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N.B. This account is not a World Assembly member. That would be Gerfaanlich. If this condemn makes sense, I'd like to author it as this account, so I will be temporarily leaving the WA as Gerfaanlich and joining as The Macabees when/if the time comes around. Is this okay? If not, I get it, I'm just asking as a relative novice in this area.


CURRENT DRAFT

The Security Council,

NOTING that United World Order, also known as the Fourth Reich and the Ordenite Reich, is a totalitarian state built on the Nazi ideology.

HIGHLIGHTING United World Order's use of mass forced labor based on ideological and racial grounds in Krasnova. Despite a shortlived ejection of United World Order from the country, slavery has been re-instated since Krasnova's reoccupation by the Reich. An estimated 100-200 million Krasnovans are currently held as forced laborers.

DISMAYED with the practice of imprisoning in concentration camps and executing enemies on political, racial, and ideological grounds on the United World Order mainland. There are an estimated 20–30 million Ordenites living in concentration camps on the mainland, apart from another 70–100 million living as forced labor. Furthermore, an average of 10,000 political prisoners are executed each year.

SHOCKED by United World Order's crimes against humanity and mass murder in South Panooly and Krasnova, including,

• The death of 45 million indigenous Plánol people during the Ordenite occupation of South Panooly and the War of Panooly Reunification.
• 50-100 million Krasnovan deaths as part of an ongoing systemic program of racial and ideological cleansing.

KNOWING United World Order's allegiance to and aid of The Kraven Corporation, noted as a threat to the international order by the World Assembly under SCR #61 "Condemn the Kraven Corporation" in 2011. Such activities include,

• Supporting The Kraven Reich's inhumane occupations of several innocent states in Gholgoth, including large swaths of Jagada and Vetalia.
• Allowing any death ship belonging to The Kraven Reich to dock at its ports in Greater Dienstad.

AGHAST at the butchering of thousands of defenseless prisoners of war after an escape attempt from Stalag 487B during the Second Krasnovan War.

APALLED by the illegal arrest and perpetual imprisonment of foreign ambassadorial staff, including the staffs of Varessa and Osea 767 after the First Krasnovan War. Furthermore, these prisoners have not received trials or been the subject of due process.

STUNNED by the forced removal of 700 million Scythians from their historic homeland in the Ordenite province of Deutsche Scythia, a humanitarian crisis abated only by the subsidized settlement of the majority of Scythian refugees by The Macabees, commended by the World Assembly under SCR #237 "Commend The Macabees" in 2017.

CONCLUDING that United World Order represents the opposite of international peace, stability, and order, all tenets nurtured and protected by the World Assembly.

HEREBY condemns United World Order.

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Any old drafts will be saved. Otherwise, edits are corrections of spelling.

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Wow, I can honestly say I very much like the way this is written. Its very thorough and very well put together. This one being an RP based condemnation is awesome, and the fact is we need more of them. Full support

Full support 10/10

Just some explanation of the edits:

• UWO corrected me on the estimated number of people in concentration camps on his mainland.
• Corrected to ejection. Forgot what exactly I had there, but it was the wrong tense of the same word.
• Corrected the nation link from Yuroslav to Osea 767, who also uses Yuroslav but in an IC sense versus actual name of the account.

Edit: Also, thank you everyone who comments. Any deficiencies or issues, let me know and I will have those corrected.

Also, just want to reiterate the issue with The Macabees not being in the WA. I can have it join the WA, but it would be temporary. Is this okay?

I also have a puppet in the WA which I can use, but I would prefer to use The Macabees.

Do we get to fuck em up?

Punching Nazis is not enough, not by a long shot...

The Macabees wrote:Just some explanation of the edits:

• UWO corrected me on the estimated number of people in concentration camps on his mainland.
• Corrected to ejection. Forgot what exactly I had there, but it was the wrong tense of the same word.
• Corrected the nation link from Yuroslav to Osea 767, who also uses Yuroslav but in an IC sense versus actual name of the account.

