVING that the regional civil service attributed to Woonsocket includes:
-An 11 month tenure as Minister of Immigration where Woonsocket sat on the Council of Nine and guided regional recruiting policy where they oversaw a population increase to an all-time regional population record for user created regions on November 17, 2011 with 2,200 nations.
-Being awarded the Legion of Merit for demonstrating an exemplary record of service to the Islands or the world and the Heart of the Islands trophy for nations who embody and exemplify goodwill.
-Serving as Delegate for 6 months where Woonsocket helped to set the standard for voting on every World Assembly proposal, something which is sought after by subsequent 10000 Islands Delegates to this day.
-Receiving 17 different immigration awards and various distinctions including the 10000 Islands Immigration Medal of Honor and having The Woonsocket Saffron Lighthouse immigration award named in their honor.
NOTING that Woonsocket has held various other roles such as Senator of New Republica South, where they were responsible for increasing political activity, and has held the position of Regional Reserve Chairman, where they provided groundbreaking incentives to nations wishing to join the 10000 Islands, which included their creation of an homesteading program,
IMPRESSED by the discovery of 10000 Islands regional scholars that the government of Woonsocket has sent 133,173 manual recruitment telegrams as a regional recruiter while recruiting a grand total of 4669 recruits to the 10000 Islands,
WISHING to enscribe such a legacy for the study of posterity,
HEREBY commends Woonsocket.
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by Nightkill » Wed May 01, 2019 9:11 am
by Aclion » Wed May 01, 2019 10:40 am
by Sargon Reman » Wed May 01, 2019 11:40 am
by Sargon Reman » Wed May 01, 2019 11:58 am
by Ransium » Wed May 01, 2019 4:31 pm
by Wrapper » Wed May 01, 2019 5:03 pm
Bormiar wrote:10KI was created in early 2003, around sixteen years ago.
by Sargon Reman » Wed May 01, 2019 9:20 pm
Ransium wrote:I would like to give this one a careful read for style. I will try to do so this weekend.
by Bhang Bhang Duc » Thu May 02, 2019 12:39 pm
Pierconium wrote:I see Funk as an opportunistic manipulator that utilises the means available to him to reach his goals. In other words, a nation after my own heart.
RiderSyl wrote:If an enchantress made it so one raid could bring about world peace, Unibot would ask raiders to just sign a petition instead.
Sedgistan wrote:The SC has just has a spate of really shitty ones recently from Northumbria, his Watermelon fanboy…..
by Sargon Reman » Thu May 02, 2019 1:43 pm
Bhang Bhang Duc wrote:Looks pretty detailed on first read, maybe too detailed. You could possibly lose all the various medals awarded and replace with a more general description e.g. “awarded numerous service medals”.
Overall though a good draft proposal.
Edit. Sorry just realised that I’d been reading Eumaeus’ critique of your original draft, not the draft as it stands now. Scrub what I said - put it down to tiredness.
by Sargon Reman » Fri May 03, 2019 7:44 am
FURTHER ACKNOWLEDGING the diplomatic skill demonstrated by Woonsocket as Chief Executive which allowed for the creation of several treaties with important allies, such as The Rejected Realms, and cemented alliances with the 10000 Islands around the world,
by Ransium » Sun May 05, 2019 7:35 am
Sargon Reman wrote:COGNIZANT that many nations often go unrecognized for their regional dedication and goodwill,
BELIEVING that these nations should be acknowledged and celebrated for their achievements in both their native region and the international community,
RECOGNIZING that since its formation fifteen years ago, the nation of Woonsocket has contributed overwhelmingly to the 10000 Islands through civil service and militarily to the international community as a long time member of the Ten Thousand Islands Treaty Organization (TITO),
ACKNOWLEDGING that Woonsocket served with distinction in the role of Chief Executive and Founder of the 10000 Islands for nearly three years where their tenure caused sizable regional development and growth,
AWARE that the contributions imputed to Woonsocket are voluminous and include:
Being a highly decorated defender in TITO for nearly a decade and having completed over 430 deployments. In this capacity they have been given the rank of TITO Knight Fleet Commander and have been decorated many times including with the...
