[DEFEATED] Repeal: Liberate Eternal Scholars

[Crazy girl]

Repeal: "Liberate Eternal Scholars"
Category: Repeal | Target: SC #203 | Proposed By: Sygian II

Noting that the goal of Security Council Resolution #203 “Liberate Eternal Scholars” was to remove a hidden password placed by invading forces from Nazi Europa with the intention of destroying the peaceful region of Eternal Scholars,


Recognizing that all of the Nazi forces withdrew from Eternal Scholars once Security Council Resolution #203 passed,


Pleased that the liberation has achieved its purpose and the hidden password placed by Nazi Europa no longer exists,


Satisfied that Eternal Scholars has now been returned to the natives and is prospering peacefully once again under the leadership and protection of a native delegate,


Confident that the liberation of Security Council Resolution #203 is no longer needed,


Hereby repeals Security Council Resolution #203 “Liberate Eternal Scholars”.


Co-Authored by [nation=short]The Great Wall of Mexico[/nation]

Well this is my first attempt at authoring an SC proposal, and I'm going to wait for NSA/Kaboom to review it. There's probably much more that could be added, so I'm open to any suggestions.

tl;dr I am repealing it because it's no longer needed and the Nazis went bye bye after we liberated

EDIT 1: Added punctuation and [nation=short] coding.
EDIT 2: Changed words around (see Tinhampton's suggestion)
EDIT 3: Removed link to Nazi Europa

[Tinhampton]

Alexander Smith, Tinhamptonian Delegate-Ambassador to the World Assembly: "You don't need to talk about "Nazi forces from Nazi Europa" - just "forces from Nazi Europa" would do - after all, the forces from NE have to be Nazi. Also, it should be "concluding", not "concludes" - or perhaps even "confident" - in the penultimate section. Otherwise, this is quite good work."

[Kaboomlandia]

Repeal: "Liberate Eternal Scholars"
Category: Repeal | Target: SC #203 | Proposed By: Sygian II

Noting that the goal of Security Council Resolution #203 “Liberate Eternal Scholars” was to remove a hidden password placed by Nazi forces from Nazi Europa with the intention of destroying the peaceful region of Eternal Scholars,

Recognizing that all of the Nazi forces withdrew from Eternal Scholars once Security Council Resolution #203 passed,

Pleased that the liberation has achieved its purpose and the hidden password placed by Nazi Europa no longer exists,

Satisfied that Eternal Scholars has now been returned to the natives and is prospering peacefully once again under the leadership and protection of a native delegate,

Concludes that the liberation of Security Council Resolution #203 is no longer needed,

Hereby repeals Security Council Resolution #203 “Liberate Eternal Scholars”.

Co-Authored by [nation=short]The Great Wall of Mexico[/nation]

All I did was add some punctuation, bunch up the spacing between clauses and add [nation] coding to the co-author credit. You'll want to leave it as [nation=short] so that it shows up properly after submission.

Otherwise, looks well-written. I'm in support.

[Sygian II]

Neat, I'll fix that right away.

[Bhang Bhang Duc]

Very good first attempt Sygian! Can't see anything to add or change beyond that already suggested.

Is there native support for the removal of the liberation?

[Sygian II]

Very good first attempt Sygian! Can't see anything to add or change beyond that already suggested.

Is there native support for the removal of the liberation?

Thank you, BBD.

As for the native support, the current native delegate voiced here that they are in full support of it. I TGed him just to confirm that since the previous one didn't make it, if it was alright that I attempted a repeal. Haven't heard back yet.

[Consular]

I would suggest not including a direct link to Nazi Europa, because I dislike how such links almost work as advertisements.

[Sygian II]

I would suggest not including a direct link to Nazi Europa, because I dislike how such links almost work as advertisements.

Completely understandable, I don't see why I didn't think of that xD

Fixed

[Consular]

Lovely, thank you.

Aside from that I think this is fine and would vote in support.

[We Are Not the NSA]

Wasn't going to post anything until I got back to my laptop, since I hate using bbcode with a touch screen, but I have no edits or suggestions so that won't be necessary. It's a well written draft, good job guys.

[Sygian II]

Wasn't going to post anything until I got back to my laptop, since I hate using bbcode with a touch screen, but I have no edits or suggestions so that won't be necessary. It's a well written draft, good job guys.

Thank you, NSA. I'll submit this very soon.

[Altos]

Altos, WA delegate for Eternal Scholars, stopping by. I agree with this resolution on the condition of one question: if the resolution is repealed, and I currently do not have enough influence to create a new password (from either being ejected by Nazis or the WA resolution on passwords) would I be able to set a password once the resolution passes?

Best of wishes for the safety and security of Eternal Scholars.

[Kaboomlandia]

Altos, WA delegate for Eternal Scholars, stopping by. I agree with this resolution on the condition of one question: if the resolution is repealed, and I currently do not have enough influence to create a new password (from either being ejected by Nazis or the WA resolution on passwords) would I be able to set a password once the resolution passes?

You still need the requisite influence to set the password if the repeal passes, but removing the liberation is just the step that allows you to set one later.

[Sygian II]

I have submitted the repeal. You may find it here.

[Altos]

I have submitted the repeal. You may find it here.

Excellent!

[Solorni]

I support this

[Adytus]

"Good luck, Ambassador. You have my support, and the likely support of Osiris!"

[Sygian II]

"Good luck, Ambassador. You have my support, and the likely support of Osiris!"

I support this

Thank you both!

[Noahs Second Country]

What?!
I was just about to submit my proposal

[Bhang Bhang Duc]

And you're now at quorum Sygian. Congratulations - I'll be recommending full support to our Delegate.

[Sygian II]

And you're now at quorum Sygian. Congratulations - I'll be recommending full support to our Delegate.

Thanks BBD!

[Tinhampton]

What?!
I was just about to submit my proposal

You had AT LEAST a couple of weeks to steal Syg's thunder.

[Sygian II]

What?!
I was just about to submit my proposal

If this does not pass, I'd be more than happy to work with you in drafting a fresh one from the start.

[Tinhampton]

The Self-Administrative City of Tinhampton

WA Delegate for the Federation of Fictitious States
Alexander Smith - Tinhamptonian Delegate-Ambassador to the World Assembly
Opinion of the Federation's WA Delegate (SC #1)
This comment best experienced on 1366 x 768. Or, for that matter, least worst experienced on 1366 x 768. Yes, I know that my flag is the wrong proportions. T&C's apply. You will not own the car.

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In accordance with general policy on Security Council resolutions, Tinhampton has approved this proposal. In addition, Delegate-Ambassador Smith (in lieu of any resolutions passed by The Other Chamber of the World Assembly, especially the one hundred and twenty-second one) has used his common sense to analyse this resolution. He has determined that Tinhampton - in their status as a World Assembly Delegate with 8 votes as of the time of writing - should vote FOR the repeal of "Liberate Eternal Scholars". These were the reasons that D-A Smith gave:

Whilst it would not be representative of this Security Council, of this Federation or of Tinhampton to condemn Nazism as an ideology, I believe that it is in the best interests of all three to repeal a resolution passed when the Eternal Scholars were still under Nazi control. Since then, as stated in the resolution, the reclamation of the Eternal Scholars by the natives, and the removal of any invader threat, has nullified the need for a liberation.

Tinhampton is voting for this resolution, and also strongly urge other members of the Federation's Assembly of Nations to vote for it. However, this opinion is not binding, and Tinhampton cannot and will not throw you into the flames of the Rejected Realms for failing to vote the same way as them.

[The Derpy Democratic Republic Of Herp]

"Why not? I vote for."- Silver Zephyr