Edit: Also, thank you everyone who comments. Any deficiencies or issues, let me know and I will have those corrected.

Also, just want to reiterate the issue with The Macabees not being in the WA. I can have it join the WA, but it would be temporary. Is this okay?

I also have a puppet in the WA which I can use, but I would prefer to use The Macabees.

You can use whatever nation you want to submit it, that's up to the author not the peanut gallery . Also, just want to check and make sure. Are you under the 5,000 character limit of WA proposals? The character limit includes spaces and bbcode, so you need the total character count.

You'll have my vote! I'm always happy to see resolutions to condemn fascist and communist regions!

Kuriko wrote:You can use whatever nation you want to submit it, that's up to the author not the peanut gallery . Also, just want to check and make sure. Are you under the 5,000 character limit of WA proposals? The character limit includes spaces and bbcode, so you need the total character count.

I knew I was forgetting something!

Luckily, I believe I am. 2,854 characters, if I'm not mistaken.

The Macabees wrote:

Kuriko wrote:You can use whatever nation you want to submit it, that's up to the author not the peanut gallery . Also, just want to check and make sure. Are you under the 5,000 character limit of WA proposals? The character limit includes spaces and bbcode, so you need the total character count.

I knew I was forgetting something!

Luckily, I believe I am. 2,854 characters, if I'm not mistaken.

Just re-read, the opening of your proposal should say "The Security Coincil," or something similar. It needs to address the SC or WA to be ruled legal

Will this become an RP?

I have to say, this is a SC proposal that I can get behind! The grammar was incredible, and lots of supporting details.

Kuriko wrote:Just re-read, the opening of your proposal should say "The Security Coincil," or something similar. It needs to address the SC or WA to be ruled legal

Oops, good catch! Added it.

New yugoslavaia wrote:Will this become an RP?

United World Order will likely respond ICly.

Support!

New yugoslavaia wrote:Will this become an RP?

I will be responding to it through a news post but it will also definitely factor into IC events and such present and future.

United World Order wrote:

New yugoslavaia wrote:Will this become an RP?

I will be responding to it through a news post but it will also definitely factor into IC events and such present and future.

Prepare to experience worse then just a few punchs...

The Kraven Corporation wrote:Just to add a couple of things from my end, The Kraven Reich is also supporting The Ordenite Reich, by providing arms and materials, though I'm not sure how well known this would be and the reference to Kraven slave ships, its proper term would be "Death Ships" as I don't consider myself a Slaver in the same vein as other slaving nations such as the Ordenite Reich or Scandinvan for example, I understand though that your condemnation may not differentiate between the two, so that's fine

Thanks!

re: Death Ships, I'll quickly change it to that. I was going to say I won't distinguish for the proposal, but your condemnation doesn't mention slavery so there's no precedent there. I'll change to Death Ships here.

re: Your supplying of UWO, unfortunately The Golden Throne would be a hypocrite for criticizing another state for that. Before the Second Krasnovan War, we were supplying the Ordenite vassal state there with tanks and other weapons. Regional politics is complicated, what can I say.

Submitted: https://www.nationstates.net/page=UN_vi ... 1545000703

The Macabees wrote:Submitted: https://www.nationstates.net/page=UN_vi ... 1545000703

o.o
good luck ^.^
I'd support too

Strong support! Interesting that RP can have implications in the Security Council.

The Macabees wrote:Submitted: https://www.nationstates.net/page=UN_vi ... 1545000703

Good luck Macabees!

My vote will depend on the majority vote in my region, but this is a very well written proposal and I've approved it. Good luck!

The proposal is very well-written, and I have given it my approval. I hope to see it come up for vote.

Thank you guys!

And I want to apologize, I sent out about 10 TGs without having properly marked them as WA campaigns and am now fairly suffering the consequences of this.