[PASSED] Condemn The Dourian Embassy

[Crazy girl]

On n'est jamais servi si bien que par soi-même. - Charles-Guillaume Étienne

Condemn The Dourian Embassy

Category: Condemnation | Nominee: The Dourian Embassy | Proposed By: SkyDip

The Security Council,

PREFACING the arguments herein with the adeptly-labeled polarizing nature of The Dourian Embassy, but firmly believing that The Dourian Embassy has caused much more strife and ill-will in the world than positive effects,

BELIEVING that through multiple repeals of World Assembly statutes, The Dourian Embassy has impressed a hard-line ideology of National Sovereignty upon the General Assembly that fundamentally undermines the purpose and goals of the World Assembly,

ENUMERATING some repeals authored by The Dourian Embassy and their effects:

• GAR#11, Repeal "The Right to a Fair Trial" in which The Dourian Embassy summarily struck down WA legislation guaranteeing WA member nations an essential judicial right
• GAR#225, Repeal "Assitance Givers Protection" wherein The Dourian Embassy argues on the basis of "poor writing" and "unnecessarily [tying] the hands of nations," further promoting a National Sovereignty theory and practice onto the World Assembly
• GAR#269, Repeal "Against Corruption," perhaps the most noticeable repeal to date by The Dourian Embassy, which sought to prevent, on a WA scale, corruption in government

NOTING that The Dourian Embassy orchestrated a massive coup in Osiris after a new Delegate was lawfully elected, and went on to forcibly eject more than 2,000 nations from the region without proper cause, as well as suppress the free speech of the native community,

FURTHER NOTING that during this coup, The Dourian Embassy labeled Osiris a protectorate of Gatesville, a noted anti-World Assembly region bent on the destruction of these councils,

DISTURBED by the admissions of The Dourian Embassy that the coup of Osiris was done for simple amusement and a desire to cause long-term damage to the region,

DENOUNCING The Dourian Embassy and their work "Liberate St Abbaddon," in which The Dourian Embassy underhandedly used an anonymous satellite nation to speed an unnecessary proposal through the Security Council with the intent to garner swift defender sympathies and votes,

DISTRAUGHT that "Liberate St Abbaddon" was a further ruse, proposed only to make a mockery of this esteemed council and those partaking in it in coordination with those occupying St Abbaddon at the time,

REVILING the manner in which The Dourian Embassy underhandedly clogged the Security Council queue with proposals that were never meant to be taken seriously, and then pulled said proposals so as to immediately send "Repeal "Liberate St Abbaddon"" to vote, causing many Delegates to wrongly cast their votes,

AFFIRMING that The Dourian Embassy has shown multiple facets of duplicity, extremism, and casual disregard for the World Assembly and its guiding principles,

HEREBY CONDEMNS The Dourian Embassy

[Unibot III]

NOTING that The Dourian Embassy orchestrated a massive coup in Osiris after a new Delegate was elected in Osiris, and went on to forcibly eject more than 2,000 nations from the region without proper cause and suppress free speech of the native community,

Watch your grammar.

I think I will support this draft. The time is right.

[SkyDip]

NOTING that The Dourian Embassy orchestrated a massive coup in Osiris after a new Delegate was elected in Osiris, and went on to forcibly eject more than 2,000 nations from the region without proper cause and suppress free speech of the native community,

Watch your grammar.

I think I will support this draft. The time is right.

Read:

went on to A) forcibly eject more than 2,000 nations from the region without proper cause and B) suppress free speech of the native community,

EDIT: I get what you're saying, though. Reads a bit oddly. I'll change it.

[Ikania]

Fully backed by me.

[SkyDip]

Fully backed by me.

Saweet.

[Ramaeus]

You think you're the only one who can properly condemn Douria? Eh... you're probably right about that.

[SkyDip]

You think you're the only one who can properly condemn Douria? Eh... you're probably right about that.

You say "think" as if I'm uncertain about the matter.