- Soldiers Medal,
- Woonsocket Bronze Star,
- Meritorious Service Medal,
- South America Defense Medal
-Participating in 10 refound operations where founderless regions were restored once again to peace and tranquility. These operations include the refounding of USA, The Skeleton Army, Beyond the Sea, Australia, Natan Region, Animal House, Hogwarts, Urbanites, Greece and United States Congress,
-Deploying in support of operations in Feeders and Sinkers alike in the interest of maintaining lawful regional governments and protecting them from coups. Among these are the Osiris Defense Medal for support of the region Osiris which allowed the future of the region to be secure, The South Pacific Liberation Medal for assignment to The South Pacific during course of the Milograd coup in 2013 when more than 3,000 native nations were ejected from the region, and the Lazarus Liberation Medal for their role in Lazarus during the New Lazarene Order coup of 2015,
-Serving as a TITO Tactical Officer from January 2015 to August 2017,
OBSERVING that the regional civil service attributed to Woonsocket includes:
-An 11 month tenure as Minister of Immigration where Woonsocket sat on the Council of Nine and guided regional recruiting policy where they oversaw a population increase to an all-time regional population record for user created regions on November 17, 2011 with 2,200 nations,
-Being awarded the Legion of Merit for demonstrating an exemplary record of service to the Islands or the world and the Heart of the Islands trophy for nations who embody and exemplify goodwill,
-Serving as Delegate for 6 months where Woonsocket helped to set the standard for voting on every World Assembly proposal, something which is sought after by subsequent 10000 Islands Delegates to this day,
-Receiving 17 different immigration awards and various distinctions including the 10000 Islands Immigration Medal of Honor and having The Woonsocket Saffron Lighthouse immigration award named in their honor,
FURTHER ACKNOWLEDGING the diplomatic skill demonstrated by Woonsocket as Chief Executive which allowed for the creation of several treaties with important allies, such as The Rejected Realms, and cemented alliances with the 10000 Islands around the world,
NOTING that Woonsocket has held various other roles such as Senator of New Republica South where they were responsible for increasing political activity and has held the position of Regional Reserve Chairman where they provided groundbreaking incentives to nations wishing to join the 10000 Islands, which included their creation of an homesteading program,
IMPRESSED that, according to 10000 Islands regional scholars, the government of Woonsocket has sent 133,173 manual recruitment telegrams as a regional recruiter while recruiting a grand total of 4,669 recruits to the 10000 Islands,
WISHING to preserve such a legacy for the study of posterity,
HEREBY commends Woonsocket.
by Sargon Reman » Sun May 05, 2019 8:21 am
by Sargon Reman » Sun May 05, 2019 12:54 pm
by Sargon Reman » Wed May 08, 2019 9:38 am
by Ransium » Wed May 08, 2019 1:20 pm
Sargon Reman wrote:Are there any other suggested amendments?
by Sargon Reman » Thu May 09, 2019 7:06 am
by Ransium » Sun May 12, 2019 9:28 am
by Sargon Reman » Sun May 12, 2019 11:29 am
Alright, thank you for reviewing it. I figured there is still some grammar problems. I will take steps to address them.Ransium wrote:Yeah, I think it looks pretty good now. Might want to bring in a pendant for a nuts and bolts grammatical/clarity in writing read through but I think it's much better than the previous version.
by Republica JIM » Mon May 13, 2019 4:55 pm
Sargon Reman wrote:The Security Council,
RECOGNIZING that since its formation fifteen years ago, the nation of Woonsocket has contributed overwhelmingly to the 10000 Islands through civil service and militarily to the international community as a long time member of the Ten Thousand Islands Treaty Organization (TITO),
ACKNOWLEDGING that Woonsocket served with distinction in the role of Chief Executive and Founder of the 10000 Islands for nearly three years where they oversaw sizable regional development and demonstrated competent diplomatic skill which allowed for the creation of several treaties with important allies, such as The Rejected Realms, and cemented alliances with the 10000 Islands around the world,
AWARE that the military contributions imputed to Woonsocket are voluminous and include being a highly decorated defender in TITO for nearly a decade and having completed over 430 deployments,in this capacity they have been given the rank of TITO Knight Fleet Commander after serving as a TITO Tactical Officer for two years and have been decorated many times including with the Soldiers Medal, for dedication in military conduct, the Woonsocket Bronze Star, for Meritorious Service Medal, for consistent merited service, and the South America Defense Medal,
COGNIZANT that Woonsocket participated in 10 refound operations where founderless regions were restored once again to peace and tranquility, these include the refounding of USA, The Skeleton Army, Beyond the Sea, Australia, Natan Region, Animal House, Hogwarts, Urbanites, Greece and United States Congress,
