Sciongrad wrote:States of Glory WA Office wrote:Neville: Since when is five clauses out of thirteen half?
"It is really not funny and it is also probably the reason your resolution will fail. I would gently encourage you to worry less about jokes and more about legislating. This is fundamentally a good idea ruined by a bad joke (and also a really unfortunate non-mandatory clause)."
OOC: In case you haven't noticed, I've already removed all the joke clauses from my other drafts and intend to do the same for this one.