[Qeno]

The twelve year old matriarch picks up a stack of papers and straightens it with the edge of the paper stack hitting the solid wooden desk then looks at the Ambassador from Skydip "Although the WA has no effect on my homeland one bit I shall admit that The Dourian Embassy has been a wonderful leader over the months Qeno has been in the Earth World Assembly. I see no reason in condemning the nation since most of what is said in those repeals is that the ambassador hopes for a better proposal of the kind the ambassador repeals."

[SkyDip]

The twelve year old matriarch picks up a stack of papers and straightens it with the edge of the paper stack hitting the solid wooden desk then looks at the Ambassador from Skydip "Although the WA has no effect on my homeland one bit I shall admit that The Dourian Embassy has been a wonderful leader over the months Qeno has been in the Earth World Assembly. I see no reason in condemning the nation since most of what is said in those repeals is that the ambassador hopes for a better proposal of the kind the ambassador repeals."

"It is good to know couping Osiris and ejecting 2,000 nations rings hollow with your Delegation," retorted Ambassador Greyjoy, waving his hand nonchalantly at the ambassador he had never seen before.

[Qeno]

The twelve year old matriarch picks up a stack of papers and straightens it with the edge of the paper stack hitting the solid wooden desk then looks at the Ambassador from Skydip "Although the WA has no effect on my homeland one bit I shall admit that The Dourian Embassy has been a wonderful leader over the months Qeno has been in the Earth World Assembly. I see no reason in condemning the nation since most of what is said in those repeals is that the ambassador hopes for a better proposal of the kind the ambassador repeals."

"It is good to know couping Osiris and ejecting 2,000 nations rings hollow with your Delegation," retorted Ambassador Greyjoy, waving his hand nonchalantly at the ambassador he had never seen before.

"Just saying" Matriarch Xeena said with a shrug and she looked at the proposal again. "I have known several regions in the World Assembly that suppress free speech and one of them was invaded by The Black Riders then there was another who ejected all their nations as well. Well anyway back to the point, Reading back to the repeals if given more time the Dourian Embassy should not be condemned in my opinion and quite possibly my region's" She soon added.

[SkyDip]

"It is good to know couping Osiris and ejecting 2,000 nations rings hollow with your Delegation," retorted Ambassador Greyjoy, waving his hand nonchalantly at the ambassador he had never seen before.

"Just saying" Matriarch Xeena said with a shrug and she looked at the proposal again. "I have known several regions in the World Assembly that suppress free speech and one of them was invaded by The Black Riders then there was another who ejected all their nations as well. Well anyway back to the point, Reading back to the repeals if given more time the Dourian Embassy should not be condemned in my opinion and quite possibly my region's" She soon added.

"Your region of 33 nations containing a Delegate with six endorsements is hereby noted and disregarded for all intents and purposes," scoffed Elias. "Leadership is a quality often displayed by the maniacal - polarizing bodies attract as much as they repel. To argue that because suppression of free speech is not rare means we ignore it is simply ignorant of the world outside your own sphere."

[SkyDip]

Edited to fix some inaccuracies that were pointed out to me. Specifically, these parts:

DENOUNCING The Dourian Embassy and their work "Liberate St Abbaddon," in which The Dourian Embassy underhandedly used an anonymous satellite nation to speed an unnecessary proposal through the Security Council with the intent to garner swift defender sympathies and votes,

CRITICIZING that "Liberate St Abbaddon" was a further rouse, proposed only to make a mockery of this esteemed council and those partaking in it in coordination with those occupying St Abbaddon at the time,

REVILING the manner in which The Dourian Embassy underhandedly clogged the Security Council queue with proposals that were never meant to be taken seriously, and then pulled said proposals so as to immediately send "Repeal "Liberate St Abbaddon"" to vote, causing many Delegates to misplace their votes,

[Applebania]

Ruse, not Rouse.