PLEASED that Woonsocket deployed in support of operations in Feeders and Sinkers alike in the interest of maintaining lawful regional governments and protecting them from coups, among these are the Osiris Defense Medal for support of the region Osiris, The South Pacific Liberation Medal for assignment to The South Pacific during course of the Milograd coup in 2013 and the Lazarus Liberation Medal for their role in Lazarus during the coup of 2015,
OBSERVING that Woonsocket served an 11 month tenure as Minister of Immigration where they guided regional recruiting policy and oversaw a population increase to an all-time regional population record for user created regions on November 17, 2011 with 2,200 nations, including receiving 17 different immigration awards and various distinctions including the 10000 Islands Immigration Medal of Honor,
IMPRESSED that, according to 10000 Islands regional scholars, the government of Woonsocket has sent 133,173 manual recruitment telegrams as a regional recruiter while recruiting a grand total of 4,669 recruits to the 10000 Islands,
NOTING that Woonsocket was awarded the Legion of Merit for demonstrating an exemplary record of service to the Islands or the world and the Heart of the Islands trophy for nations who embody and exemplify goodwill,
FURTHER OBSERVING that while serving as Delegate for 6 months, Woonsocket, helped to set the standard for voting on every World Assembly proposal, something which is sought after by subsequent 10000 Islands Delegates to this day,
WISHING to celebrate and preserve this legacy for the international community and future generations,
HEREBY commends Woonsocket.
by Sargon Reman » Fri May 17, 2019 9:57 am
by Eumaeus » Fri May 17, 2019 10:42 am
Sargon Reman wrote:The Security Council,
RECOGNIZING that since its formation fifteen years ago, the nation of Woonsocket has contributed overwhelmingly to the 10000 Islands through civil service and to the international community through military service as a long time member of the Ten Thousand Islands Treaty Organization (TITO),
ACKNOWLEDGING that Woonsocket served with distinction in the role of Chief Executive and Founder of the 10000 Islands for nearly three years where they oversaw sizable regional development and demonstrated competent diplomatic skill which allowed for the creation of several treaties with important allies, such as The Rejected Realms, and cemented the alliances of the 10000 Islands with regions around the world,
AWARE that the military contributions imputed to Woonsocket are voluminous and include being a highly decorated defender in TITO for nearly a decade and having completed over 430 deployments; in this capacity they have been given the rank of TITO Knight Fleet Commander after serving as a TITO Tactical Officer for two years and have been decorated many times including with the Soldiers Medal, for dedication in military conduct, the Woonsocket Bronze Star, the Meritorious Service Medal, for consistent merited service, and the South America Defense Medal,
COGNIZANT that Woonsocket participated in 10 refound operations, in which founderless regions were restored once again to peace and tranquility, including the refounding of USA, The Skeleton Army, Beyond the Sea, Australia, Natan Region, Animal House, Hogwarts, Urbanites, Greece, and United States Congress,
PLEASED that Woonsocket deployed in support of operations in Feeders and Sinkers alike in the interest of maintaining lawful regional governments and protecting them from coups, including deployment to Osiris, for which they were awarded the Osiris Defense Medal, to The South Pacific during the Milograd coup in 2013, for which they were awarded The South Pacific Liberation Medal, and to Lazarus during the coup of 2015, for which they were awarded the Lazarus Liberation Medal,
OBSERVING that Woonsocket served an 11 month tenure as Minister of Immigration in the 10000 Islands, during which they guided regional recruiting policy and oversaw a population increase to an all-time regional population record for user created regions on November 17, 2011 with 2,200 nations, including receiving 17 different immigration awards and various distinctions including the 10000 Islands Immigration Medal of Honor,
IMPRESSED that, according to 10000 Islands regional scholars, the government of Woonsocket has sent 133,173 manual recruitment telegrams as a regional recruiter while recruiting a grand total of 4,669 recruits to the 10000 Islands,
NOTING that Woonsocket was awarded the Legion of Merit for demonstrating an exemplary record of service to the Islands or the world and the Heart of the Islands trophy for nations who embody and exemplify goodwill,
FURTHER OBSERVING that while serving as Delegate for 6 months, Woonsocket helped to set the standard for voting on every World Assembly proposal, something which is sought after by subsequent 10000 Islands Delegates to this day,
WISHING to celebrate and preserve this legacy for the international community and future generations,
HEREBY commends Woonsocket.
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