Iciaros wrote:OOC: Did someone say 'grammar nazi'?
I don't see any major issues, but I'll just note two things:Praising the spirit of General Assembly Resolution #66 "Endangered Species Protection” and convinced that multitudes of species have been saved from extinction due to it,
I've only ever seen 'multitude' used in the singular form, ie 'a multitude of'. This doesn't seem to be inaccurate, though, so there's no problem here.Finding other important terms in the resolution to be used ambiguously
I feel like the phrasing of this part could be tightened up a little? I believe it's grammatically correct, but while reading it I was thrown off towards the end. I'm not entirely sure why - 'Finding [something] to be [a certain way]' is an accepted phrase - but I think it could possibly be because there are too many words between 'finding' and 'to be' that I didn't immediately interpret this part as invoking the phrase, and instead read 'to be' as an indicator of future tense, or a standalone infinitive phrase. Something like 'finding other important terms have been used ambiguously' might be better, imo.Aware that the resolution focuses on the prevention of further harm to endangered species, while only mentioning potential actions to actively increases species population numbers in the direst circumstances,
This is the only objective error I can find.
That's all!
Thank you for the careful read. I have made your two suggested changed. Any further thoughts or feedback?