[Goddess Relief Office]

BELIEVING that through multiple repeals of World Assembly statutes, The Dourian Embassy has impressed a hard-line National Sovereignty ideology upon the General Assembly in particular, an ideology that fundamentally undermines the purpose and goals of the World Assembly,

What do you think about this instead: "...ideology upon the General Assembly that fundamentally undermines..."? You can save a few words that way. Also for discussion~ "National Sovreignty" or "Sovereigntist"?

ENUMERATING some repeals authored by The Dourian Embassy and their effects, as highlighted by:

"Enumerating some...and their effects" conveys the same meaning as "as highlighted by". I think you could just end the sentence with "and their effects:".

CRITICIZING that "Liberate St Abbaddon" was a further rouse, proposed only to make a mockery of this esteemed council and those partaking in it in coordination with those occupying St Abbaddon at the time,

"Criticizing" sounds funny here. Consider replacing with a different verb.

DENOUNCING The Dourian Embassy and their work "Liberate St Abbaddon," in which The Dourian Embassy underhandedly used an anonymous satellite nation to speed an unnecessary proposal through the Security Council with the intent to garner swift defender sympathies and votes,

"Their" or "its"? (I'm not so sure myself, tbh)

Overall, a very well written piece.

Regards,
~GRO~

[SkyDip]

Ruse, not Rouse.

Correct, thank you.

[The Sapientia]

Since SkyDip wrote it, it's got to be true so it has my full support. Because my support counts.

[SkyDip]

What do you think about this instead: "...ideology upon the General Assembly that fundamentally undermines..."? You can save a few words that way. Also for discussion~ "National Sovreignty" or "Sovereigntist"?

Changed. Yeah, I went back and forth on that one, too. I've really got no preference.

"Enumerating some...and their effects" conveys the same meaning as "as highlighted by". I think you could just end the sentence with "and their effects:".

Yup again. Changed.

"Criticizing" sounds funny here. Consider replacing with a different verb.

We'll go with distraught for now.

"Their" or "its"? (I'm not so sure myself, tbh)

Their, me thinks.

Overall, a very well written piece.

Regards,
~GRO~

Thank you for the suggestions and comments.

[Chester Pearson]

Do eet!!!

[SkyDip]

Edited slightly.

REVILING the manner in which The Dourian Embassy underhandedly clogged the Security Council queue with proposals that were never meant to be taken seriously, and then pulled said proposals so as to immediately send "Repeal "Liberate St Abbaddon"" to vote, causing many Delegates to misplace wrongly cast their votes,

[Chester Pearson]

Edited slightly.

REVILING the manner in which The Dourian Embassy underhandedly clogged the Security Council queue with proposals that were never meant to be taken seriously, and then pulled said proposals so as to immediately send "Repeal "Liberate St Abbaddon"" to vote, causing many Delegates to misplace wrongly cast their votes,

I liked it better before.

As for that clause, I am not so sure about it. That was brilliant on the part of Douria. That kind of clause is best reserved for a commend.

Just my two cents.

[Mallorea and Riva]

Opposed. There is a place for NatSovs in the WA and this Condemnation's statements to the contrary are the cause of my opposition.

[SkyDip]

Opposed. There is a place for NatSovs in the WA and this Condemnation's statements to the contrary are the cause of my opposition.

Noted, though our Delegation would disagree that this Condemnation implies "there is [no] place for NatSovs in the WA," but simply that the ideology is counterintuitive to the guiding principles of the WA.

That being said, if anyone has any more thoughts, I am willing to entertain them, though I rather like this composition as of now.

[Venico]

I don't like that this implies the ideology of NatSov being condemnable O.o Or at least repealing poor legislation.

[Draica]

Deleted.

[Venico]

Ummm *glances at the title "Priest of Raider Unity* yeah I totally hate religious people

In all seriousness though (and I don't see this as on topic but oh whale) I'm a practicing catholic and haven't heard any gripe about that from raiders.