Maowi wrote:Kenmoria wrote:“I would maybe consider adding ‘or exacerbated by’ after ‘caused’ in clause 3. Other than that, this has my full support.”
"Fixed, ambassador, thank you for pointing that out."
OOC: I would just like to double check whether the strength is right, but other than that I would tentatively say that this could be ready for submission pretty soon...
(OOC: The strength seems fine. A mild strength proposal could have encouraging language, but it could also affect a small policy area. As solitary confinement is only a small facet of criminal justice, the proposal makes sense as mild.)