[DEFEATED] Protecting Personal Privacy

[Kenmoria]

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(OOC: If this is drafted again, forming yet another step in this marathon of a proposal drafting process, then both of your criticisms will be addressed. Thank you for pointing out flaws in the legislation, as this means that Marxist Germany and I can work to improve it.)

[PotatoFarmers]

Considering the arguments with regards to the resolution at hand, the Committee of WA Affairs has came up with an official statement with regards to the resolution. Granted, the list of issues highlighted may not be exhaustive, however, PotatoFarmers would like to deliver its opinion on the matter.
PotatoFarmers would like to reiterate that its stand may change if the delegates in WA are able to adequately convince PotatoFarmers otherwise, and that our views should only be taken as reference.

[Kenmoria]

Considering the arguments with regards to the resolution at hand, the Committee of WA Affairs has came up with an official statement with regards to the resolution. Granted, the list of issues highlighted may not be exhaustive, however, PotatoFarmers would like to deliver its opinion on the matter.
PotatoFarmers would like to reiterate that its stand may change if the delegates in WA are able to adequately convince PotatoFarmers otherwise, and that our views should only be taken as reference.

(OOC: Points 2, 3 and 4 have been mentioned by others, and as such they will hopefully be fixed in a possible future variant. Point 1 is too open to interpretation however, since a totalitariah government may view everyone as a security risk. In addition, point 5 is covered by good-faith and reasonable nation theory.)

[Marxist Germany]

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"Your concerns will be dealt with in the next version of this proposal, thank you for your criticisms."

[West Carlisten]

"Your concerns will be dealt with in the next version of this proposal, thank you for your criticisms."

Thank you. We would be happy if we could be of assistance with writing a better draft.