Maowi wrote:"This is something to which we would be delighted to lend our support. My only query is about the rather odd placement of clause 5, which I believe would make a lot more sense directly after clause 2, but other than that practical non-issue I wish you the best of luck."
Kenmoria wrote:“I think that clause 7 should have a restriction for those who have been convicted of serious crimes, since these individuals ought to have restrictions on employment and housing on the basis of safety.”
Walter the Wary Walrus happily bellowed
OROOOO OROH OROOH OROH OROOOOO
His translator, an old, grey haired man, said
We appreciate the comments! We'll take these into account and revise the draft. Obviously it has sat dormant for some time, and adjustments should be made.